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Chapter 163

🕑 Added 2020-12-31 04:17:36 +0000 UTC

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Israel O

I see what you mean. I think Felix will reach a level of competency soon when it will no longer matter. I think it’s really hard to create tension and it takes experience figuring your pacing as a author. You are essentially creating a problem and you have to solve the problem without been all-powerful author perspective. The difficulty is increased because it is a web novel.

Andrew

Thank you!

Gremory

I don’t know if you ever read these comments Neca, but I really hope you slow down on the level of Deus Ex Machima. It can be fun, used sparingly, but constantly feeling like there is no way in hell that the MC should survive the situation he is in is starting to be a drag. Probably just me, others seem to enjoy, either way good luck. Maybe I’ll drop some cash and see how the story is again in a few months.

Sand Bear

Why the monsters gotta be so mean :(

Imran

Thanks!

RedTortoise

Thanks for the Chapter!


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