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Chapter 123

🕑 Added 2020-09-30 03:44:59 +0000 UTC

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Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Oh gosh thanks! I try very hard to describe without going too far, so this is awesome to hear.

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Imran with the saves. Yes, that should have been in italics. I write in a dumb way, transferring from program to program for reasons and sometimes the italics or bold bits are reset. I'll fix that one. The other part, Felix is referring to Evie as a believer in the old gods. Not the Pathless (the god of the Inquisition and of the Heirocracy as a whole). I'll reread this and think about how I can make that clearer. Thanks!

Imran

Thanks! Looks like Felix is about to get make some progress on his "Forgotten Gods" quest. Hopefully he doesn't mention that the Gods are actually chained up and being tortured and not sleeping. Not typos, but, >It's her Spirit I'm hearing? For some reason, Felix felt an unshakable certainty in that. The first part is internal dialogue, so it should be italicized, right? The part where Evie says the Hierophant banned gatherings like these and Felix asks that he though she was a believer and she says "I am. But..." seems kinda odd. I thought she didn't care for the Inquisition & their religion.

Sofie

Thanks for the chapter!โค๏ธ Youโ€™re so good with words and setting the mood! And excellent at describing things without getting to long winded. Keep up the good work!๐Ÿ˜

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter!

Vessilia was invited here, too. Since she's supposed to be followed by the assassin/spy woman, this might lead the guild and inquisition right on top of these folks. Interesting times ahead.

Andrew

Thank you!

Alex R

Either Zara or Caerwin or both is going to be a high priestess or the like.


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