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Chapter 113

🕑 Added 2020-09-11 02:57:54 +0000 UTC

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fuzzywuzzy69

Me thinks the guilders and or inquisition are hiding something, perhaps incompetence, perhaps to steal resources in the fog lands while everyone else is afraid and stuck in haarwatch hmmm ๐Ÿ‘

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

One of my efforts with the lore and world building of this story is to be subtle. Hinting and suggestion does as much, if not more work than stating everything outright. Hopefully I'm doing a good job of that, as well as providing some satisfactory answers here and there.

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

Correct in both counts. Changes made. Thanks Imran!

Imran

Thanks! "peerless father" Did you mean something like "peerless-among-nobility"? Because if it's a reference to his strength in general, there are ~19 like him or stronger. "If only I had another cipher-script!" Is this is supposed to be italicized? Like the other instances of internal dialogue.

Sofie

Thank you!โค

Grevis165

Things are indeed brewing beneath the surface... Interesting comment by vessilia, the pathless very well could have expelled the gods, or written history to suit its own narrative. The winners do write the history books after all.

Andrew

Thank you!


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