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Chapter Ninety Eight - 098

🕑 Added 2020-08-19 04:03:33 +0000 UTC

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Grevis165

This was intense! Action great as always. Nice touch with the couple being scared as he adjusted his cowl in the house and seeing his hands :-)

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

While scientifically that is correct, I've noted Felix's eyes are blue which is seen as a cold color (blue, purple, etc) as oppose to a warm color (yellow, red, orange). That's all I mean here.

Justin

What color did you imagine? :) "Eyes like cold stars flared in its darkness, " At first I thought a dim blue, but then remembered they were cold and would of course have to be red, infrared, or lower.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter!

Andrew

Thank you!

Nicoli Gonnella (Necariin)

No wings. The Guilder saw him in bad lighting and could not distinguish him from Pit. I'll go over it again tomorrow and see if I can clear that up.

Kapelteta

So he has wings now too or was that him merging with pit? As far as the smaller chapters go I think its fine. These last few have been pretty action heavy tho, and I think the real test of it will be how a few world building, character building, and/or political chapters back to back will go.


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