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Next steps + NTR? + fixes + NTRS?

🕑 Added 2025-08-20 17:59:49 +0000 UTC

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IceySea

In my opinion the main appeal of this story is the ambiguity and it seems like it is also what you would like to keep as the primary theme regardless of whether you branch into different routes. I am of the opinion that a conversation between the MC and Emily would be good for the story. Even just to make Emily aware of the emotions that these events are causing in the MC (Where he finds it hot but also has conflicting thoughts about whether he really wants it to continue). This conversation in my mind does not need to have a clear conclusion (unless you want to branch the story in which case this is where you could do so), it could just be used to add a little more NTS to the story considering you want it to primarily be NTRS where currently it leans more NTR.

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And I also wanna echo others opinion that multiple routes can be a bad idea. It dilutes your attention and effort because you need to write many routes. As a player, I’m feeling I’m missing some content by going through only one route, and if I play both, I’m not sure which is the canon.

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Ambiguity is the key. Once a desire is achieved, it disappears. Confrontation, to me, is a bad idea. A confrontation puts an end to the story. And try to think of more interactions between the MC and Michael, which is more fun than ones between MC and Emily, because it’s more subtle and suggestive.


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