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Harry Potter and the Second Chance - Chapter 74 - The Perfect Evening

🕑 Added 2025-06-23 20:34:39 +0000 UTC

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Paraskevas Psarakis

yeah,this feels weird it seems Harry has made up his mind so its kinda scummy from Hermione,if this was written more with Harry struggling with his feelings for both characters it could potentially work better.

gigamans

... I don't really understand why this three way relationship is being written like this. It's so grossly manipulative towards Harry. At least for me, this is not coming across the way you think it is. Like, just talk to Harry. It's not shown but Hermione is basically fooling around with Fleur for weeks at this point, to the point it's obvious to someone like Daphne (and she's dropping those hints in class, really great for Harry). And now they're pulling whatever this is, and Harry is the one feeling guilty? Hermione is literally cheating on him?! I'm sorry, I don't get this. It is ruining an otherwise great story. And the way you've written Harry all of this probably won't ever bother him, and it probably really should. Both Hermione and Fleur suck for what they're doing here, Jesus.


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