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The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)

🕑 Added 2021-01-27 20:55:34 +0000 UTC
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)

Comments

I dunno, I kind of wonder if she's not the one who becomes a succubus, at least at first :)

Surody

Yea, it sounds better, I'm going to adjust it, thank you!

Galjo07

The followings events will happen here in here appartement or elsewhere ?! Si much questions here haha

MB123

I reckon she will transform first then she will turn the chap. This story is throwing me off, I like it!

MB123

I guess page 4 isn’t technically wrong, it just sounds strange and I’ve never seen anyone say it. ‘You have it nice’ with no abbreviation or ‘You’ve got it nice’ would be better. I’m English and I had to reread it 3 or 4 times if that counts for anything 😉

Gurt

The Story is realy cute. Cant wait for chapter 2 though :P Also i thought he will tf into a succubus and right now i have no clue how that happens xD

Surody

Someone will :P

Surody

Ah yea, I mixed up "really talented" and "real talent". :D What's the typo on page 4? In the end I'll let it proofread when I finished a chapter but I like to fix as much as possible now.

Daniel

Mmm. Nice ending. Now I'd be curious if she transforms too.

MB123

Typo on page 4, feels like you are missing a word and another on the second to last page, ‘really talent’ should be ‘real talent. Good work but I know you are a perfectionist!


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