The Succubus Project - Chapter I (17 new pages)
🕑 Added 2021-01-27 20:55:34 +0000 UTCSorry for the delay! I added pages, re-rendered and experimented with color correction plus I had sleep issues and as a cause I felt a bit weak / tired on Monday. (I made a Discord post because I didn't want to spam updates on Patreon).
I don't want to spoiler but the build up is basically done for now. Next batch will still belong to Chapter 1 and after that one we gonna start Chapter 2. ;)
Chapter 2 will be animation heavy, which means the page amount for batches will drop down a bit.
Anyway, enjoy! I'll try my best to get the next batch out the next 3 days.
Comments
I dunno, I kind of wonder if she's not the one who becomes a succubus, at least at first :)
Surody
Yea, it sounds better, I'm going to adjust it, thank you!
Galjo07
The followings events will happen here in here appartement or elsewhere ?! Si much questions here haha
MB123
I reckon she will transform first then she will turn the chap. This story is throwing me off, I like it!
MB123
I guess page 4 isn’t technically wrong, it just sounds strange and I’ve never seen anyone say it. ‘You have it nice’ with no abbreviation or ‘You’ve got it nice’ would be better. I’m English and I had to reread it 3 or 4 times if that counts for anything 😉
Gurt
The Story is realy cute. Cant wait for chapter 2 though :P Also i thought he will tf into a succubus and right now i have no clue how that happens xD
Surody
Someone will :P
Surody
Ah yea, I mixed up "really talented" and "real talent". :D What's the typo on page 4? In the end I'll let it proofread when I finished a chapter but I like to fix as much as possible now.
Daniel
Mmm. Nice ending. Now I'd be curious if she transforms too.
MB123
Typo on page 4, feels like you are missing a word and another on the second to last page, ‘really talent’ should be ‘real talent. Good work but I know you are a perfectionist!