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Chapter 16 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires!
🕑 Added 2025-10-14 14:52:51 +0000 UTCBetter late than never. I got a bit side-tracked, but writing this new PoV was actually kinda fun. Probably... was not necessary, but I decided that a change of the usual Jon/Rhaena PoV pacing is due. Lemme know what you think.
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Comments
Gamer_Jaystewart
Good chapter! Honestly feel like Jon should have taken the chance to claim to be a grandson or descendant of Brynden’s even though he claims to have stark Blood on his father side he could have claimed his mother was a bastard daughter of Brynden’s which would give him a little fav with House Targaryen and probably House Blackwood with Queen Betha and give his word a little weight in the South. And don’t think Bloodraven would have minded him using that claim.
FallenMetalGod
Thank you, and I enjoy Aemon's POV. It's interesting to see a somewhat young Aemon, especially as the wisdom and knowledge are still forming and will shine through. I like seeing how Jon will travel the North for quite a bit. It seems like he met with Wull, which I think will become very interesting if he gets to join the Feast within Umber's castle. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
