Actual rescue party: part 3.1

Plus Huang

Here are some thoughts since I still using pixiv: How about make a nest like background while constraint heroine's posture, maybe all cocooned but still consciousness to be played

Eskim0

I’m enjoying seeing this play out. The rescue party will soon need rescuing. The spider is like send more girls. The art is excellent as usual. It feels more widescreen cinematic than just reading a comic. The shot of then vehicle then the girls inside driving. The follow up to rescue party following from pest control. That first pic from Rescue Party with the girls patrolling. No dialogue but none is needed. I’m hooked

joeyjoejoeshabidoo

If you want to simplify the backgrounds in future I don't think anyone would mind. I'd personally prefer it over more stories taking place in a barren wasteland where there isn't much room for creative encounters. I mean how many stories have we had where the monster emerges from the ground?

Summoner

I enjoyed the bit of extra detail of the penetration in 18, though always nice to see the character's expression at the same time which is out of the frame here. Would love to see extra details there develop, maybe a peek of inner lips around the penetration at some point. But looking good :)

Josh Foster

I didn't get the impression that Iris was relaxed in page 19. She seemed panicked until she had a weapon, then she was "all business" with her training kicking in. These ladies are probably trained in the use of firearms and know that once you have your finger on the trigger, you must be calm/focused. (So I don't mind page 19 facial expressions -- just another viewpoint from another fan)

Habakuck

I really like the detail, that Iris accidentally steps on the spiderweb. This gives a good Idea, what's going to happen next. You've got a really good manner to trigger the imagination. One get way more from you than excellently drawn pictures. Thanks for it.

D0gbert

Lol a spider with a fetish?

hdctbpal

Unf, parasitic oviposition is the highest form of noncon.

zeroGravitas

after going back and having another look at page 19, I think you might have a point. she doesn't seem concerned enough, especially in the large panel. I should probably address that

hdctbpal

I like that he made sure to finish up leaving that sticky creampie in shower girl even as Iris watched though.

Habanero

After looking at these new pages a bit, I want to offer a bit of constructive criticism for page 19. I really think Iris' facial expression and body language just seems way too relaxed. She doesn't really give off a sense of urgency. It's not really an expression that says "Oh my god, my best friend just got bound, brutally raped, and impregnated! And it's coming for me next!!" It looks more like "Ah geez, now I've got a big mess to clean up... Oh well, I'll take care of it." Especially after her great expression on page 18, it really seems like she should have a much more panicked expression as she desperately reaches for the gun, then whips around, ready to fight for her life.

Esky

Awesome work as always!!!

Hedrah

The girl's wombs offer a better protection as they have a constant regulated body-temperature, always keeping the environment the eggs are in moisturized and self-adjusting for the volume. So the eggs don't need to waste energy to harden the egg "shell" to protect itself and the growing spiderlings don't have to spend nutrients to try and keep themselves protected from the shifting temperatures, all they have to do is focus on growing and maturing properly.

zeroGravitas

They lay tiny already fertilized eggs. They don't actually need humans as hosts and can actually lay eggs anywhere, but the alpha is certainy developing a taste for it. Spiderlings hatching from eggs implanted in mammals do appear to come out a bit more mature than those implanted in lesser critters/other insects or just dropped on the ground.

Kwisatz Haderach

Are the spiders using ovipositors to lay eggs inside the hosts or do they actually fertilize the hosts’ own eggs? Kinda curious about the biology here.

D0gbert

Spider boi be like OH SHI~

I hear where you're coming from with the interiors, but i LOVE how it lends itself to really unique positions like the girl in the shower. I hope you can find ways to integrate interesting set pieces in the other environments!

~Robin

The Alpha looks so mischievous and cute in that little cut away on the second picture lol. But I'm sure he's thinking "ohh two for the price of one".

From Beyond

I'd love to see her getting wrapped up in meat walls