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Familia Myth: Journey to Hero Chapter 44

🕑 Added 2025-09-18 22:42:50 +0000 UTC

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Kairomaru

Glad that you like it! Now that you're caught up with this story, check out all of the OTHER Danmachi stories and premises I have available too! lol

Dredd

This story is so well designed and setup that I’m here to continue reading all the chapters! You’re doing great work, and having something to read like this is awesome :)

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed this story! Hope you enjoy Force of Souls as well!

Andrew Wade

I know several other people have said the same and that our begging won't change anything, but I just have to say that I really hope Haruhime is told the truth in this story, it really bothered me that Aisha didn't tell her in canon despite claiming to care about her like a sister. Sure she seemed to justify it to herself as letting Haruhime to continue believing that Bell is a true hero that would even save a prostitute, but the simple fact is that Bell already saved her while believing that she was a prostitute, that's undeniably what happened and clearing up the misunderstanding can't change or devalue what has already happened, and I think it would be an important part of restoring Haruhime's sense of self worth. Anyway now that my rant is over I'm looking forward to the next chapter Kai. I'm thinking I'll start Force of Souls next in my journey of reading most if not all of your work.

Kairomaru

It would've been MORE contrived for Bell to meet Haruhime any other way but this, given that Ishtar specifically hid Haruhime from the Guild and other Familias for five full years without anyone outside the Ishtar Familia knowing that Haruhime existed. So, while it might feel like 'forcing the plot along' it is necessary unless I just want to start making up dumb reasons for Ishtar to start being dumber than she was in Canon. When hiding Haruhime (and especially her Level Boost Magic) from the entirety of Orario was one of the most intelligent things done in the Series. But now that this event HAS happened, things will definitely change, and we'll see Bell being his determined Heroic self again.

NemuiVoid

Man, I usually absolutely love your work but this was rough. Felt really contrived and like forcing the plot along. Bell could’ve so easily overpowered and escaped from the amazons much earlier, but it felt like all of his mental faculties were shut down to move things along. I almost screamed ‘FINALLY’ when he remembered that he had vesta enchanted to easily run away

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed it! Bell's Luck happens to be good. lol Best Fox will be saved soon enough, no worries!

Gremlin Nyx

Good chapter, Kai, still love that Bell manages to find the things or people he needs when things are happening. Hope to see Haruhime join the Familia (and relationship) soon!

Kairomaru

Patreon is doing something dumb with the '~' symbol that makes it cross out words. I'm just getting tired of trying to fix it all. The rest will be looked over by Beta readers.

anony

Another great chapter! Spotted some issues though that I decided to double check: --” She giggled softly as she sauntered over to Bell, the sway in her hips meant to draw the eyes while she walked around him, taking in his physique with her eyes before she leaned in as Bell turned around to face her again. “You can call me Aisha. And you are? --He IS goodlooking” --“So cute” The Amazon in pink said, her voice breathy and filled with smoldering heat. “First time in the Pleasure Quarter, sweetie?” Are these parts being crossed out on purpose? Is this the effect of Anomalous Resistance? --The Amazon in pink nearly snarled at Phryne. “Like hell! Every time you ‘have fun’ the males end up ruined or worse!” --The green-clad Amazon’s tone nearly dripped acid. “Because of you, the males avoid this place like the plague and we have to drag them back here, and that’s all your fault, you lumpy cockroach!” --“Is it really my fault that I’m the only one that can satisfy?” Phryne questioned, her tone mocking the other Amazons. “Perhaps my beauty is just too much for them?” --Phryne snarled right back. “Don’t you sass me! A bunch of ugly tramps like you are just jealous of my bewitching allure! Even Lady Ishtar can’t compare to all this!” She ran her hands down her body. In this sequence, it feels like there’s something missing between the third and fourth paragraphs. Did you switch the second and third around?

Kairomaru

Maaaaybe~

R1Styx

Hmmm, I wonder if Tiona and Tione are going to mark Bell somehow after this? So if any other Amazon's get hands they will see it?

Kairomaru

Kek! You'll see, you'll see!

Rosy Bramble

And unlike canon, Bell and Haruhime will learn she never actually did anything at the brothel when they find out she's a virgin. Can't wait for the hilarity of that one.


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