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Harry Potter and the Artificer Legacy Chapter 85

🕑 Added 2025-05-17 04:27:09 +0000 UTC

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El Pirato

I suspect Harry getting Sung Jin Woo vibes during his battle with Warrick Dale

James Hampton

Despite loving the story, I can't help feeling disappointed that this is how the story came to an end. You punted the board over giving us a world where the two sides have no choice but to reintegrate shortly followed by the use of a magical defibrillator on a planetary scale. I was eager for a deeper dive into the meat of a world in turmoil and conflict from these two massive events. All that conflict and uncertainty mixed with human stupidity was a recipe for an arc of struggling to bring things back to some semblance of what was before. Exploring the role of magic and need of under-represented magical skills like Harry's enchanting and artificing, and spellcraft seemed like it would have a bigger part to play. Looking at it as a whole it would have been better to have a clear division between the two acts of the story with Voldemort and Harry finding his feet in his abilities happens, and the foreshadowed events happening and Harry plays his role in the irrevocably changed world. You had everything there to make something bigger and better out of the second half. Despite seeing where things could be different and feeling disappointed it wasn't as good as I thought it could have been, I'm going to do my best to ignore it just so I don't sour my memories of enjoying reading it. You made something which stands out among the mountains of rehashed concepts, tropes, and cliches. I treasure stories like these a lot because how memorable and intriguing they can be.

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed the ending! Thank you for the compliment as well! Any writer loves to hear that their story was engaging from start to finish! There's always "Arch Mage, the Path of Magic" for MORE HP story if you'd like! lol

Andrew Wade

Like a few of the other people I saw commenting, I became a patron to read the latest few chapters, and while I'm disappointed that it's ending I'm not disappointed with how it ended, this story had me completely hooked from start to finish, I'll probably reread at some point in the future, and I will almost certainly try reading some of your other stories (as soon as I can decide which one to start next lol).

Kairomaru

You're welcome! I hope it was worth becoming a Patron and joining our group!

Mark Fleeson

Thank you. That was an amazing read and the reason I came to Patreon.

Kairomaru

Thank you, happy you enjoyed it! Yes, it's always sad to see a story you enjoy come to an end, but as long as it was a fun tale to follow, it was worth reading. Arch Mage will continue and hopefully keep the HP loving Patrons satisfied for a long time! lol

Pedro Burgos

Well done and I must say I'll miss reading new updates of it but like you mentioned there's still archmage. Thank you for the effort!

Kairomaru

Happy you love the story! You can use the 'Pawn Knight' golem if you want. I basically 'borrowed' it from the manga/anime Märchen Awakens Romance (MÄR) and their ÄRM magical items. Thank you for the compliment and I'll keep doing my best for all of my Patrons and fans!

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed the story! Harry and his wives certainly grew over time, didn't they? lol Yeah, different perspectives on the 'Great Change'/'The Crisis' mean that no one is technically in the right no matter which side of the argument they're on. I'm glad that there are people on both sides from my writing! It feels like a true accomplishment as a writer, you know?

David Pride

Love the story, little annoyed about the Pawn knight, I was going to use that in one of my stories, so now I think i will have to change it slightly. But just signed up to say 'Great work my friend, looking forward to your other stories.'

Popcorn Rocks

Man, this was a wild ride. Seems like just the other day Harry was having trouble just touching Dourfrost. The only thing I'm iffy on was everyone attacking "the Cabal" for literally saving the planet. Sure they caused devastation with their actions, but they literally had no way of foreseeing what happened. It just left a kinda bitter feeling, but maybe that's because I wasn't personally affected and know that their actions was for the benefit of the world as a whole and not for selfishness.


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