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Journey to Raftel Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2025-03-29 05:43:30 +0000 UTC

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Kairomaru

Soon enough, yes! Crocodile is not going to have a good time! Will the Straw Hats get bounties? If so, what will they do that pisses off the government?

Kairomaru

I don't recall that ever being stated in Canon. It's a popular fanon theory from what I know, but I don't think it's canon at all.

MAEGHT Maxime

Soon we gonna see my boy Ace and our goddess Robin, crocodile is so going to die , and after that Luffy will probably going to have a bounty on his head. But after all Wukong also defied the celestial court.

nasapeepolover116

I don't like how all of fanfiction seems to think you have to find out what your fruit is. When you eat one you just know the name maybe not how to use it but you do. I assume its because of luffy but i sware that this was confirmed maybe nit in the manga but im like 90% sure dont get me wrong i loved it like all of your stories

Rosy Bramble

It's Luffy, he's inevitably gonna do something they don't like, for instance, sheltering Nico Robin after Alabasta.

Kairomaru

Changes upon changes, this story can make most things work as long as it's plausible, right?

Robert Brown

If so how does Vivi have it all of a sudden?

Robert Brown

Yeah but doesn't monet have the Snow logia devil fruit?(In Canon)

Kairomaru

Hehehehe, indeed! lol

Kairomaru

But too many Mythical Zoans would make them NOT rare when they're supposed to be the rarest of all! (I say, as Oda has already made more Canon Mythical Zoans than Canon Logia Fruits.)

Kairomaru

Reiju is fun and beautiful! lol Things are definitely changing up in this story as we get further and further into the Series! Look forward to all of the changes that arise from the changes previously made!

Kairomaru

You'll see how everything plays out soon enough! I'm hoping to change things up more and more as we get further into the story.

Kairomaru

Whether or not they get bounties would entirely depend on if the World Government sees them as a threat, of course. Until they do something blatantly against the World Government's interest, they should all be fine.

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara

hehehehehehehehe

Robert Brown

You guys keep thinking logia.... while I'm sitting here hoping for it to be a mythical zoan fruit(human-human-fruit- model: Yuki-Onna).

savitar

I always liked Reiju, I wish she had joined Luffy's crew. I wonder if the world government will still put a bounty on Luffy for defeating Crocodile, after all they never like to lose face. I'll be honest, I like Luffy's nomu more in this fic than in canon (although nothing compared to other stories you have like Byakko's or the Logia brothers') and I'm dying to see him unleash Haki attacks, that will definitely be fun.

Calvin Morris

As great as always, Kai. Thank you.

Jeremie

Normally I'd say with a logia without haki Vivi and Crocoshit are even but with her fruit being snow and in the middle of a desert she'd be able to bury him in a ton of water which is his fruits weakness. The desert heat SHOULD be her weakness but in this case I think it's actually to her advantage

Rosy Bramble

Can't wait for the crew to eventually get bounties even though they're all law abiding citizens. That's gonna be fun, and probably make Garp pretty pissed at the World Gov.

Kairomaru

Happy you like it! We'll see how a Devil Fruit Vivi changes Alabasta soon enough!

Érica C. Assunção

I love it!! I'm very curious of what Devil Fruit Vivi will have!! And how that will impact the fights in Arabasta!

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed it so much! Yeah, taking out Wapol earlier means that Chopper doesn't get to fight right away, but there will be plenty of fighting in Alabasta! We'll soon find out Vivi's Devil Fruit too!

Ghost strech

Me gustó, jajaja el harem del rey mono sigue creciendo, Chopper se une de una manera no tan divertida pero está bien, y viví tiene una fruta de nieve, por donde vamos me hago una idea de cuál es pero no voy a decirla por qué no estoy seguro, gracias por el capitulo.

Kairomaru

She's just gotta keep Sanji in line sometimes, like any good big sister should! lol

The Masked Newfag

Honestly, I live for the moments when Reiju puts her Don Juannabe dipshit brother in the corner in this series.


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