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Susano'o Familia Premise Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2024-11-04 06:35:09 +0000 UTC

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Kairomaru

Happy you like it so much! More will come in the future, no worries there.

Abaddon

This is very good and I would absolutely love to read more in the future.

Kairomaru

Glad you like it!

Lukas Opavsky

Great story!

Kairomaru

Happy you liked the chapter! Yes, indeed! An adorable Yamato Nadeshiko for Bell!

Kirito Beater

Great chapter! I foresee a Mikoto in Bell's future.

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed it, Tristan!

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara

This was awesome

Kairomaru

Happy you liked it!

Kairomaru

I was about to say... Kek! No worries, my friend! Still glad that you liked the chapter!

Kairomaru

Happy you enjoyed it!

Carl Brewer

Great chapter can't wait for more.

Philip Maione Jr.

I loved this chapter cant wait for more! Also yes Mikoto LOVE! BUT on what Ibuko Mioda said about the zeus familia idea. It's ultimately up to you on how you want to go about such a story. You fould always write as like, "it's been 15 years and Uranus has given him permission to come back since it's just bell and because of his potential to slay the dragon that he allows it"

Jack Blaze

Uh, am I being crazy, or did like several chapters get deleted or something? I swear we'd gotten to when Susano'o Bell was Level 2 Why're there only 2 chapters of this premise? And why's chapter 2 the most recent one all of a sudden??? EDIT: Nvm, realised I was confusing this with the Sarutahiko Familia Premise, my bad

chris murray

Great chapter looking forward to the next one

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the compliment! Since Zeus was banished from Orario, he can never return and neither can his Familia. So, no such idea would really work out, you know?

Ibuko Mioda

Always love to see any adventure of Bells be updated. Some of the best writing imo. Also with all the lighting magic this chapter I wanted to know if you ever thought about writing a version of Bell that grew up with Zues Blessing and they return to regrow Zeus' Familia.

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, I do often give him different ways to accomplish a Grand Feat and Level Up across the various stories/premises.

Tarek Kanaan

Amazing chapter I really liked how bell fought against that minotaur....but are you gonna make another adventure for him to level up?

Kairomaru

You know it is! Best Yamato Nadeshiko in the Series: Yamato Mikoto! I try to pair with Bell when I can in a premise!

Guipa__

Is the sparring partner mayhaps a certain black haired shinobi? Is this one of the premises where we might actually get Bell paired with her? I really hope so cause that’s an underrated pairing and the male character who she has feelings for is not a character I’d pair her with…


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