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Overlord Premise Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2024-09-15 01:05:35 +0000 UTC

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Kairomaru

Yeah, Maruyama is a bit of an edgy teenager in his writing, almost like he never developed past that 'dark/hateful' phase that all teenagers have around their high school years. I'm glad that my story and all the changes being made over time are to your liking.

StrevHd

God this is still my favorite Overlord fiction. This lizardman arc and Sebas' waifu arc are the best in the series because it aloud the characters to grow and be more then misanthropic murder and torture hobos and even Sebas was going to straight up ice her. I love Overlord, but its hard to read anything past a cetain point because there is no growth. I think the author's feelings and choices in the original web novel were especially limited. When his fans (in a poll he personally set up) said there should be one survivor of the raid he apparently hated that option and decided to torture the character as punishment.

Heroville111

For real. That made me so mad. Ruined an excellent world for me. I'm a huge fan of all your stuff. I read almost all of your stories. Keep up the amazing work.

Kairomaru

Thank you very much! Glad that you enjoyed it so much! It really helps when the MC isn't an unfeeling pile of bones letting himself be dragged along, huh?

Heroville111

Just started reading this today. Ended up binging the entire story. I love the changes done to this universe as I was so sad to see overlord go so dark. This is exactly the momonga I wanted to see. Keep it up. Amazing story

Kairomaru

Happy that you liked it!

G

Excellent new chapter!

Kairomaru

Nah, that was a result of one of his Racial Traits. Read the part with Carne Village being attacked again.

Pizza15x

I'm going to go with his MP is higher. Since his stats are all the same as canon however his MP comes back as "Error" in both canon and here, so it would be easier to hide his higher MP. And he used [False Data: Mana] instead of [Mana Essence] against Shalltear. And he still had plenty of MP left during the climax of his fight against Shalltear when he didn't in canon.

Kairomaru

Maybe...

Pizza15x

Looks like I'm going to have reread the chapters then.

Kairomaru

I'm outright saying that I did something subtly and no one noticed! lol

Pizza15x

Are you implying he already has gotten boons from being worshipped by denizens of Nazarick?

Kairomaru

*Rubs hands together* Good, good, no one has noticed the subtle things in the earlier chapters yet. You'll see soon enough how that'll go!

Pizza15x

If this goes similar to canon, with Momonga being worshipped by the lizardmen and with Momonga actually being a deity, will he get some kind of boon from being worshipped like the god he is?

Kairomaru

Glad you liked it!

Marcus Marrero

Great stuff, love your work!

Kairomaru

Indeed! There are some future plans for such things!

Kairomaru

Hehehehe~

Kairomaru

Glad you enjoyed it so much! Well...Cocytus still doesn't have any commander experience in the field...but mistakes can lead to learning and growth.

nigh13shade

Achievement unlocked: pet the kitty Achievement's remaining: pet the puppy, 'pet' the vampire, 'pet' the succubus, Breed the kitty, Breed the puppy, Breed the vampire, Breed the Succubus

Tristan McKenzie O'Meara

hehehehehehe

Lutze2110

I read this Story in one Go so far, it's really great! I'm curious if Cocytus will act smarter this time...


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