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Rise of the Living Forge - Chapters 552-553

🕑 Added 2025-11-07 16:00:17 +0000 UTC

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Eternal Reader

the last line killed me

Ben Bass

TYFTC! Oooh, Roderick is definitely loves how he can give himself abilities now that he has sunset his class, he is DEFINITELY going to be dangerous and will keep on adding and expanding his skill sets as needed! I do love the threat at the end - beware, or we will make sure your stepson is prosperous!

GhostInTheWater

I love the build to the threat, with everything believing it will be something atrocious only for it to be investing and growing his son's apparel business. Hey, the street could use a good tailor!! ;)

Alexander Dupree

“Only when the only ones” -> “When the only ones” or change the sentence either way you can drop the repeated word which is pretty awkward

Tommy

LOL!

Tommy

If it’s his stepson it’s the son of his current wife from a previous relationship right? So why would this need to be hidden, maybe his wife had a kid out of wedlock and the only way he could marry her was if the son was kept secret? Idk. I’d say him having a bastard son from shagging his maid or something might be better but also potentially a bit of a trope? Idk!

Tommy

“It sounds weird. I’ll make plans to deal with Dorne and make sure he doesn’t get the opportunity to bother us before the Maloseum is properly open.” Maloseum -> Mausoleum TFTC!

why doineedto

What are you doing step-son?!

Ty

TFTC! Who do y'all think is gonna get sunsetted next? Reya?

Paxmorgana

A dwarf that wants to be a tailor, huh? Think he'd be interested in working with spider's silk and hellhound leather? There's room on the street after all. Anyway, when did the Coffin get ret-conned into the Mausoleum? Also you have a typo in the chapters 'Maloseum'.

Ian

Yeah, in short it would be either his bastard or his wife's bastard depending on his motives - I agree stepson is an odd decision

djb2

Hiding a stepson doesn’t make much sense to me. You can’t really hide your relationship to your wife’s kid. The kid existed before you married, so anyone that knew of your wife would know of the kid. Unless he’s hiding the whole marriage altogether, or thinks shunning the kid means people won’t mess with the kid to get to him I don’t see how it works. If thats the context though it’s not really explained in the chapter. Kind of a convoluted set up for such a minor character, so I would venture the story would be better served if the kid was a bastard instead of a stepson.


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