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Magus Reborn Chapter 175

🕑 Added 2025-02-04 03:08:50 +0000 UTC

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Silver Beard

I liked the first half more than the second.

musashi

Perhaps you should make it clear that this is the Amazon comment system where criticism is deleted and only timid or fawning reviews are allowed. If a writer is writing a good story and then stumbles is the reader not allowed to feel pain and disappointment? Or should we pretend nothing is wrong? Should we also pretend we didn't pay anything for the privilege of commenting? Or should we pretend that there is a perfect way to express ourselves in a timely manner without causing the writer or other readers annoyance and any other comment that doesn't meet that standard should not be made?

Conspirant

Where is your story?

musashi

Please explain how two enhanced men can sit on their hands and watch another unenhanced man grab a potion from his clothes, uncork it, swallow it and then change without killing him. And please don't say they were trying to take him alive. Unconscious is always an option and, as you point out, they already know the potion exists, not that he has it but they should be on guard for any potion-taking by anyone. This was very unpleasant to read. Begging an assassin to give up just comes across as both arrogant and stupid. It's never good to be both arrogant and stupid at the same time. You can be arrogant and smart or humble and stupid but not arrogant and stupid. Maybe a B5 scene of a Centauri running through the tunnel where he's finally chased down and torn apart by the Narn could be adapted for the forest. I'll miss that gospel music though. tftc


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