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Dao of money Epilogue 2

🕑 Added 2025-01-16 07:57:19 +0000 UTC

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Arthor K

I don't plan for anything like that. And you will know as story goes. You will know on Jun too.

VoidAutarch

I have a feeling he will be turned into another demonic cultivator and then used to attack Chen Ren.... he will lose obviously and his mother will be crushed . Also how does that Jun get to kill a phoenix and walk away scotfree without any repercussions? Are the phoenixes as one of the heavenly beasts spineless?

Arthor K

Ehh I don't think the plot is shallow tbh. He sees Chen ren as someone who he defeated easily once and is now a wall now. Getting in his sect right now would just mean giving in to that wall and not trying to surmount it. And this Li Xuan plot would span a good while, so I believe it's too early to say it's predictable. In the end, character development needs time to hit right.

Storyflower

Li Xuan is dumb and predictable as quite a few of the characters in this story. Only Chen Ren himself has some multi dimensionality to him and there are some promises in Qing He and the new addition. Why not let Li Xuan join Chen Ren and become part of his sect? That would be evolving his character. But no, the same old 'revenge' platitude. The only real guy I know acting like that is the US orange buffoon. Character development is (especially) important in stories though. Joining Chen Ren as an experienced cultivator would be a far more interesting angle. IMHO there is a distinct quality difference between this story and Magus Reborn. The kind of shallow one dimensional plots in this story are a shame knowing that the writing talent is there. I hope my observation finds a fruitful bottom for improvement.

Seth

Book 1 was a triumph

Shawn

Great story excited for more.

Monijay

🫰🏾🫶🏾


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