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Magus Reborn Chapter 51

🕑 Added 2024-05-05 14:51:11 +0000 UTC

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Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!

EsZeus

And I can't describe it any better. Sorry 🙈 But somehow it feels artificial how the scene and this chapter worked out :)

EsZeus

The plot with Actra here and now is weird. The execution after the fight and how it reads is somehow strange. While first, Actra was a suspicious character, they all fought very hard. Our MC emptied his mana Reserves. But Actra also fought and protected as much. Now, suddenly, Actra can't protect himself. While he could in the fight before. Then, even without mana, our MC should know it. But suddenly Actras behavior shifts and he is a coward. Somehow, this doesn't make any sense. The narrative here is a bit messy for me ^^


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