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Police Officer Corrupted pt.4

🕑 Added 2022-08-19 18:00:05 +0000 UTC

Comments

Sortimid

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! I think this format works well for longer, more gradual transformations.

Qwalt

Wow. That was an extremely interesting sequence! Blurring the distinction between sequences and comics.

Sortimid

Thanks! I agree: it was fun to combine the two

Das Flute

This was a really fun sequence, and the slow burn works well! There's something about the combination of the "too deep undercover" and "idealistic good girl to spoiled princess" tropes that really do it for me.

Sortimid

Thank you so much! Real glad you enjoyed the conclusion!

themagus

Really, really loved this sequence and absolutely love the idea of longer-form stories! I think you do mental changes so well and I'd really love to see more of your longer-form stuff in the future! 10/10!

Sortimid

You get me, Smokey ♥ Glad you enjoyed!

Sortimid

I see what you mean. The mental changes are slow and gradual while the physical ones all happen within the final 5 steps. I considered spreading them out more, but to me this is just a story where corruption is the main focus and the physical TF is secondary to that. My first draft had steps like "I need to go shopping?! What's wrong with the clothes I have?" but it felt like such a trivial point to bring up for a character debating her very morality. And once she's ordering hits and betraying her core beliefs, taking a moment to, I dunno, highlight her new butt implants seems off, tonally. Someone else mentioned the final step feels over the top, and I think that's why: It's a bit tacked on, a treat for bimbofication fans. I wouldn't know what to do with even more steps; there's no more story left to tell. So while I agree that spreading out the juicier changes would have made this a more satisfying transformation, I couldn't find a way to do that within the story I wanted to tell. Thank you for sharing!

Smokey

Really fun final sequence! I actually think the first step of this last sequence might be my favorite, just because of the dialogue. Her pet names for the boss and using that status to hurt other people is a really nice display of how corrupt she's become

Mr Purple

Really liked the twist and the pacing - until the final part. I think you established a great slow burn, then rushed some of the juicier transformations. Still a fan of your long-form, but this one would benefit from another part to even things out. Lovely art as always though!

Sortimid

I hear you. I wanted to squeeze in a bimbo police uniform. My in-universe explanation is bedroom dress-up games. It's maybe a bit of a stretch but I feel it would be missed if I left it out. Glad you enjoyed it overall and thanks for taking the time to comment!

Bob Bob

Loved it overall and think it would be great to see more long sequences. My one issue was that the final image seemed a bit over the top and a leap from the slow progress of the rest of the transformation.

Sortimid

Thanks for letting me know! Glad you enjoyed it!

Sortimid

Thank you!

Sortimid

In my mind her relationship to the Boss is public knowledge, the whole thing's just corrupted from top to bottom. I totally see the Ariana resemblance! Wasn't thinking about her, but I am a fan of the look. Went for mean spoiled princess rather than ditzy bimbo.

Brandon Booth

This was a fun one, loved seeing the progress each week.

Jav

Absolutely LOVED this!! I hope inspiration strikes again like this in the future. These corruption/unwanted-transformation arcs are my favorite!

Dynamoob

Good stuff overall. I suppose it could be open to interpretation; I read the ending that she's still undercover but for the mob boss now (like Matt Damon's character in The Departed). Thanks for thinking of my sequence. Shame we couldn't see your rendition of the dress. Also, image 14 looks too much like Ariana Grande for me.

Sortimid

Yay! Happy to hear it!

Sortimid

Thanks for letting me know!

Sortimid

Inspiration just strikes sometimes, and I have to follow

CurrentlyEatingPies

Yes! So good. I love it. To make it even better I guessed this ending. I predicted that she'd "win" against the corrupt cop and "loose" to the mob boss.