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Greeting at the Door
🕑 Added 2018-10-05 18:00:02 +0000 UTCPosted the sketch for this almost a year ago. It was inspired by this gif.
Hadn't uploaded the completed image before because I hoped to use it as the cover for a longer sequence/story, featuring the evolution of a Dom-bimbo relationship through the way the woman greets her man at the door. Here are some of my exploratory thumbnails:
There were many iterations of the script different variations of this:
It started with the woman being dropped off at the end of a date "I had fun! My treat next time!"
Then she's at the door with pizza, for netflix and chill.
She sees him off in the morning.
She opens wearing just a towel "I'll be ready in a minute!"
Dressed up for a fancy date "We should be fine, the reservation's at 7."
She's carrying shopping bags "I feel so spoiled!"
Showing in off a bikini "Sneak peak of next week!"
Back home, tanned, carting luggage "Home sweet home"
Naked after a shower "Sure you don't wanna just stay in?"
Carrying cardboard boxes to a U-haul.
Seeing him off in the morning in a teddy.
Welcoming him naked in just an apron.
Surprising him with dyed blonde hair.
"Happy anniversary" in lingerie and a collar.
"Happy Halloween!" (sexy catsuit)
"Uh. I'm so sore." (bandages after plastic surgery)
Showing off post surgery.
Naked in just an apron post-surgery.
Another fancy date.
Kneeling at the door. "Welcome home, master"
Ass up at the door.
In bondage as he leaves in the morning.
In bondage as he returns in the evening.
Ass up with a butt plug.
Ass up with butt plug, heels and a thicker booty.
I liked the idea but something was missing. I hit a wall. My friend praedatorius helped me realize the fixed perspective outside the entrance goes against the theme of growing intimacy. If the story is about coming closer, shouldn't we see the bedroom, kitchen, doctor's office?
It was difficult to reconcile the two. I could either turn this into the story of a delivery guy transforming the woman at her front door (then moving to the living room and, finally, the bedroom) or, alternatively, flesh out the characters and properly explore their relationship. They meet, fall in love, stumble upon a shared interest in bimbofication. Trust is built, maybe someone gets cold feet after being pushed too far, they push through the pain of surgery together. It's an interesting story, but one I feel neither ready nor keen to write at the moment.
In the end, neither of those options inspired me. Maybe I'll return to them in the future. Until then, I hope you enjoyed the image and the accompanying sketches and thoughts!
Comments
Sortimid
Thanks for letting me know! I haven't done a lot of these write-ups, but knowing they're appreciated is a good reason to do more in the future.
Scramble
I love love love you sharing your process; Joe Haley does the same and it's one of my favorite things about supporting both of your patreon spaces
Sortimid
Thanks! I doubt I'll do more with this concept, otherwise I wouldn't be posting my sketches, but it might give birth to other things :)
Mika W
I love your artistic process and thought going into this. I really like the premise of this concept. I hope your find the inspiration to do this at some point. :-)
