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A Promise Kept - Troubles of Youth

🕑 Added 2025-10-02 13:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Kyosuke Sagara

Yeah, really wasn't a fan of that development in written in the stars, and not a fan of it here either.

Sunny

I liked the use of multiple POVs in this chapter. I still find it very hard to believe that seasoned magicals in this AU weren't able to account for a Veela in the Lake, but no point dwelling on it. The insight to this AU Harry's magical ability shows that, while I consider his abilities somewhat OP/underserved, he doesn't hold a candle to my favourite Harry raised by Tom. Same age, began his journey in a horrible situation at 8 and was able to turn the castor's transfiguration back at them as well as many other things like sacrificing a stem for everlasting life. My Goat, who's living his best fictional life with Fleur. Lastly, I hope Edward survives tracking down Pettigrew. He's not that much of an idiot and the people he's with are definitely not. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.

TheNinja

Sounds like Harry is gonna be doing the same thing with Sabine as he did with that think her name was Alessia Zabini from Written in the Stars..a bloody stinking fling to just have fun not strings attached but perhaps at some point later on when it has run it's course one will develop feelings but will still be ok with ending things. Hate it though because all that is being done in situation like this is she would be using him nothing more and he would be letting her apparently. And this will most likely lead to one of the girls in Harry's life further developing their feelings for him like Gabrielle unfortunately much like it happened in Written in the Stars with Lucinda and he will most likely realize his for them.