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A Promise Kept - Chapter 79 - Retribution

🕑 Added 2026-03-20 14:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Finnspa23

Great final chapter! I think the Dolohov issue was the only major thing that needs fixin. Enjoyed this story a lot!

Keon

Brilliant! 🥳

Paul McDonnell

I viewed that as being specific to Hogwarts - Voldie has taken control, ergo Harry's uprising to take it back is a coup against Voldie's rule.

odzoo

“You must see that you[r] coup has failed, Harry,” Voldemort spoke... Tom's confused about the definition of "coup."

Mandragoran

As others have pointed out, some continuity errors and more than a few typos, but damn, what an ending

Durdens Wrath

I hated the trope of everyone just standing around and watching. They should have been finishing off all of the death eater so they didn't have to worry about trials and them sticking around

Durdens Wrath

Filius couldn't have been fighting with Dolohov, Lily killed him earlier. And you had Bellatrix as Dora's arent instead of aunt.

Ramasamy Radhakrishnan

Hi Dolohov killed by Lily before professors are released. in later scene Fillius is fighting with him?

Edward

I love the depiction of Aurelius as Harry's ever loyal griffin. Like a cat you have to EARN their love and loyalty but when you do you have a friend for life.

Dave

And I JUST finished last chapter, oh what a treat!

Paul McDonnell

Spotted a continuity error here: Flitwick squares off with Dolohov about 2/3rds of the way through the chapter when Lily had already killed him before the professors were freed.