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Domina's Valley 28 Preview
🕑 Added 2021-10-23 15:14:44 +0000 UTCPATREON EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW with 11 pictures. I'm going to write some extra text on the Patreon post with the possible next steps in the story.
This time the preview is the part of the chapter with a little flashback, bringing a more "slice of life" moment for Jessy's and Peter's relationship.
Not all text is there, there is still contest that need to be fixed, so, I'll let it for later.
This shows how noticeable Jessy's growth went from before and after the morning after the party, and some extra teasing.
This chapters development is late and I'm preparing for a vacation, so, we will see it only in 2022.
There is also the fact I ran out of proper scripts and am modifying a lot this chapter, as I told you guys earlier, so, after resting the brains I'll go back to checking models in general and prepare the universe-wide story 'cause it is a bit complicated with CT, DV and GD now 'cause they're sharing a lot of stuff I need to organize.
PATREON EXCLUSIVE TEXT
From here on, Spoiler Alert, read at your own risk.
This chapter of Domina's Valley is, like the earlier ones on this season, a bridge for helping me into integrating the universes, so, it may have little growth compared to the other seasons, though there is a risk of having more growth, it depends on the script.
Part of the story happens at Mr. Tyson's house, 4 characters, a lot of Jessy, some witch theory and some spice from NOICE info person that I won't reveal - she brings great news.
The delayed part has Destiny and David and their "new house" and guests. Many guests. The house part I had some fun thinking, it may give me a lot of extra work because the surroundings are not ready, or I may focus on the insides 'cause I have a lot of fun plans to it - it went so far that it would bleed out to the next chapter, so, not a good idea, I may make it it's own chapter.
The "new" part will have some ideas merged:
• There was a Harrison and Patricia scene, that are friends. They would have a talk and etc and a noice plot point, but that was killed because of last 2 chapters when it was decided to Patricia roll back to her original body and her quest for her old necklace. So, Patricia cut from the scene.
• Marcella, Harrison, TT and Gerald scene at the Dinner closed 'cause she was moving. Gerald cut from scene, Dinner is still going.
• Day after idea - The girls comment about their dreams and some weird stuff spoken by Electra. Not sure of merging this one.
• New idea - Harrison wonders how everyone looks taller than him while Andrew says it is ok. This adds some comparison with Marcella and Alice, meanwhile I'm still studying the addition of Ysadora.
• Silva boys - This is an extended idea involving Electra, Johnny and even his uncle Tony. It is related to one of the day after versions and high possibility of becoming a Giantess Dream story because it is small and may help filling a smaller chapter.
SO, this part I may write while posing: I need to catch get the render count to be sure what merges and what goes to another chapter while deciding what to give up and what to delete.
As for Cheap Tricks, I think you guys noticed I'm holding the growth for "reasons". I don't want them to keep growing with a proper plot, so, I'll let the Domina's Valley have some time to catch them up (or so), though I doubt being the biggest girl is the solution to all plot. Actually smaller girls are a bigger treat to the next seasons.
Giantess Dream has the most complicated part here 'cause I need to plan the return of Scarlet, show the high hierarchic members of the Queendom, make some participation of DV girls in CT, present Becca to Tyson and possibly Wendy, make Audrey begin her research and close the Season 1 with 5 or 6 chapters. So, on this one I'm very screwed, hahaha...
But once these decisions are set I may integrate the "MILF" series into Audrey's research and make the 2nd Season main plot. Or set the 2nd season on the research itself and make the 3rd Season about the MILF drafts... IDK.
This is it. Enjoy it.
Comments
agasawara
This is... Awesome! Can't wait to see the next chapter, even if we have to wait until next year
Gary
Her ass is just perfect
jdv
I'm excited to see the chapters with Audrey's research. It's amazing how much of a driving force she has been for the entire series :D
7mood 15
When you release DOMINA'S VALLEY 28?
Olaughalot
She may not be as curvy as the other girls but she's a fine amazon for snu snu
bmtbguy
No giselle in this chapter
Vintage
Giselle is in right or no ?
bmtbguy
She will have a part in this chapter, after all her little brother is even smaller now and she is a great subject for comparing heights, hehe.
Olaughalot
Honestly I'd like to see a chapter or something on Alice. When the other girls in her school approaches her height she jumps ahead and is only behind Victoria for tallest of the cast currently, it's made me curious and think she's doing something.
bmtbguy
That's not a moon, that's an ass. Wait, they look the same :O
Xion Zeros
*insert Tex Avery wolf howl*
