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Domina's Valley 26 - Release

🕑 Added 2021-03-20 14:53:32 +0000 UTC

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bmtbguy

Thanks for the critique. This part of the story I had a long time working on, I feel it a bit more fresh and I reconsidered every character, taking some serious decisions, like on Patricia's case. I didn't even begin showing the next plot, and I'm anxious to do it ^^

Clonecamando1471

Lovely chapter and amusing to see who remembers the night and who doesn’t. Miss Knoda for once being the intuitive detective instead of the witches or Veronica feels like a twist on the usual roles in the story and I’m glad to see her doing more there. No time lost on the Jessy train however as evident in this chapter she’s already steaming ahead, thankfully brunch is more distracting than beating Giselle in the size game right away. Also, kind of amused Ana was the only one who had the most normal night of all of them, she arrived, got absolutely wasted on the punch and woke up the next morning seemingly as hungover as the rest, wonder whether she remembers anything at all. XD While part of me is saddened that no one retained any size gains from the previous night effectively, in some cases characters actually lost more than what they had initially. I kind of partially hoped that certain characters would have retained a fraction of their gains in some way be it height gains or curves like in the case of Eden. Ah well, certainly had to happen. I don’t think the world was ready for some of the girls to quickly shift into the 20ft+ range so chapter 25 worked as a nice fanservice tease. XD I was half expecting Amanda to still be pretty big the following day because I felt that would have been an amusing dynamic for Jannet’s pint sized sister to be the bigger one for a change. Looking forward to seeing more of her certainly since she clearly remembers and enjoyed her small stint as a giantess. Consider me thoroughly intrigued for the next issue.