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Chapters 81-82

🕑 Added 2025-09-14 19:40:24 +0000 UTC

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MrSnap

This chapter feels like its back into the groove of things. The previous few chapters of receiving the class was quite the ordeal. It just didn't fit with the overall tone of this story. The constant exposition and then needless and pointless opinions and commentary of the book while doling out the information was kind of agonizing. Getting this huge data dump and then trying to color it with "how cool" and "your amazing" was very frustrating to read. I think the author would agree as well because I could tell she was struggling with putting down the words. With these recent chapters, we're getting back into character-driven story-telling which is more her speed.

Malphir

Missing Primordial Death skill from Dealer of Death subclass on the list.


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