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Chapter 72

🕑 Added 2025-08-23 20:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Maeve McCarthy

I will retcon all three to align with the present version as soon as I find the lines. Thanksss.

Blackjack

A few things. 1. Originally it was stated that mana shaping isn't a Skill, but skill. However, its an official skill she has now. That seems to be an error, either in what Adriana said earlier in the book or why Mana shaping is listed as a Skill here. I thought thats what made what Lily was doing so impressive because there isnt a system recognize Skill to guide mana shaping. 2. It was also mentioned earlier in the book that people pick their subclasses, however, lily didnt seem to have any choice in her subclasses. This seems like something to be mentioned, as one of her subclasses is death aligned; I know she likely doesn't care about that anymore given the circumstances, but we are led to believe that people should avoid death affinity subclasses, which implies choice. If lily simply doesn't have options, then she should remark on that. She should ask her Record why her subclasses were automatically picked for her. 3. Lastly. A minor point, I also remember that there was tier rankings for the subclasses. However, these subclasses again dont have that. While I imagine they are quite rare, we dont have any understanding of how her subclasses compare to others. I hope again this is mentioned at some point.

Eleeyah

My personal suggestion is to let chapters like these accumulate and then release them in one go.^^ Alternatively, you could use titles that make it obvious when you're finished with this bit, but that would be a departure from your usual format.


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