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SYLUS COMIC WIP and rough sketch fixes I’m gonna do

🕑 Added 2025-02-27 19:24:50 +0000 UTC

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clo

bye why does it look so hot already just as a sketch 😭🤤

4lusst

omgggg the wip of him solo before the confrontation would’ve been SO GOOD

TK

oh my….. i wish i was her 😭😭😭😭😭

Guppies

Me and my praise kinks are eating this one up, yes ma'am 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️

ilovyoo

“atta girl” and the last panel OHHH MY GOD. also you work so harddd thank you the revisions 🥹 im excited to see the one of sylus on the bed colored hehe

Kyl-li J

Another master piece *chef kiss*

Mimi

Omg?? That’s such a great idea! I’ll incorporate it into the story and cred you!😭🤣

DarkFemSteff

No plotholes, luke and Keiran did a bad job assembling his bed so it rocks more 😂

DarkFemSteff

Hey don’t apologize I completely understand. And I understand that their characters do not follow conventional male behaviour because irl he would be a heaux looking like that LOL This is no fault to you at all I am just happy you changed it so please don’t beat yourself up about it even if you hadn’t changed it it’s your work and you should be proud of it regardless!

Mimi

🤭🤭🤭

Mimi

Yes😼😼😼

Mimi

🤭🤭🤭🤭

Mimi

LOLL🤣🤣🤣 that would be fun

Mimi

🤣🤣🤣

Mimi

Thank you so much!!!🥹🫶🫶🫶

Mimi

🤭🤭🤭

Mimi

Thank you so much!!!🥹🫶🫶🫶hope you guys will like it all finished! and yes! I love drawing tummy folds they’re so cute 🤣

Mimi

Thank you!!!🥹🫶🫶 ahh i have a lot to say when it’s done 😭

Mimi

Thank you so much!!!😭😭yall are so sweet

Mimi

Thank you for enjoying my work!!🥹🫶🫶 i must do the sylus girlies justice 😤😤😤 hopefully it all comes together!!

Mimi

LOL cotton ball in alpha body 🤣🤣 thank you so much!!🥹🫶🫶 I’m honored you enjoy them!!! I’m learning so much so i hope next comic is better!

Mimi

Thank you!!!🥹 I’m so excited for when yall read the ending

Mimi

Yes! He’s such a softie AHH 😭😭😭

Mimi

🤭🤭🤭

Mimi

Thank you for enjoying it!!!🥹🫶🫶 can’t wait for you to read the rest, and sadly no😭😭 milkman was just at the moment for fun 😩 but I’m happy to hear you enjoyed that!! I can try to explore more stuff like that in future tho! (The begging)

Mimi

🤣🤣perfect timing

Mimi

🥰🥰😘😘

Mimi

Yes!🤭🤭

Mimi

LOL🤣🫶🫶

Mimi

Thank you!!!🥹🫶🙇‍♀️

Mimi

🥹😘😘u are

Mimi

THANK UU🥹🫶

Mimi

Thank you!!🥹🫶🫶🫶

Mimi

🤣🤣🤣

Mimi

Thank you so much for understanding!!!🥹🫶🫶 it’s def a learning process 😩 it’ll feel better as a creator to fix it!🙇‍♀️🫶🥰🥰

Mimi

It irks my soul not changing it LOL dw I’ll find time after it finishes and during the week i prep for Geto comic!

Mimi

Thank you for enjoying it!!!🫶🫶🫶 I’ll make the changes and when it’s all wrapped up and redrawn parts i hope it’ll feel fresh when rereading!🥰

Mimi

Yess my apologies not much was known of him when i started the comic🙇‍♀️ it does suck to hear caus i been mentally ridiculing myself for this for months and tried hard to push through. I rlly didn’t want to drop it but finally decide to change it. i hope the change helps in some way😭

Mimi

🤭🤭🤭so hot

Mimi

🥹🥹🫶🫶🫶

Mimi

🤭🤭o yes

Mimi

😛😛😛

Mimi

Thank you!!🥹🥹🥹

Mimi

LMAOO😭😭 AHHH there’s the bit of plot hole so let’s just pretend he’s THAT frustrated LOLL

Mimi

🤣🤣🫶🫶

Mimi

Thank you!!!🥹🥹🫶🫶 still need few weeks, i hope i do it justice😭🙇‍♀️🫶

Mimi

🤭🤭😘😘

Mimi

I hope is two weeks! Hold off on vibrator until after i finish and do revisions 🤣🤣🤣

Mimi

Thank you!! You’re always supportive 🥰😘🫶🫶 i think I’ll save the player trope for another character where i can write him hella player like. It’s just as i went i realize Sylus is so soft and it’s kind of suspicious to go from sleeping around to fixation on her 🤣

Mimi

😼😼😼😼

Mimi

🥹😘😘😘

Mimi

🥹😘😘thank you!!!

Mimi

Thank you!!🥹🫶🫶

Mimi

😂😂🫶🫶 thank my social anxiety that art is my outlet 🤣🤣

Ali

HAHAGAHA

Mimi

LMAO I’m not sure if it’s u i think i remember your comment about it months ago?🤣🤣

Mimi

Thank you so much!!🥹🫶🫶

Mimi

Glad you think so too😭😭 it just doesn’t fit his character..i shall save the player trope another time!🤣 and thank you!! It’s been bothering me for months..😅

Mimi

🤭🤭🤭

Mimi

😛😛😛hehe

reiin

You like captured all of what we don’t see Sylus get to do y/n in game SO FUCKING GOOD. LIKE HES EVEN MORE FUCKING CONSIDERATE, AND YEARNING/NEEDY THEN HE ALREADY IS AND ITS…AMAZING, THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOOOD I WANNA CRY 😩😭🥹

Mimi

🤣🤣🤣

Mimi

Thank you!!!🥹🫶🫶

Mimi

🫶🫶🫶

Mimi

😌😌😌

Mimi

🤭🤭🤭

mcxyp

THE POSITION IN THE LAST PANEL! OH IM FERAL!!! 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 fuck Sylus! fill us up! 🥵

707

I LIVE FOR THAT LAST PANEL HOLY LORD!!!!! 😩😩😩😩

Amandab.d

HOLY SHIT!!! That last panel 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

SmallRatPatootie

If you ever drop one of those books that gotta be wrapped in plastic labeled 🔞. I’m buying it deadass 🙂‍↕️

Sam

“Come on sweetie, give me a big one” took me out 😩

taev

I loved the revisions. Thank u sm for your hard work! I always enjoy reading your panels and can see how much you've improved. You've come a long way Yuana, amazing work 😭🫶🏼🥹

Joan

Two heartbeats

chelseas_dagger

i’m absolutely losing my mind at the pillow oh my GOD. but also that last panel 🥺🥺🥺 the way you draw realistic bodies and include the tummy folds is so warming to me :’) also the revisions look great! it does feel a bit more like sy as we now know him and the inclusion of him humping the bed is going to be all i think about now 😵‍💫 it’s all absolutely incredible and i love this comic SO so much!!

Fish

I love how you are doing some tweaks! The comic was and is already amazing but, the tweaks and effort to refine it really show how much care you are putting into your work. 🥹🫶

Mila^_^

The revisions are wonderful🥰 I really admire how hard you work it really shows throughout your work. It’s a pleasure to support you❤️

Lady Pau

I love this so much! You are such an incredible artist! You love what you do and I love how we can clearly see it in your work. I love how you’re looking to stay true to the characters! Thank you so much for all the time and love that you put into your works! Keep up the incredible work! 🩵🙇‍♀️😍🤩 Also as a huge Sylus fangirl, thank you! ❤️

Jessica Phoenix

😭 it’s amazing that you’re taking your time to re-design and finish this comic as well, thank you so much for your work really 😭😭 you’re one of my favorite artist in this platform, it makes me giddy and excited for your next projects this year! And you’re right! Sylus is a cotton ball on an alpha body 😭

carls

The revisions are excellent!☺️ I honestly love the character either way but it's your comic so whatever you like I like! I'm gonna be so sad when it ends regardless though😭

Ruth Hope 🩷

I love the revisions so far!! I think that's a great idea and I'm glad you're taking the time to make it what you want it to be! I'm also truly in love with how his character is now so much more fleshed out because of the lore! ❤️

dejavuuu

The PILLOW? The final page? We are fed so much omg 😭

Mélissa Dft

Je ne sais pas quoi dire à part que comme d’habitude, tu es très impliqué dans ce que tu fais, et que tu as même voulu rechanger entièrement le cours de l’histoire, merci pour ton travail et je suis un peu dégoûté que ce soit la fin mais ça fait quand même un bon bout de tant que tu es dessus ! 😙D’ailleurs je me demandais est-ce que tu penses que ce serait possible que tu fasses un come-back du Milk Man ? ( it’s my favorite)Gros bisous, prends bien soin de toi ! 💋🇫🇷

mochu

one more look through for what’s to come and it’s not just me. sylus too. *deep sigh* yuana, i’m not even ovulating, but I will be once I see this fully rendered…

Ma'Laiya Delen

Thank you for this delicious meal 🙏🏾

Faleshia Evans

Yesss I love the revision, he really is just a sweetie !

Sam

Respectfullyyyyyy vibe time is gonna slap 😩🤌🏻 your comics are immaculate 👹

Catvin

Love the new panels and revision. Suits him 🖤

Diena

You are a goddess

ꈤꀤ꒒

THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD AHHH

Clairezzz

Ohhh Yuana🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭I think this fix is incredible 😭😭😭😭

maddie

aw lawd he humping the bed???? 😩😩😩😩

Maggie

Oh my GOSH that final panel is incredible!! 🫠🫠🫠 I support making revisions if they feel right to you!! I personally have enjoyed the comic so far but Sylus’s character in the game has developed more since you started the comic, so I get why you’d want to make adjustments. Revisions are a normal part of writing so I think it’s admirable that you’re open to revising your creative work as well. And comic creation is just as much writing as it is art! And I know you’re very focused on making improvements and growing as an artist so this move makes sense to me!!

Zoya Rez

I love your rework but if it’s too much please do not bother!! We appreciate anything you give us

Aditi Pandey

Aaah this has been such a good ride tho…. Like I absolutely love this and seeing that it’s coming to an end soon it kinda feel bitter sweet 🥲🥲🥲 ahaahahahahahahaha I wish I could just go back and read this with the excitement from the first time, anyways thank you mother for your service💖💖 also pls I hope you take enough rest and are doing well

DarkFemSteff

Yeah NGL him being a heaux never sat right with me I know it is AU but still it’s such an antithesis of his LADS lore that it made me feel like this character was not Sylus. This isn’t criticism in anyway, I was willing to accept that this is an AU so yeah they aren’t the same people but it still kind of messes with your mind.

Lisa Heisler

THE PILLOW HUMPING NGHHHH

Arisa

No words. Just 🫠🫠🫠

i love nanami

what a man 😋

Kitkat

GIVE IT TO MEEEE

Amy

So excited for the reworks 😭💗💗💗

Cinna

Um humping his pillow THAT HARD🥵🥵🥵 Yuana, I love this change!

Violet

That last panel is actually going to kill me

Aki

my favourite comic is coming to an end 😭😭😭 I love it so much! ❤️❤️❤️

RoyalBl00d Keeper

GOD YEES!!😫

mochu

but wow. 2 more weeks and all done. i’m gonna miss it. I can’t wait to see it all through. pour me a glass a wine and read it with my vibrator for a fun night in 🥰🥰

mochu

am full support of you redrawing if it’s something u wanna do, but know that i’ve loved/enjoyed this from the very beginning. I think it was nice like here’s this whore but he’s not and is thoughtful. had me and my lady (😻) quivering. I think ur hard on yourself, miss yuana lol

Amanda

😼😼😼😼😼

Symone ꒰ᐢ. .ᐢ꒱

God bless yuana for the hard work ilyyyy🫶

Tyler

thank you for feeding me while i’m working 😩 beautiful sketches!!

Kira

I agree with your thoughts about reworking Sylus as well, can't wait to see it ☺️

some.cucaracha

YUANA IM SO GLAD THAT YOU PICKED DRAWING AS A HOBBY 🥲🫶🏽🫵🏽 I BE BARKIN AND SHIIII😭😭

tojishostage

My jealous ass is glad he's just jacking off instead of being a fuckboy hihi

ShyTora

You put so much passion into everything you do, it shows ❤️ I love your stories and your interpretation of their personalities ❤️ Thank you!!

Queen Brittania

I like it that he isn't having frequent sex. That he was just jacking off. Thank you. I know it's hard work. This is another reason why you are a top tier creator. You go back and make changes and consider suggestions. The sheer commitment 👏 🙌 👌 💪. Thank you for all your work.