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Noranora9~12

🕑 Added 2019-06-01 12:50:35 +0000 UTC

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Meowcino

Amazing work, NOMIFUKI. :) Apart from what others have corrected, I think punctuation could be fixed. (E.g. Avoid using two full stops "..!" and instead use three or none. "...!") I'm really loving the comic's story and its art, and your personal translations have gone way beyond being good readable English and are reaching a level where they are almost perfect English. You've progressed very well. :3

NOMIFUKI

Thank you Hr.Seehund-san!!!!🥺✨✨✨✨

Nekoitoi

Best of luck man, loving each page of this comic!

NOMIFUKI

THANK YOU Valravn-san😭😭😭😭😭😭soooooo happy to hear that. I am so happy that you like them ..!!✨✨✨

Valravn

I loved this lol, I laughed and loved how very sexy it was. And the translation isn't bad either! Most translations in comics are terrible but yours feels so fluid. Kinda like English was your first language so great job!

NOMIFUKI

Oh thank you nekoitoi-san...!! Lots of effort....!!!🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺thank you...!!!!

I love those two! Drawings are sooo good and love the expressions n fur:3

Nekoitoi

page 9 I think it would sound a bit better if Kuro was saying, "Quit being so cocky.." Maybe, drop shiro saying "Duh" As it implies, he obviously knows kuro is topping. Maybe it should say, "You already came this morning" instead of "cummed" page 11: I think it would sound more natural if Shiro said, "Kuro, Turn around" as turn back sounds odd.

NOMIFUKI

ありがとうパンフォックスさん！！！

NOMIFUKI

Thank you !! It’s fun time!!!

Panfoxu

すごいい!! メッチャ大好き。

Zilch Woofs

Looks like fun!

NOMIFUKI

Oooooohhh that’s sooooo cooool!,,!!,!!!! Definitely wrote it down on my title list!!

NOMIFUKI

Thank you lollie-san!!! I fixed it!!!

NOMIFUKI

Thank you for telling me! Fixed it!,

NOMIFUKI

Aaahhh thank you!! Fixed it!! Why am I so bad at counting pages!!!

page 9 seems tiny sized and blurry to me.

NOMIFUKI

Thank you☺️

NOMIFUKI

Thank you!!!

Bubba Wolfuzz

Sexy Pose is lovely!!! 🤤💙💚💙💚

Azaghal

Now we need Page 9 :)

Que intenso 😋😝😘😘 great job 😍😍

Ink

I love them.... You're so good with their expressions!!!!!

Hr. Seehund

オモロい！ This is really funny, and everything is well translated. The only thing I'd really change is: when Shiro says "Kuro, turn back!" He should say "Kuro, turn around!" Or "Turn around, Kuro!" It reads better. Still, great job!!!

Torakuma

Hey Nomi-san. If you’re still taking ideas for an English title for のらのら I was looking up Stray dogs and read about packs of strays. When stray dogs roam together it’s called “Free Ranging.” Thought maybe it could be “Free Ranging Dogs” or something along those lines in English? “Free Rangers” “Roaming Strays” Just throwing ideas around for you! 🤓