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Noranora1〜4

🕑 Added 2019-04-21 10:39:11 +0000 UTC

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NOMIFUKI

yes!

Inksomnia

do you traditionally draw your pieces then do them digitally

Cycas_aurea

It's pretty far removed from the meaning of "stray", but I think "Companion Dogs" could also work. A "companion dog" is a dog that don't have any "job" to do, that is just there to be around people. It would describe their close relationship and carefree nature while also being a bit of a play on words.

Cycas_aurea

Are you still looking for ideas for an english title? "Stray Dogs" may be a very close translation of the original, but I think it would work well.

yetyetinu

Love this pair and amazing artwork as always!

Nighttheft

They are the best bois

Javi Lu

They are the very definition of punks lol

"bewildered hearts" or "fierce Stray hearts"? but looking good!

Zai

I really love this couple

Voe

<a href="https://imgur.com/a/NwqO1Xp" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://imgur.com/a/NwqO1Xp</a> Some suggested edits and localizations. Mostly things people already mentioned.

Panfoxu

Already loving it! keep going!!

NOMIFUKI

Thank you Vitaly-san😆✨

Rohan

they are the best :3

NOMIFUKI

Oooooohhhh I saw itttt!!,, thank you so much 😭😭😭 this is so helpfullllllllllll I was afraid that I couldn’t do this alone, so happy that you support me😭✨✨✨ＴＨＡＮＫ　ＹＯＵ　

NOMIFUKI

Thank you Hr.Seehund-san😊✨ I love though dumb 👍👍👍

Hr. Seehund

Tough and dumb, what a great combination! Also for Page 4, Shiro could say "You're gonna fuckin' pay for that!" Cause "that" works more than "this" in this context.

ワンワン

I made an edit! I accidentally hit enter too early!

NOMIFUKI

Thank you ワンワン-san😭✨✨✨✨✨✨

ワンワン

I love these boys so much!!! Page 1 - in the middle panel, you could say something along the lines of "these two are infamous in the town for being naughty (bad)" Page 2 looks fine to me! Page 3 - Panel 3, it might be clearer to say "wonder where all of that freaking energy comes from..." Page 4 - Panel 2, you could change it to "What?? It was a small mistake!" and "Look closely at the lid..."