Jon Steinke
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Chapter 54: Don't Lose Too Quickly
🕑 Added 2025-11-14 12:25:01 +0000 UTCThe bell chimed.
Rielle finished grandstanding and turned to face him. She rolled her shoulders, her silver engraved spear catching the sunlight. A smile curved her lips, devoid of warmth.
"Don't lose too quickly." Her voice carried across the platform, pitched for the crowd. "I want to enjoy this."
Laughter rippled through the Illuminet section.
Caleb's [Spiritual Perception] flared.
What he felt was a reminder he didn't want.
Narbok’s spiritual signature had been a messy bonfire of aggression—a gritty, wavering crimson that tasted of rusty vapor. Rielle’s was a flawless, polished gem. The felt color was a pure, deep violet that seemed to absorb all light. The resonance was a single, sustained tone, so clean it made his teeth ache.
His senses reveled in the texture. Most every other aura of the cohort he’d touched had felt coarse, like rough-spun wool or gritty stone. Hers was impossibly smooth, a seamless surface with no imperfection, no flaw for his perception to grip. It was like trying to hold onto polished glass with wet hands.
The sheer perfection of it was overwhelming. His mind tried to find a flaw, an edge, something to analyze, but there was nothing. Just a constant, overwhelming signal of pure, undiluted power. Peak Harmonic Path.
Rielle attacked.
The blur of motion came faster than his eyes could track. One moment she stood fifteen feet away, the next her spear was already driving toward his ribs.
Caleb's body reacted on instinct, his spear sweeping up in a desperate [Phalanx Guard]. The impact jarred through his arms, driving him back two steps even though he'd caught the shaft and not the tip.
She didn't press. She simply withdrew, reset her stance, and attacked again.
The second thrust came low, aimed at his thigh. He twisted, using [Dodge] to slide away from the point. The tip still grazed his armor.
The third strike was already coming, a horizontal slash targeting his ribs on the backswing.
His spear came up. Wood cracked against wood, the shock reverberating through his palms.
Too fast. Too strong.
The thought was detached. His [Combat Analysis] was already running, cataloging her movements, her timing, the microsecond tells in her posture that preceded each attack. Data streamed through his consciousness in a cold rush, building a tactical picture even as his body failed to keep pace.
Rielle's next attack came from a different angle—an overhead strike that forced him to raise his spear high to deflect it. The moment his guard lifted, she pivoted and drove a kick into his thigh.
Pain exploded through his leg.
He staggered, his stance breaking. She capitalized instantly, the butt of her spear slamming into his shoulder and driving him further off-balance. Before he could recover, the silver tip sliced across his bicep.
The cut wasn't deep. It barely penetrated the leather of his armor. But it was deliberate. Precise. A message delivered in blood and pain. "You can't stop me. I can hit you whenever I want."
Caleb gritted his teeth and forced himself back into his stance. His [Iron Root Stance] anchored him, providing the foundational balance his body desperately needed.
She came again.
A flurry of strikes, each one faster than the last. High, low, left, right. Her spear became a silver blur, testing his defenses from every conceivable angle. He blocked when he could, dodged when he couldn't, and felt his stamina draining with each desperate reaction.
A thrust slipped past his guard and scored a line across his ribs. Another caught his forearm. A third opened a shallow cut along his thigh.
None of the wounds were serious. She was playing with him, drawing out the inevitable like a surgeon selecting which artery to sever.
The crowd's noise shifted. The Illuminet and Gilded sections roared their approval, delighted by the display. The Duskborn section had gone silent, the earlier hope crushed under the power of Rielle's dominance.
Caleb channeled Stamina into his legs and used [Flicker Step], creating distance between them.
Rielle mirrored the technique completely.
She appeared beside him before he'd even completed the hop; her spear already in motion. The tip grazed his cheek, a shallow cut that sent blood trickling down his jaw.
"Did you think you were the only one who could use Stamina Abilities?" Her voice was light. Amused. "How quaint."
She attacked again, this time combining [Flicker Step] with a brutal sweep that forced him to jump or lose his footing entirely. He leapt, twisting in midair to avoid the follow-up thrust aimed at his exposed torso.
He landed hard, his injured leg protesting. His breath came in ragged gasps.
She's not just faster. She knows everything I know. Every technique Hatch taught. Every basic drill. And she executes them better.
The tactical picture was complete. Devastatingly obvious.
He couldn't win through speed. Couldn't win through strength. Couldn't win through technique. She held every advantage, and she knew it.
His only weapon was his mind.
Rielle disengaged, stepping back several paces. The smile on her face widened, taking on a theatrical quality. She turned slightly, addressing the crowd as much as him.
"Let's make sure we give the people what they want, shall we?"
Her aura blazed.
The platform filled with copies of her.
Five identical Rielles materialized around him, each one indistinguishable down to the last detail. Same posture. Same mocking smile. Same silver-tipped spear held in the same grip. They moved in full synchronization, circling him like wolves surrounding wounded prey.
A rush of sound covered the arena. Cheers and gasps of wonder mixed together, the arena's energy spiking with the spectacle.
Caleb's [Combat Analysis] sent off warning bells, but his conscious mind overrode it with something else.
Relief.
It surged through him, desperate and overwhelming, like a gambler who'd bet everything on a single card and watched it turn up face.
He hadn't baited her into this. Hadn't manipulated or tricked her. Wasn't sure if he'd have been able to. Instead, he'd simply speculated on her arrogance, on her need to perform, to turn violence into tortuous art.
And she'd done exactly what he'd hoped.
The illusions attacked.
Five spears thrust toward him from five different angles. His body reacted on pure instinct, his spear moving in a desperate arc to block the one aimed at his chest.
Wood met air. The illusion vanished like smoke.
Pain lit across his back as a real blade scored a line between his shoulders. The cut was shallow, slicing through the leather but barely breaking skin.
He spun, raising his guard. Three more thrusts came simultaneously—one high, one low, one center. He tried to block the center strike, felt his spear connect with solid wood.
Agony still lanced through his hip, his strength not enough to overcome her attack.
The pattern repeated. Attack. Block. Miss. Pain.
She was using the illusions to create openings, forcing him to guess which strike was real. Each failed block left him exposed, and she capitalized easily. The cuts multiplied—shallow slices across his arms, legs, ribs. She was working through his armor, targeting the same spots again and again, slicing through the leather in layers until she found flesh underneath.
Blood seeped from a dozen wounds. His armor started to look like Swiss cheese.
Concentrate! Endure!
He leaned on [Ignore Pain], pushing the agony into a distant corner of his mind. His [Pain Tolerance] helped, his body adapting to the steady accumulation of damage.
The cuts kept coming.
She was enjoying this. Savoring it. Making it last. Completely confident.
Good.
Caleb closed his eyes.
The crowd's roar became distant static. The pain became texture. His world narrowed to the sensation of Mana flowing through his channels, responding to his will.
He shaped it. Focused it. Compressed the diffuse, omnidirectional awareness of his [Spiritual Perception] into a narrow spatial beam, just as he'd done in the goblin cave.
Caleb swept the beam across the platform.
Five Rielles moved through his perception. Four were empty—ghostly projections painted with her aura but lacking substance. The spatial feedback from those four was hollow. Formless.
The fifth was solid.
There.
Satisfaction rushed through him, cutting through the pain and exhaustion. The theory had worked. The desperate gamble had paid off.
He could see her.
Three more cuts opened across his body. His left shoulder. His right calf. A shallow slice across his abdomen.
He gritted his teeth and waited.
The real Rielle circled behind him, hidden among her phantoms. His beam tracked her movement, maintaining the lock even as his eyes remained useless. She was preparing another strike, her body language showing the telltale compression that preceded a thrust.
Now.
Caleb pivoted hard, forcing Stamina into his legs for a [Flicker Step] while simultaneously pouring more into his arms and torso for a [Sundering Strike]. The combination was crude, inefficient. The two techniques fought each other for dominance over his Stamina reserves.
He didn't care.
His body and spear lanced forward, driving toward the point where his perception showed her center mass.
Rielle's illusion's eyes went wide.
She twisted, her body reacting with inhuman speed. The thrust barely missed her torso, the iron tip passing through empty air where her ribs had been a fraction of a second earlier.
Caleb's heart hammered against his ribs. Panic immediately flooded his system.
Crumb! Does she know?
His mind raced. That strike might seem too accurate to be coincidence. Too close to landing. If she realized he could see through her illusions, she'd drop them and finish him with her superior speed before he could get another chance.
He had to sell it. Had to make her believe it was luck.
Caleb immediately spun and attacked the nearest illusion, his spear thrusting wildly at the phantom. He let frustration color his movements, made the strikes sloppy and desperate, pulling on every ounce of [Deception] available. He attacked another illusion. Then a third. His face twisted into an expression of clumsy confusion.
Please work. Please.
His beam tracked the real Rielle. She'd reset her stance, but her posture showed hesitation. Confusion. Her head tilted slightly as she watched him flail at empty air.
Then her smile returned to the copies.
She attacked again, the illusions resuming their coordinated assault. This time the pace was faster. More aggressive. She'd been startled by the near-miss and was compensating with increased pressure.
But she hadn't figured it out.
The ruse had worked.
Relief lasted exactly three seconds before it was replaced by a new, more pressing problem.
I can see her, but I can't hit her.
The failed strike had revealed the fundamental flaw in his plan. His perception gave him information, but his body couldn't capitalize on it. She was simply too fast.
He needed to be faster.
More cuts opened across his body. His right arm. His left hip. A particularly vicious slash across his hamstring that nearly dropped him to one knee.
His vision swam. Blood loss was beginning to affect him.
Think. Think!
[Savant of the Mind] continued to churn, processing the data. His [Combat Analysis] fed it raw information—attack patterns, timing windows, the intervals between her strikes. [Perfect Memory] cross-referenced those patterns with the feeling of the failed attack, the sensation of his body moving through the motions.
The pieces assembled in his mind.
Upper body empowerment. Lower body empowerment. Two separate surges. Two distinct moments of power. A sequence, not a synthesis.
[Sundering Strike] worked by overloading the arms, back, and torso with Stamina for devastating impact. [Flicker Step] worked by surging power into the legs for explosive speed. Using both at once meant dividing his focus, splitting his Stamina between competing techniques.
I'm trying to do two things at once. That's the problem. I need to do one thing fully.
The solution presented itself not as hope, but as a logical conclusion.
He needed a technique that united the kinetic chain. A single, harmonious surge that flowed through his entire body—legs, core, arms, weapon—in one explosive instant. A symphony of power, unified and complete.
His mind processed the failure, stripping away the pain and panic to see the raw mechanics. Two streams of power, one for his legs and one for his arms. They ran parallel but never merged, fighting for the same resource and creating turbulence instead of a balanced flow.
The schematic in his mind shifted. The two streams became one stream, a single, overwhelming flood designed to turn his entire body into a weapon.
Another cut opened across his shoulder. Then his ribs. His endurance was flagging. The accumulation of shallow wounds was becoming a critical problem.
No more time. Do it now, or do it never!
Caleb stopped trying to block the phantoms. He stood in the center of the platform, his spear held low, and closed his eyes completely.
The beam swept across the circling Rielles, tracking the real one. His [Combat Analysis] monitored her pattern. She favored a clockwise rotation. Preferred to strike from the left. Her attacks came in clusters of three, with a brief reset between each cluster.
She was approaching the end of a cluster now. Two strikes left, then the reset.
Good.
He felt the Stamina as a pervasive energy suffused throughout every fiber of his being, waiting to be commanded.
His Intent shaped it. Directed it. Unified it. He drove the energy downward, coiling it deep in his legs until the muscles burned with contained power, an anchor point for the violence to come.
His beam showed her exact position. His [Combat Analysis] calculated her trajectory. She would step forward with her left foot, extend her arm, drive the thrust toward his right kidney.
He waited.
One heartbeat.
Two.
There.
Caleb’s eyes snapped open. He pivoted, his back foot digging into the platform as the energy in his legs detonated. The power surged as a wave, building. A torrent rushed up from his feet, through his hips, and ignited his core with rotational force. The twist of his torso acted as a conduit, funneling the current seamlessly into his shoulder and down his arm.
As the crest rolled up his body, he released it from where it was no longer needed, preserving his muscle integrity.
It was one unbroken flow. The spear drove forward, the final expression of a single, harmonious transfer of power that began in his heel and whipped through his entire frame. A lunge that rocketed him forward and moved into a thrust that was timed to fully unload where he knew she was going to be.
The spear struck true.
The iron tip hit Rielle's sternum with a sound like a hammer striking an anvil. Her [Life Shield] manifested in an instant, a brilliant silver barrier of protective light that flared between his weapon and her chest.
The sound was deafening—a metallic whine that pierced through the crowd's roar.
The ward held for a few moments. Then it shattered.
Fragments of silver light scattered across the platform like a thousand falling stars.
A chime and a translucent blue window shimmered into existence before him.
[New Ability Gained: Lancing River (F) - Novice]
Rielle staggered backward, her hand going to her chest. Her illusions flickered once and dissolved, the bloodline technique failing as her concentration broke. She stood alone on the platform, her eyes wide with pure, uncomprehending disbelief.
Her mouth opened. Closed. No words came out.
The moment stretched for one long, pregnant second.
Then the Duskborn section erupted.
The roar was primal. Deafening. Thousands of voices howling at the top of their lungs in unified triumph, the sound rolling over the arena like a physical thing. Caleb could feel it in his chest, vibrating through the platform beneath his feet.
The Illuminet section sat in stunned quiet.
Rielle's expression transformed.
The disbelief twisted into something darker. Her face contorted with rage, her violet eyes blazing with an incandescent fury that had nothing to do with strategy or tactics. This was the raw, petulant anger of a child whose favorite toy had been stolen.
She screamed.
The sound was incoherent. Wordless.
Her spear came up, the silver tip aimed directly at his chest. She lunged forward with murderous intent, her face a mask of hatred.
A blur of motion crossed the platform.
Captain Hatch appeared between them, his hand catching Rielle's spear shaft inches from Caleb's chest. The weapon stopped dead, arrested by the D-Tier warrior's superior strength and speed.
"The match is over."
Hatch's words were flat. Unequivocal. The tone of a man who would not be argued with.
Rielle yanked her spear back, her chest heaving. Her face was flushed, her breathing ragged. She glared at Caleb with such intense hatred that it made his skin crawl.
"You—" Her voice cracked. "You cheated! No commoner could—"
"The match. Is. Over." Hatch's interruption was final. His hand remained raised, a clear warning. "Leave the platform. Now."
For a moment, it seemed she might refuse. Might actually attack again despite the direct order from a Legion captain.
Then she spun on her heel and stalked toward the tunnel, her spear gripped so tightly Caleb thought it might splinter. She didn't look back.
Caleb stood with Hatch on the platform, his body trembling with exhaustion and the aftereffects of the massive Stamina expenditure. Blood seeped from dozens of cuts. His Mana reserves were almost completely depleted from maintaining the perception beam.
But he was standing.
The Duskborn section continued to roar, their chant resolving into a single word repeated over and over.
"Thal! Thal! Thal!"
Caleb turned away from the crowd. His eyes found Specialist Spinova waiting at the platform's edge, her hands already glowing.
A couple of notifications waited at the edge of his awareness.
[Your proficiency with Phalanx Guard (F) has increased to Adept]
[Your proficiency with Pain Tolerance (F) has increased to Expert]
[Your proficiency with Iron Root Stance (F) has increased to Adept]
He walked toward Spinova, each step requiring conscious effort. His mind was already moving past the victory, past the triumph, focusing on the only thing that mattered.
The finals.
Astrin Kaelix.
Another Peak Harmonic with flawless technique and a bloodline legacy that could end fights in a single strike. Except this one didn't like to torture her opponents and instead crushed them as quickly and decisively as she could.
How do I beat that?
The question followed him off the platform as the crowd's chanting continued.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Hey everyone! Thanks for reading--this has been a fun week. We've had some exciting chapters to talk about, and I appreciate all of your feedback and insight into how the story is progressing. It's crazy for me to think that we're getting close to the end of this book. I hope it'll be as satisfying for you as I expect it will be for me.
I also want to thank all of you again for the incredible generosity you've shown in supporting my writing. Just... wow. I can still hardly believe all five of the milestones were hit. You're all amazing. Thank you!
Unfortunately, we'll be stepping down to the M/W/F schedule next week. Once I can build up a bit of a backlog again--and stop flying by the seat of my pants--I'll try to do some things to extend the "chapters ahead" count further. But with the holidays on the horizon, not to mention my wife wanting to remember what a date night is like, it'll probably be a while before we get there.
I hope everyone has a fantastic, restful, and safe weekend! Take care of yourselves!
Also, some slight revision commentary. I really appreciated everyone's feedback on the [Tactical Overlay] ability that sprung up in Chapter 45. The TLDR is that [Tactical Overlay], and [Combat Solution] which I wanted to morph it into, are being completely removed.
The longer version/thought process behind this is that it never sat right with me, which I why I wanted to bounce it off y'all in the first place. Originally, it was this visual grid thing as described, combining some of Caleb's mental mapping abilities he picked up in the goblin cave with his combat analysis. Then, when I was changing it to a combat solution, I was going to go more into a "flash of insight" kind of thing. I thought that could work... could be a cool thing to play with, and I was trying to write it into this scene. Was going to have it trigger for the first strike against Rielle and then when Caleb missed it'd be like "look, it's not always reliable" and create some nuance with it. I think sdf even mentioned this idea in chapter 45--I didn't come up with that on my own. Totally borrowed it. But the more I thought about it I just couldn't help but feel like there was too much overlap with [Combat Analysis], so I decided to drop it. Caleb's already getting a bit bloated with skills, and I'm trying to figure out ways to manage that going forward (heridfel on RR has suggested things like skill fusions), so that's the other part of why I leaned towards dropping it. I've updated the revision in Chapter 45, but it's not really worth re-reading. It's just aligned to [Combat Analysis] now.
That's it! Have a good one, and we'll be back Monday. Next week might be fewer chapters... but it should still be epic. :)
Jon
Comments
Msharlo1
The way that Syl (Slime litrpg on RR) does skill fusions works really well if you wanted to consider borrowing elements from that. Essentially skills can be fused into other skills without changing the name of the skill they are being fused into but then the level raised and they might get new facets and the description might change. Ex. She has one sensing skill (Soul Sense) that she has fused multiple sensing abilities like the abilities to sense magic, vibrations, heat, electrical charge ect. or a slime base skill that lets her create and manipulate slime but can effect multiple types, ex. acidic, adhesive, poisonours, superhot ect.
Faramond01
Im confused about the bet made earlier. Wasn't the entire point of that bet getting enough money to buy more essence stones before the semifinals or finals? Does he have a pending order that is about to be delivered or is he just gonna wing it and try to win the tourney without any more essence stones? That seems like a forced narative he he is trying that. Wouldn't it be more cost effective to just buy the stones now and win so that he can win the E grade stones to match his current allotment?
