Jon Steinke
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Chapter 47: A Corrected Strategy
🕑 Added 2025-11-05 12:25:02 +0000 UTCThe final bell rang, a single bronze chime cutting across the arena. The sound echoed once before dying into absolute silence. Caleb stood motionless, his spear tip hovering a hair's breadth from Finn's wide, terrified eye. The boy's mouth hung open, a scream trapped on his lips. The glittering silver motes of the shattered [Life Shield] dissolved around the weapon like dying stars, their faint glow fading into nothing.
A dark stain spread across the front of Finn's training leathers. The scent of urine leaked through the air.
For a single, stretched moment, the entire crowd held its breath.
Suddenly, the Duskborn section exploded into chaos, bodies surging to their feet, fists pumping the air. The noise was overwhelming, a wall of sound that seemed to shake the wooden platform beneath Caleb's boots. His ears rang with the force of it, thousands of voices raised in cheer.
He slowly lowered his spear, the weapon descending as if a headsman's blade returning to rest. The crowd's roar became a distant hum, muffled by the strange clarity that had settled over his thoughts. His eyes remained on Finn's trembling form for a moment longer before shifting away, dismissing the boy as if he no longer existed.
He was reminded of an unpleasant memory then.
He was ten years old, standing in the garage at home. Fresh blood was still trickling down his chin, and his lip was split. His left eye was swelling into a purple shiner that would last for days. His father leaned over him, the man's broad shoulders blocking out the light from the single overhead bulb. The old man smelled of sawdust and grease, the constant companions of a lifetime spent working with his hands.
There was no comfort in his father's hard, weathered face.
"Did you cry?" The voice was gravel and iron, demanding an answer.
"N-no," his ten-year-old self stammered.
His father's calloused palm gripped his shoulder, the pressure just shy of painful. "Good. Now you listen. The only way to stop a bully is to make him more afraid of you than you are of him. You find his weakness, and you break it. You understand me?"
He'd nodded, too scared to speak.
His father had straightened up, satisfied that the lesson had been delivered. The man never asked what had happened. Never asked if his son was hurt. Never offered the simple comfort of a hug or a kind word.
Just the lesson.
The memory brought a pang of something uncomfortable, a feeling he'd spent decades trying to bury. He'd sworn he would never be that kind of father. When Jack came home tear-streaked after being pushed off the swings at the playground, Caleb had felt the same rage his father must have felt. But he'd channeled it differently. He'd held his boy, spoken soft words of comfort, and then spent the afternoon building Legos on the living room floor.
He'd never given Jack his father's lesson.
The boy's heart was too gentle for that.
The grief that followed was a knife twisting in his chest. He would never build another Lego castle with Jack. Never hear Katie's laugh or feel Evelynn's hand in his. They were gone, lost to him across a divide that couldn't be crossed. And in this new world, with its monsters and its cruelty and its hierarchy of power, gentleness was a luxury he couldn't afford.
To protect Corinne and Leo, he would embrace his father's lessons. The gentle Dad he'd been for Jack belonged to another life.
As Finn exited the stage, Caleb’s attention moved to the arena's edge. He was looking for something specific, the device Hatch must have used after Leo's fight. Based on the layout… There. Near the platform's western edge, mounted on a stand of dark iron and polished silver, sat a runic eye—a magical device that likely fed the scrying mirrors. Its central lens glowed with a soft, purple light, the runes etched into its surface incredibly complex and pulsing with power.
Caleb turned his body, adjusting his stance so he faced the device directly. He stared at the glowing lens, his expression hardening into something pitiless. He held it for three long heartbeats, willing his intent at the magical link, hoping to send a message to Narbok.
He let the message sink in before finally breaking eye contact. His jaw was set, his shoulders squared with the posture of a man who had made an irrevocable choice. His eyes lifted, sweeping across the massive arena in a slow arc.
The upper tiers were pure jubilation. The Duskborn section, packed with farmers and laborers and adventurers, had erupted into a celebration. They were on their feet, their faces flushed with the thrill of watching an underdog perform so well. None of them likely expected a half-elf to be that skilled.
His eyes dropped to the lower boxes of the Gilded. Here, the reaction was more controlled but no less intense. Merchants and successful tradesmen leaned forward in their cushioned seats, whispering urgently to their associates. Surprise and calculation warred in their expressions, mental ledgers updating in real time. They were recalibrating their assessments of who mattered in this year's cohort. A few were even taking notes, scribbling observations into small journals. To them, his victory was data, a new variable in the equation of power and profit.
Finally, his scan settled on the shaded boxes of the Illuminet. The nobles watched with expressions of disdain, as if witnessing a breach of decorum at a formal dinner. A few looked actively annoyed, their haughty faces marred by frowns of disapproval at such an unseemly display from a commoner. One woman in a gown of pale blue silk turned away, raising a delicate hand to her temple as if the very sight of him caused her pain.
His search ended with Captain Hatch. The captain stood at the platform's edge, arms clasped behind his back at rest. The man's expression was one of overt assessment, the focused intensity of a lion that had just identified a new, dangerous creature in its territory. Their eyes met across the distance, and the silent message was unmistakable.
The game is up. I see you.
Hatch didn't wait for the crowd's applause to fade. He turned on his heel and strode toward the tunnel entrance.
Caleb followed behind, his spear held at a relaxed carry, stride unhurried. The crowd's roar followed him like a living thing, but he ignored it. He concentrated instead on the dark mouth of the passage ahead.
Upon entering the tunnel, the roar of the crowd became a distant, muffled hum, absorbed by the thick walls of packed earth and stone. The air was cool and still, smelling of damp soil and the faint mineral tang of the underground. A single line of rune lights set into the ceiling illuminated his next challenge.
Hatch was waiting. His position deliberately blocked the tunnel's narrow path, making it impossible to pass without confrontation. The man's posture was relaxed, but his eyes were intense, cataloguing every detail of Caleb's appearance.
"I was skeptical when I heard reports you killed a feral goblin matriarch on your first contract." Hatch's voice was flat and full of command. "Felicity's endorsement was glowing, but I dismissed it as enthusiasm. I'm starting to understand how you might have pulled it off. Explain."
Caleb met his stare, his mind racing through possibilities in the space of a single breath. A lie was too risky now. Hatch knew too much, and the man was no fool. He would dissect any fabrication and find the cracks in moments. Caleb needed to control the narrative, not try to bury it.
"I've been holding back." His voice was steady and calm. "My initial strategy was to avoid attention, to blend in as just another mediocre trainee until I could build a proper foundation. That was a mistake."
Hatch's eyebrow rose a fraction.
"The quarry taught me that in Deadfall, perceived weakness is an invitation to violence. I walked into that place thinking I could hide, thinking I could survive by being stealthy. The goblins disabused me of that notion quickly." Caleb stood a bit taller. "What you saw out there wasn't a hidden power finally revealed. It was a corrected strategy. I'm not trying to be the best fighter in the cohort; I'm simply sending a message."
Hatch listened without interruption, his expression unreadable. When Caleb finished, the captain processed the words for several long seconds. His eyes never left Caleb's face. The silence stretched, broken only by the distant, muffled noise of the crowd above.
Finally, Hatch gave a single nod of acknowledgment. "The Legion is always looking for talent. We will discuss where yours could fit after the tournament concludes."
His voice dropped slightly. "The Legion gets what it needs, Caldorn. Remember that."
The captain stepped aside.
Caleb walked past him, feeling the man's stare boring into his back with every step. The conversation was over, but the issue was far from resolved.
The prep room door arrived ahead of him.
The space erupted into chaos the moment he stepped through the threshold. Corinne's delighted shriek cut through the clamor like a hunting horn. Then she was there, launching herself across the room with enough force to nearly knock him off his feet. Her arms wrapped around his shoulders, her face buried against his neck, her entire body shaking with the relief and joy of someone who'd just watched a friend survive the impossible.
"You magnificent, ridiculous, terrifying person!" Her voice cracked with emotion, the words muffled against his collar. "That was the most insane thing I've ever seen! I thought my heart was going to explode!"
Leo appeared on his other side, his eyes shining with awe and disbelief. He gripped Caleb's forearm, his hand trembling slightly. "Thal, I... I don't even have words. You moved so fast I didn't even see you start. One second you were standing there, and the next Finn was about to lose an eye."
Other trainees surged forward, genuine excitement replacing the earlier tension that had gripped the room. Bren clapped him on the back hard enough to make him stagger, a wide grin splitting his face. Sara, a quiet girl who'd never spoken to him before, offered a shy smile and a nod of respect, her hands wringing together nervously. Even some of the older cohort members who'd been dismissive earlier now looked at him with reassessment written clearly on their faces, whispering to each other with furtive glances.
Caleb accepted the congratulations, forcing himself to smile, to nod, to play the part of the humble victor overwhelmed by unexpected success. The warmth of their acceptance was a welcome contrast to Hatch's institutional threat. But even as he performed the role, his eyes were scanning the room, searching for the other half of the equation.
He found them.
Narbok's crew had retreated to a corner, the usual swagger and cruel confidence gone. Finn was still shaking, his face blotchy with tears and humiliation, his leathers still stained. He sat hunched on a bench, his arms wrapped around himself as if trying to physically hold himself together. Durk stood beside him, one massive hand on the smaller boy's shoulder, but his eyes were on Caleb. The big Mycari's perpetual glower had shifted into something more uncertain, wary, like a dog that had just seen its master beaten.
And Narbok.
The pure-blood Mycari stood apart from his friends, his back rigid, his arms crossed over his chest. His face was pale beneath his forest-green skin, all trace of his usual arrogant confidence gone. His jaw worked, clenching and unclenching in a rhythm that betrayed his agitation. He looked like a young man whose understanding of the world had just been upended. His head lifted, his stare locking with Caleb's across the crowded room, and for a moment, there was something almost vulnerable in his expression. Fear. Confusion. The realization that he was no longer the apex threat in his environment, perhaps.
Caleb stared for a long, deliberate moment, then turned back to his friends, dismissing Narbok as completely as he'd dismissed Finn in the arena.
The celebration continued for several more minutes, the room filled with animated discussion of the day's matches. Caleb listened with half an ear, his mind filing away observations about who had fought well, who had choked under pressure, and who had revealed unexpected depths of skill or cruelty. Corinne was still buzzing with energy, bouncing on her toes as she recounted every second of the match to anyone who would listen. Leo remained close, as if afraid Caleb might vanish if he stepped too far away.
As the initial energy began to fade, Caleb gently steered Corinne and Leo toward the back of the room. He guided them with small touches and subtle shifts in position, aiming for a less crowded path to the exit. He was done with the garrison for the day.
The move inadvertently brought them close to a corner where the elites had separated themselves from the common rabble. Caleb recognized them immediately from his own observations during training. Rielle Draha stood with her arms folded, her silver-blonde hair braided with obsidian beads that clicked softly when she moved. Her violet eyes glittered with cruel amusement as she watched the room. Beside her, Kasien Blodwen's compact, powerful frame practically vibrated with barely contained energy. His orange eyes were still bright from watching the earlier fights, and his bronze gauntlets hummed with suppressed power. And slightly apart from both of them, sitting on a bench with the posture of someone profoundly bored, was Astrin Kaelix. Her steel-gray eyes were fixed on some point in the middle distance, as if the entire room and everyone in it was beneath her notice.
Rielle's musical voice was audible over the noise of the room. "I do admire the artistry." Her tone casual, as if critiquing a painting. She tilted her head slightly, studying Caleb with the detached interest of a naturalist examining an insect. "Not the strike itself, that was crude. Effective, certainly, but crude. No, the humiliation. That was a lovely touch. Letting him see it coming, letting him know there was nothing he could do to stop it, and then standing there afterward like some vengeful statue. Very theatrical."
Kasien scoffed, his voice carrying a rough edge. He uncrossed his arms and leaned forward slightly, his gauntlets clinking. "The strike was the only part that mattered. Efficient. Overwhelming. A problem identified and eliminated in the span of a heartbeat. The rest was just theatrics for the crowd."
Astrin sighed. She didn't even look at them, her posture remaining perfectly still. "Must you both be so tedious?" Her voice was clear and melodic but utterly devoid of warmth. "It was a foregone conclusion. The weaker creature was eliminated by the stronger. Next."
Caleb felt Corinne stiffen beside him, her hand tightening on his arm. Leo's breath caught, the boy's natural fear of confrontation warring with the anger that flashed across his face. But Caleb simply guided them both forward, his expression neutral. He refused to give the nobles the satisfaction of a reaction. His face remained calm, though his mind was cataloguing every word, every micro-expression, every tell.
Rielle values the psychological component of combat. She's a sadist who takes pleasure in the process of breaking an opponent. She'll prolong fights, toying with her prey. That creates openings.
Kasien is direct, valuing overwhelming force and efficiency. He'll come at me like a battering ram, all power and aggression. Predictable.
And Astrin... she sees the entire thing as beneath her. That arrogance is a weapon I can use.
The observations filed themselves away in his mind, each one a piece of intelligence that might mean the difference between victory and defeat when the inevitable confrontations came.
The door to the prep room swung open. Captain Hatch strode in, his presence immediately commanding the attention of every person in the space. Conversations died mid-sentence. Every trainee turned to face him, bodies automatically straightening into parade rest despite the informal setting. Even the nobles shifted, their casual arrogance muted by the pressure of military authority.
Hatch's eyes swept the room, taking in the aftermath of the day's violence as a commander evaluating his troops after a battle. His look lingered on Narbok for a moment, something cold and disapproving flickering across his features before moving on. When he finally spoke, his voice was pitched to carry without shouting, each word crisp and clear.
"Today's matches revealed much about this cohort. Some of you exceeded expectations. Others fell short." His eyes found Corinne, and his expression softened fractionally. The ghost of approval touched his face. "And a few demonstrated that intelligence and adaptability can triumph over raw power."
Corinne's face flushed with pride, throwing her shoulders back.
Hatch's gaze shifted to Leo. He gave a small nod of acknowledgment. "Courage is not the absence of fear. It is acting despite fear. Well done, Tanner."
Leo stood a little straighter, his chest swelling.
Then the captain's eyes found Narbok. His jaw tightened, and his voice became harsher. "Brutality without purpose is not strength. It is a failure of discipline and a waste of resources. The Dominion values warriors who can control their power, not animals who revel in inflicting unnecessary pain. You dishonored yourself and this garrison today."
Narbok's face went from pale to ashen. His mouth opened as if to protest, then closed again with a snap. The trainees watched with a mixture of satisfaction and discomfort, others looking away as if witnessing something too awkward to observe.
Finally, Hatch looked at Caleb. "And some of you have revealed that there is far more beneath the surface than initial observation suggested. The tournament will be an excellent opportunity to see what else is brought to light."
Hatch held them for three long heartbeats before continuing. "You are dismissed. Rest well. Some of you have many fights ahead."
A collective breath was released. Trainees began to move toward the door in small groups, their voices rising again in animated discussion of the day's events. The energy shifted from nervous anticipation to the buzzing relief of survival.
Caleb felt the adrenaline that had carried him finally start to fade. His hands were steady, but there was a weariness in his core that had nothing to do with physical exertion. The significance of the day, of the choices he'd made and the attention he'd drawn, pressed down on. His shoulders sagged slightly, and he had to consciously straighten his spine to maintain his posture.
He forced a smile for his friends, deliberately injecting warmth into his voice to counter the torpor that had settled over him. "Come on." He gestured toward the door with his spear, the movement casual and inviting. "We need food, we need drink, and we need to celebrate properly. The Hearthsong is calling, and I don't know about you two, but I plan to eat my weight in Gareth's cooking and not think about spears or tournaments or any of this for at least a few hours."
Corinne's face lit up. She bounced on her toes, her energy renewed. "Yes! Oh, that sounds perfect. Mom will want to hear every detail, and Dad will probably have something amazing waiting for us."
Leo nodded eagerly, his natural anxiety giving way to genuine excitement. He smiled, a real, unguarded smile that made him look years younger. "I've never actually eaten at the Hearthsong before."
Caleb put a hand on the boy's shoulder, squeezing gently. "Well, today you're my guest. And trust me, Gareth's stew is worth every silver."
He led them out of the prep room, moving from the stress of the garrison toward the promise of camaraderie waiting at the inn. He imagined he could feel eyes on his back—Hatch's calculating assessment, Narbok's shaken uncertainty, and the nobles' keen interest. The implications of it followed him like shadows, a reminder that his performance today had changed something fundamental about his life on Veraxus.
But for now, he chose to focus on the road ahead and the laughter of his friends at his side.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Hopefully, this helps clarify some of Caleb's thought process. I've been trying to build up to this point for a while.
Thanks everyone for reading!
FWIW, I'm only a couple of chapters ahead of you folks, but right now it seems like book 1 will end in the early 60's. I want to get it on your radar now so it's not a surprise, but I'm looking hard at taking a couple of week break after book 1 fully releases to the public. I've had 3 publishers reach out and need to find some time to actually deal with that, which sounds like a lot of editing. Patreon subs will be paused if I end up taking the break. I read some other author's keep the subs rolling while going on small stints of hiatus... but I think that's bad form. I'll keep you posted as that gets closer.
See you tomorrow.
Jon
P.S.
I'm going to put out some of my thoughts on how I was trying to Caleb here. It might be spoiler-y to some people, so I advise you not to keep reading if that's something you want to stay well away from.
I can't obfuscate spoilers in Pateon (or at least I can't figure out how to), so don't read below if you don't want my perspective on some of the Caleb progression that lead to him going loud.
I say again, don't read the bullet points below if you don't want to introduce my bias to your PoV.
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Here are some of the seeds I've been trying to plant to lead up to this:
The strengthening of the bonds of the found family, and seeing Corinne/Leo as surrogate kiddos
Him being more dismissive towards the fear of conscription outside the Guild Hall in chapter 32 (this was a retcon I did in the post note of Chapter 40. Some Patrons might have missed this change entirely, as we were past it at the time of writing)
Chapter 39/40 when he's going through the training/remembrance and resolving to be a threat to those that would hurt Corinne and Leo since he can't protect them directly in the tournament
Chapter 41/42 the commitment to winning by investing all of his gold into power, implying that he's going to have to reveal himself if he wants to place in the top 3
Chapter 46 witnessing Narbok's cruelty being a final straw. He would naturally fear that happening to Corinne or Leo
Maybe that helps clarify. Maybe it doesn't. But the goal was to foreshadow this moment, and do it in a way that felt in character.
Cheers,
Jon
Comments
Jon Steinke
Thank you Matthew! You get it! :D
Jon Steinke
Thanks for the feedback sdf. These are all really good points, especially the comment about Leo.
sdf
TFTC. Genuinely enjoyed it. I didn't think Leo Tanner was estranged from his family. Or that they wouldn't have been in attendance, or engaged, much less enthusiastic about his winning. Wouldn't he need to go spend time with family rather than jaunting off with his friends to an Inn? Doesn't he have a father who will greet him at the door with an angry glare or worse, informing him that his mother spent hours making a dinner for him to celebrate his win, and he let it get cold while he was doing what precisely? Doesn't he have any siblings who were rooting for him? The other thing that's a bit jarring about the tournament, at a distance, is how completely unprepared everyone is for actual sparring. It's as if none of them ever went one-on-one against one another with practice staves, with blunted ends, because I imagine they would have gotten really used to what happens when you go all-in with strength and no technique, and run up a fair bill with healers who had to fix torn ligaments, broken bones, bruises, ... nearly every raw recruit or even the baby tigers in martial arts classes have more experience in hand-to-hand than these kids, it seems, from their surprise and shock at someone engaging them with a brute-force assault. Granted, it's possibly worse now that the limiters are off, but I'd expect more dread than shock. The styles of all of the students would be somewhat known by this point, unless it was all theory and no practice, and Day One of Practice was six weeks in and "we're throwing you in a ring and telling you to try not to kill one another"? That or there were very serious limits on sparring that left them almost completely unprepared, all form and no contact.
Matthew Bernardin
Editing is always where you loose all your time lol. The curse of the author, no matter how much you edit and polish it never seems really done. Congrats on the publishers sniffing around :)
