Jon Steinke
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Chapter 46: Making A Statement
🕑 Added 2025-11-04 12:25:01 +0000 UTCAUTHOR'S NOTE:
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Leo stumbled through the doorway like a man walking on clouds, his face ghostly pale, eyes distant with shock. His spear dragged behind him, forgotten in his daze, the weapon seeming too heavy for hands that still trembled with leftover adrenaline.
"I won," he whispered to no one in particular. "I actually won."
The prep room erupted.
Corinne launched herself across the space, catching Leo in a fierce embrace that nearly knocked him off his feet. Her delighted shriek could probably be heard by the spectators above, and her arms wrapped around his shoulders with the intensity of someone celebrating a miracle.
"You magnificent, wonderful, brilliant person!" she shouted into his ear. "I knew you could do it!"
Other trainees surged forward, genuine excitement replacing the earlier tension. Bren clapped Leo on the back hard enough to make him stagger. Even some of the older cohort members who rarely acknowledged the younger trainees offered nods of approval or brief words of congratulation.
Caleb felt his heart swell with pride as he watched his friend bask in the attention. Leo's usual hunched shoulders had straightened, and for once in his life, the boy wasn't apologizing for taking up space. The transformation was remarkable—from terrified victim to unlikely victor in the span of a single fight.
"How does it feel?" Caleb asked, grinning as he reached them.
Leo's eyes found his through the barrage, wide and still disbelieving. "Like I'm going to wake up any second. This can't be real, can it? I actually beat someone in a fight. Me. The kid who trips over his own shadow. I just got lucky…"
"Luck is when opportunity meets preparation. You beat someone because you listened and practiced and stayed calm under pressure. When your chance came, you were able to capitalize on it because of the work you had put in beforehand. That's skill, Leo. Don't sell yourself short. Well done."
"Thank you," he managed, voice barely audible over the noise. "That... that means a lot."
Corinne beamed at Caleb over Leo's shoulder, her grip on her friend never loosening.
The celebration continued for several minutes, voices raised in animated discussion of the match. The mood felt infectious, a reminder that the outcome of any fight was uncertain. That maybe they could win too.
Through the noise, Caleb caught sight of the scrying mirror and realized the next match was already beginning. The room's attention gradually shifted back to the silent display, conversations dying as eyes fixed on the magical window.
Durk faced Evren Coburn in the arena, the brutish Mycari squaring off against a lean, dark-eyed elf who moved with obvious skill. Evren's footwork was clean, his stance athletic, and his initial attacks demonstrated a level of technical proficiency that made the matchup seem plainly one-sided.
For the first minute, it was. Evren controlled the distance, his spear dancing in tight patterns that kept Durk constantly off-balance. The bigger boy's clumsy swings missed by inches as Evren seemed to dodge them with ease. When Evren finally committed to a riposte, his technique was flawless—a textbook example of turning an opponent's momentum against them.
Durk's spear flew from his grip, clattering across the platform as he stumbled backward. Evren pressed his advantage immediately, closing the distance with his weapon raised for what should have been a finishing thrust.
His foot caught on Durk's fallen spear.
The skilled fighter went down hard, his own weapon spinning away as he hit the wooden platform. Before he could recover, Durk was on him. His fists rose and fell with mechanical savagery, while Evren desperately tried to fend off the attacks and dislodge the brute who was straddling him like a horse.
Blood flew for the first time in the tournament.
Evren's attempts to cover his face grew weaker with each blow. His legs kicked frantically at first, then subsided to sporadic twitches. Only when his arms dropped completely did Durk finally pause, chest heaving as he stared down at his handiwork.
The prep room fell quiet. Corinne's hand had risen to cover her mouth, her earlier joy evaporating like morning mist.
"Such brutality…" someone whispered.
Evren wasn't moving. His face was a mask of blood, his nose clearly broken, one eye already swelling shut. He managed only the weakest tap against the platform before his hand fell limp, and the bell finally rang.
Specialist Spinova rushed onto the platform, her white robes pristine against the crimson splatters. She shoved Durk off Evren, and began to check over the wounded boy. Her hands glowed with golden light as she knelt beside the defeated fighter, and within moments the worst of the damage began to reverse itself. But even magical healing couldn't erase what they had all witnessed.
Durk raised his bloody fists to the crowd, his slack-jawed expression transformed into something approaching feral satisfaction. The arena responded with a roar that seemed to shake the very earth.
One mistake, Caleb thought grimly. One tiny mistake and technical superiority becomes completely meaningless.
The trend continued through the next two matches. Clean technique gave way to desperate scrambles. The magical healing that followed each fight became a necessity rather than a precaution. By the time Fendrel Greenshade stepped onto the platform to face Petra, the atmosphere in the prep room had shifted from excitement to anxious dread.
Petra was a half-elf like Caleb, her athletic build and alert posture suggesting speed and agility over raw power. Against Fendrel's broader frame and obvious strength, she should have had every advantage in technique and mobility.
She never got the chance to use them.
Fendrel's opening attack was a devastating overhead strike that nearly shattered her guard on impact. The blow drove her to one knee, her arms visibly shaking from the force of absorption. Before she could recover, he was on her with a series of punishing strikes that cared nothing for form or elegance.
From across the room, Caleb could hear Fendrel's brothers crying out in encouragement. Caleb glanced over as other voices joined them—Narbok's crew, their faces twisted with ugly pleasure.
"Get the dull-ear! Get her!"
Fendrel's final strike sent Petra sprawling across the platform, her spear skittering away across the arena. She tried to rise, failed, then tapped her submission against the stone with obvious reluctance. Even in defeat, her eyes blazed with frustrated anger.
The arena erupted in approval. In the prep room, the younger trainees looked sick.
The next three fights followed the same ugly pattern. Raw aggression crushed refined skill, and the crowd roared for the violence.
Then Narbok stepped onto the platform.
Caleb had seen him fight during training, but this was different. In the arena, surrounded by thousands of screaming voices, Narbok moved with a confidence that seemed to fill the entire space. His opponent, Isella, was no easy target—her speed had already earned respect during their training sessions—but something about Narbok's presence made the outcome feel inevitable.
The fight began with a flurry of exchanges that showcased both fighters' skills. Isella's darting attacks forced Narbok to work for his openings, her natural agility keeping her just out of reach of his more powerful strikes. For a moment, it seemed like technique might triumph over intimidation.
Then Narbok caught her wrist.
The moment of contact was brief, but devastating. Isella's cry of pain carried over the noise of the crowd as something in her left elbow gave way with an audible pop. She tried to swing her spear with one good hand, but was defenseless against Narbok's follow-up.
His spear shaft swept her legs, sending her crashing to the platform. But instead of pressing for a quick finish, Narbok circled her like a predator savoring its kill. His eyes gleamed with cruel glee as Isella struggled to rise while cradling her damaged arm.
She managed to get to one knee before he struck again.
The cut to her leg was precise and deliberate, aimed to cripple. Isella's scream was drowned out by the crowd's bloodlust now, but her agony was written in every line of her body as she collapsed back to the stone. Her left leg could hold no weight, neatly hamstrung.
Still, she refused to submit.
Narbok's circling continued, his spear tip tracing lazy patterns in the air as if he was relishing her defiance. He seemed to be speaking to her, his mouth moving in what could only be taunts. She dug her good heel into the stone, shoving herself backward while trying to keep her spear pointed toward him.
The feint came without warning—a quick thrust toward her face that made her flinch backward, exposing her torso. Narbok's real attack followed immediately, his spear driving forward with all his strength behind it.
The point took her just below the ribs.
Caleb felt his disgust harden into something cold as he watched Isella convulsing around the embedded weapon. Her mouth was open in a silent scream, her hands clutching uselessly at the ash shaft protruding from her body. Blood spread across the platform in a growing pool.
Around him, the prep room had gone dead silent. Someone was retching in the corner. Corinne's face had turned completely white; all traces of her earlier excitement vanished as if they had never existed.
*Where's the [Life Shield]?* Wasn't the magical protection supposed to prevent exactly this kind of injury?
Specialist Spinova appeared at the edge of the mirror's view, her white robes already stained with blood from the earlier matches. She rushed onto the platform, her lips moving in what had to be an incantation as golden light began to gather around her hands.
Narbok yanked his spear free, the motion sending fresh agony through Isella's body as she collapsed. Blood poured from the wound in a torrent that would have been fatal.
The specialist shoved Narbok aside forcefully, her glowing palms pressing against the horrible wound. For a moment, the golden light intensified to blinding brilliance, creating an aurora that seemed to encompass both healer and warrior. When it faded, Spinova wiped away the blood with her white robe to reveal unblemished skin.
Isella was breathing, but her eyes were unfocused, her body trembling from the phantom pain and trauma.
Spinova shot a withering glare at Narbok, who responded with a sneer and a mocking bow before spinning on his heel and walking off the platform. His face showed pure contentment at a job well done.
When he returned to the prep room moments later, his crew erupted in celebration. Finn's voice cut through the noise, high and excited: "Did you see her face? Did you see how scared she was at the end?"
The rest of the room remained wrapped in disgusted silence.
Captain Hatch appeared in the doorway, his expression unreadable as his eyes swept across the divided room. "Caldorn. Babin. You're up."
Caleb moved away from his friends, movements deliberate and controlled. The icy fury lodged in his chest spread outward, like a glacier of inevitability. As he walked toward the door, Narbok stepped directly into his path.
"You're next, dull-ear."
Finn sidled up beside his leader, puffing himself up like a rooster. "Yeah, this is going to be simple! Hope you learned something from watching Isella scream."
Caleb's eyes glanced from Narbok to Finn. When he spoke, he addressed Narbok, his voice carrying clearly across the room.
"He looks nervous."
Finn sputtered. "Wh-what? I'm not nervous! You're the one who should be—"
But Caleb was already walking past them. Behind him, nervous laughter rippled through the room as other trainees realized what they had just witnessed—the target refusing to be intimidated.
The tunnel leading to the arena was blessedly cool and quiet after the prep room's tension. Caleb's footsteps echoed off the packed walls as he made his way toward the growing roar of the crowd.
*So much for the mighty [Life Shield],* he thought with dark humor. All that impressive magic, and it hasn't triggered once. You'd think for something so supposedly reliable, it would have activated when Narbok ran Isella through. Shame such impressive-sounding protection hasn't actually been tested.
The thought carried him through the tunnel's final curve, and then he stepped up into the arena proper.
Sound slammed into him.
Thousands of voices clamored from tiered seats that rose in concentric circles around the fighting platform. The noise was overwhelming—part sporting event, part mob violence, entirely primal. Above him, Caleb could see the divisions of the Dominion's social order written in the quality of the seating. Duskborn packed into rickety wooden bleachers, their clothes simple but their voices loud. Below, the Gilded sat in cushioned boxes with shade awnings. At the very bottom, behind panels of what looked like polished glass, he caught glimpses of figures who could only be Illuminet nobles.
The scent of roasted meat from festival stalls mixed with something else—something metallic that made his nose wrinkle. It took him a moment to realize he was smelling blood that had soaked into the platform's wood over the course of the day.
Specialist Spinova approached briskly, clearly ready to be done with the final bout. She gestured for both fighters to take their places, and Caleb felt the tingle of magic as she began the incantation for their protective shields.
The [Life Shield] settled around him like a second skin, an intricate, invisible lattice of dormant power. It felt like a cage of spun silver, its aura tasting of sunlight. Fifteen yards away from him, Finn was practically bouncing with excitement, his earlier moment of uncertainty completely forgotten.
"This is going to be so good," the smaller boy crowed, loud enough for the nearby crowd to hear. "Everyone thinks you're some kind of hero because you killed a few feral goblins, but we know better. We've seen you in training. You're nothing special, dull-ear."
Caleb said nothing, his hands adjusting their grip on his spear as he considered what came next.
The vow was simple, forged after an alley filled with the stench of blood and a killer’s cheerful whistle: Never be that powerless again. The quarry had been the first payment on that oath, a savage lesson in what it took to win. It hardened him.
He'd made the decision days ago. The choice had been obvious, if he was being honest with himself. The concerns he'd used to justify his caution had never manifested, and the consequences didn't seem as dire as he'd once feared. And while his quiet, semi-competent persona was a shield for himself, it offered nothing to Corinne or Leo. To protect them, he couldn't just be a wall they stood behind. He had to be a fortress, a threat so undeniable that predators would choose to hunt elsewhere.
Narbok’s brutalization of Isella was the last straw. He remembered Selara’s story of the Mycari, a people betrayed by an emperor, their home renamed 'Vireth’s Fall' as a final insult. A part of him had understood their generational anger, had even felt a sliver of sympathy for them. That feeling was gone now, burned away by what he’d just witnessed. The systematic destruction of Isella wasn't the fury of a wronged warrior. It was the vicious glee of a sadistic bully enjoying the power to inflict pain. Whatever sympathy the Mycari deserved for their history, their descendants in his cohort deserved only contempt.
He remembered the fear in Leo's eyes, the worry that extinguished Corinne's usual light, and the protective instinct of a father roared to life.
Finn, with his eager cruelty and borrowed confidence, would be the perfect messenger.
He was done hiding.
Specialist Spinova stepped back, and Captain Hatch raised his hand to the bell rope. The crowd's roar intensified, a multitude of voices building to a crescendo that seemed to shake the very foundation of the arena.
The bell rang.
[Dash]
[Flicker Step]
[Breaching Thrust]
Caleb burst into action, channeling Stamina into controlled pulses that launched him forward faster than conscious thought. In the same motion, his weapon extended with all the skill he'd struggled for, every muscle in his body contributing to a single, perfect strike aimed directly at Finn's left eye.
The world slowed to a crystallized moment as his spear tip closed the distance. He could see Finn's eyes widening with realization, but it was far, far too late.
Silver light exploded into existence an inch from Finn's face, the [Life Shield] materializing as a brilliant coating of magical energy. Caleb's spear tip struck the barrier, and the Spell released a high-pitched metallic ping. The impact sent shock waves through both weapon and wielder.
The shield held for a second before shattering into glittering fragments that dissolved in the air.
Caleb absorbed the recoil through his entire body, his stance holding firm as his spear tip continued to rest a hair's breadth from Finn's still-widening eye. Steam rose from the weapon's point where it had contacted the magical barrier, and the scent of hot metal filled the air between them.
Finn stood frozen in terror, his mouth hanging open and his eyes locked on the steel point that had nearly taken his life.
The crowd fell into complete, stunned silence.
Comments
Jon Steinke
Thanks Vas!
Vas
Good chapter!
Jon Steinke
Woooooo!
Muntu Omnyama
Yessss!
Matthew Bernardin
Can't always do the smart thing. I think this chapter is great for the change in mentality.
Ihor
Seems unwise to show off like this. A decision driven purely by emotion with little practical benefit. Sure, he is beyond impressive for someone Thal's age, but he is still at the bottom of the barrel. If he manages to win the tournament, he will get resources to advance a step to not be at the lowest grade. But to Selara and anyone else of consequence he is a bug still either way and will be for some time. Revealing his potential like this would only put him on their radar and make them ask how he got to this level of proficiency at such a young age. It might scare off a thug or two, but he would have been able to fend them off anyway easily enough. Let's just hope that some people to take notice of his antics would be benevolent or that Selara would shield his ass.
