Jon Steinke
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Chapter 45: A Different Kind of Strength
🕑 Added 2025-11-03 12:25:02 +0000 UTCThe prep room door swung open with a weary creak, breaking Caleb's contemplations. Captain Hatch held it, his expression impassive as he ushered the two combatants inside. Corinne entered first. Her face was flushed with exertion and her training leathers were scuffed, but her eyes blazed with a triumphant light that seemed to fill the room. Mala walked a pace behind, physically unscathed, but her shoulders slumped. Hatch gave a curt nod and turned back toward the arena corridor without a word.
Corinne stood across the room, safe and incandescent with her victory, and a breath he hadn't known he was holding shuddered out of him.
Most of the trainees surged toward Corinne with genuine congratulations, but Caleb's attention snagged on the handful who approached Mala instead. Tamsin Mhuire appeared at the defeated girl's elbow, offering a waterskin without fanfare. Bren Paz from the older cohort squeezed her shoulder and murmured something that made her expression brighten. Even through his own relief, Caleb was heartened through the display.
He peered across the room to where Narbok leaned against the far wall, amber eyes tracking the scene. The Mycari boy's lip curled in undisguised contempt. Finn and Durk flanked him like loyal hounds, their faces mirroring their leader's sneering dismissal. Where others saw courage and sportsmanship, the trio saw only weakness.
"Thal!"
Corinne's voice cut through his observations as she broke away from the crowd. She practically bounced on her toes despite the exhaustion shadowing her face, her hazel eyes bright with manic energy.
"Did you see? Did you see the sweep at the end? She was so strong, and I thought I was going to lose, but then I remembered what you said about waiting for my moment and—"
Caleb raised his palms, a grin tugging at his mouth despite himself. "Slow down."
"I mean it!" she continued, words tumbling over each other. "When she charged at the beginning, I thought I was done for. She hit so hard, Thal. Like being run over by a cart. But then something just clicked, you know? I could see what she was going to do before she did it. Every attack had this pattern, this rhythm, and once I found it, it was like dancing instead of fighting."
Leo pressed closer, his face pale but his eyes bright with vicarious excitement. "The crowd went completely silent when you made that final move. Even Captain Hatch looked impressed."
Corinne's grin stretched impossibly wider. "Really? By the spirits, I can't believe I actually won! The whole inn must have been going wild watching the mirror. Mom was probably beside herself. And Dad—he'll give me that gruff look and complain about the spectacle, but I know he'll be proud!"
A paternal pride swelled in Caleb's chest. This was the essence of teaching, the reward of watching someone take his lessons and transform them into a personal victory. In his old life, the closest equivalent had been watching Katie master a difficult soccer move or seeing Jack finally grasp a challenging math concept. The feeling was a poignant echo of his past life, yet completely new in this context.
Caleb clapped her on the back. "You earned it. Every bit of it. You adapted under pressure and found a way to win. That's not luck—that's skill."
The shared moment evaporated as a cheer erupted from the trainees clustered around the scrying mirror. Caleb turned his attention back to the display, where the next match had already started. Sabine Gibbs, a compact girl with braided hair, held her defensive stance against Morian Greenshade's relentless assault. The fight was everything Corinne's had not been—brutal, messy, and driven by raw aggression.
The lanky Mycari wielded his spear like a club, each swing powered by teenage fury and desperation. His technique was serviceable but unrefined, every attack telegraphed well in advance. Sabine held her ground through superior footwork and calculated risks, but Caleb could see the strain building in her defensive posture.
He leaned closer to Leo, lowering his voice. "Look at his stance. See how he plants his feet before every big swing? He's trading mobility for power, but power means nothing if you can't hit your target."
Leo nodded tensely, his knuckles white where they gripped the edge of the basin. "He looks so angry."
"Anger makes you stupid. Watch."
As if summoned by his words, Morian's frustration finally boiled over. Sabine deflected another heavy swing, the impact with the ground sending vibrations through his arms that made him grimace. Instead of resetting and trying again, he lunged forward in a wild, overextended thrust that left him completely off-balance. Sabine sidestepped the clumsy attack and brought her spear shaft down hard across his extended forearm. The strike was so keen Caleb thought he could hear the crack of wood against flesh even through the mirror's magical silence. Morian's weapon clattered to the platform as he clutched his injured arm.
The fight ended with Sabine's spear tip hovering near Morian's head.
"See that? He chased the hit instead of setting up properly. All the power in the world means nothing if you're out of position after you throw it. Control is strength."
Leo swallowed hard, his Adam's apple bobbing. The lesson wasn't penetrating—the boy's mind was clearly elsewhere, lost in anticipation of his own approaching trial. Fear had a way of making even the most practical advice feel abstract and useless.
Moments later, the prep room door opened again. Captain Hatch stepped onto the threshold, his presence silencing the scattered conversations. He had the brisk air of a man keeping a tight schedule. "Tanner. Mhuire. You're up."
The blood drained from Leo's face. He stared at the floor, his hands beginning to shake as he started muttering under his breath, a frantic, whispered litany. "A Tanner holds the line... fear is a luxury... a Tanner..." His breathing quickened to short, panicked gasps, the words failing him as pure terror took over. Around them, the other trainees fell silent, sensing the significance of the moment. Everyone knew Leo's reputation. This felt less like a test and more like a public execution.
Corinne immediately stepped to Leo's side, her triumph forgotten. "Look at me." She grabbed his arm in a fierce grip, her hazel eyes blazing with determination. "You can do this. You know the forms. We practiced them until we were black and blue. Trust your training."
Caleb moved to Leo's other side, placing a steadying grip on the boy's shoulder. Through the leather of his training armor, he could feel the fine tremor running through Leo's frame; like a plucked string. The fear seemed bone-deep and overwhelming, but underneath it, Caleb thought he sensed something else. In the straightened spine, and the thrown back shoulders. Resolve.
"Breathe. Remember the lessons. You are not a wall meant to be broken. Just guide her attacks, one at a time. Let her exhaust herself against you."
Leo's wide blue eyes locked on Caleb's face like a drowning man grabbing for a rope. He nodded jerkily, his breathing still too fast but becoming more controlled. "One block at a time. I can do that."
Tamsin stood near the door, her copper hair caught back in a tight ponytail that emphasized the angles of her face. Unlike Leo's obvious terror, she radiated coiled determination, her slender frame held with the rigid posture of someone trying to prove their strength through sheer force of will. Caleb had observed her during training sessions—she fought with an aggressive, almost reckless style that seemed designed to compensate for her slight build. She would see Leo as someone she should overpower, which could work in his favor if he stayed calm.
The two trainees filed out through the stone door, leaving the prep room in tense silence. Caleb's attention immediately went to the scrying mirror, where Specialist Spinova started moving between the fighters to activate their protective shields. The magical barriers shimmered into existence with a soft silver light, and then the bell rang.
The silence of the mirror felt more oppressive this time. Without the soundtrack of clashing weapons and shouted commands, Caleb found himself reading the entire story through body language and movement alone. Every shift in balance, every telegraph of attack, every moment of hesitation became magnified in the window-like display.
Tamsin opened with exactly the aggressive charge Caleb had expected. Her spear shot forward in rapid thrusts, each one aimed at forcing Leo backward and establishing dominance. He looked less like a fighter and more like a man trying to fend off a swarm of angry bees, but even in his obvious terror, Leo was executing what he'd been taught. His parries were a fraction late and his footwork more shuffle than glide, but the angle of his spear was always correct. He wasn't trying to stop her attacks—he was redirecting them, sending each thrust sliding harmlessly past his body.
Too slow, Caleb thought, his fingers clenched into fists. But the technique is right. Be the ramp, not the wall. Keep moving, Leo.
Tamsin changed her rhythm, her next attack a quick feint followed by a lashing thrust at his ribs. Leo’s parry was a fraction of a second too late. His spear shaft deflected the worst of the blow, but the metal tip still scored a shallow groove across his forearm, slicing through the boiled leather of his vambrace.
Leo appeared to cry out as he stumbled back, briefly looking at the cut on his arm. The younger teen's face was a mask of concentrated panic as they reengaged, his wide eyes fixed on Tamsin's spear tip as if it were a striking viper. Every successful deflection seemed to surprise him, as if he couldn't quite believe in his own ability to survive. But he was surviving, and with each redirected attack, his movements gained confidence.
Tamsin's initial fury curdled into frustration. Her attacks weren't landing, and her expression soured. Instead of the satisfying crash of weapon against weapon, her spear kept sliding off Leo's defense. It was like trying to punch a river; her force was simply guided away, leaving her stumbling and off-balance. The slender girl's shoulders began to tighten with annoyance, her careful timing starting to deteriorate.
She's getting angry, Caleb observed with growing excitement. Leo's not fighting back, just surviving, and it's making her frustrated.
Through the mirror, he watched Leo execute what could generously be called a parry but was really more of a panicked slap. Tamsin's spear slid past his guard, the tip coming within inches of his ribs, but somehow missing. The near-miss seemed to break something in the copper-haired girl's composure. Her next attack was wilder, powered more by rage than technique.
Leo stumbled backward, his feet tangling momentarily before he caught his balance. But even in his clumsiness, his spear came up at the right angle, sending Tamsin's thrust skittering off to one side. The girl's lips pulled back in what could only be described as a snarl, and she raised her weapon for a massive overhead strike.
Caleb's [Combat Analysis] surged, his perception sharpening to a razor's edge. Time seemed to dilate as [Savant of the Mind] processed the flood of information from the mirror. He saw the subtle telegraph in Tamsin's stance, the shift of weight that broadcast her intent to his trained eye. Her frustration had made her sloppy, and the massive overhead strike would leave her completely extended and vulnerable for a critical second. The entire exchange resolved into a single, perfect point of failure in her form.
The universe narrowed to one flawless instant of opportunity.
There, Caleb thought with electric intensity. That's the shot. Please see it, Leo.
Leo's spear dropped toward the platform in what looked like a defensive crouch but was actually the setup for a [Linebreaker Sweep]. His execution was clumsy—he nearly tripped initiating the motion, and the contact was more of a fumbling clip than a graceful hook. But physics didn't care about elegance. Tamsin's own momentum carried her forward even as her supporting leg was swept away, and she hit the platform hard, her weapon spinning from her grip.
Leo stood over her for a moment, his spear tip wavering uncertainly near her throat, his eyes wide with shock. His mouth hung slightly open, and his feet shuffled as he waited for someone to tell him what came next.
Tamsin stilled for a moment, her face wrestling with what had just happened. Eventually, she slapped the platform twice in submission—slow yet decisive.
The muted ring of the bell reached them through the thick walls. For a heartbeat, the prep room was completely silent, dozens of eyes glued to the mirror in various states of disbelief. The weakest fighter in their cohort had defeated a girl who should have overwhelmed him. Leo had won.
Caleb's eyes remained locked on the display, taking in Leo's stunned expression and the way the boy kept looking at his own spear as if it belonged to someone else. He looked around the arena, catching sight of Captain Hatch standing at the edge of the platform. The captain wasn't looking at Leo—he was looking directly into the mirror, his intense brown eyes seeming to meet Caleb's through the one-way connection. Hatch gave a single, quick nod of approval, and Caleb didn't understand how, but he felt a flash of recognition pass between them.
The tense quiet broke when Corinne let out a joyous scream beside him. "He did it! He actually did it!"
The room erupted in celebration, voices raised in genuine excitement and amazement. Several trainees were already placing bets on the remaining matches, their assumptions about strength and weakness thoroughly upended.
Caleb released a long, shaky breath, a wide grin spreading across his face as pride roared through him. First Corinne, now Leo. Both had faced stronger opponents, their victories earned through intelligence and technique. They had listened, they had learned, and they had made his lessons their own under incredible pressure.
His grin faltered slightly as the ramifications sank in. His friends were safe, their matches concluded successfully. But this was only day one, and there was a lot of tournament left to fight.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
(Revision 11/05/2025 9:29 PM EST, Ability renamed from Tactical Overlay to Combat Solution)
Hope everyone had a great weekend. Reminder that this will be a five chapter week as we move from 16 ahead to 18 ahead. Thank you for your continued support!
Also let me know your thoughts on [Tactical Overlay]. It seemed like a cool idea and that it worked. But now I'm not 100% on it. Curious how it lands with everyone.
Jon
Comments
Jon Steinke
That's very kind of you to offer! And I appreciate the feedback, these are great suggestions. Full transparency on the DM: I'm not sure when I'll be able to look at it with the attention it deserves. I'm pretty in the weeds at the moment trying to maintain the Patreon commitments .
Matthew Bernardin
One way you could vary it is an expositive discussion on the merits of thrusts versus cuts. IE thrusts being faster because a straight line is the shortest distance between two points but this is deceptive because weapon leverage means your hands move shorter distances in a cut then your body does in a thrust or a stop thrust. Or other interesting tidbits about melee combat based on the personality of the characters. You want to make it interesting add descriptions about measure, timing, tempo of the fight rather then just angles and low high. Or have some opponents feint or try and attack the person rather then the weapon ie aim the cut at the hand or wrist or thigh etc and have the other person think about it being a dirty move etcetera. There’s so many ways to spice up your fight sequences. If you want I can send you a DM of an example of one of your own scenes to give you some ideas?
Jon Steinke
This is helpful feedback Ihor! Thank you!
Jon Steinke
Hopefully not 3x, Caleb hasn't fought yet! But I think the criticism is fair. Everyone being fairly mundane right now and using the same weapons, the Corinne and Leo fights felt a bit repetitive to me too. I'm not sure how to vary them more than I have, with the focus more on the different characters and tactics. Tomorrow's chapter will definitely be different though!
Ihor
Thoughts on [Tactical Overlay]: interesting idea, but feels a bit too robotical in your description. Like, he doesn't have AI assistant, so maybe avoid things like "flashing indicator" or "glowing trajectory". In my opinion it would feel more natural if he just visualised the trajectory and determined a weak spot without anything glowing or flashing as if he had AR glasses or something.
R. Maxwell Steele
Uh kinda feels like the same fight 3x.
Jon Steinke
Thanks for the feedback!
Jon Steinke
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Jon Steinke
Those are great insights SDF! Thank you for the feedback!
werotan
Great chapter
sdf
It tells you the what but not the how. That makes it interesting, a problem, which is always good. “It wants me to hit it there? Why?” Alternately, it could be wrong. You hit the target, realize it’s well-armored at that point of impact, and it updates. You just wasted a shot. Or it’s late in the fight and it still hasn’t triggered, you’re exhausting yourself waiting for it to do your thinking for you. There’s several ways to make it frustrating and interesting from a storytelling perspective.
Dan Martin Bredland
Tftc! :)
TJ O'Hare
To me, seems like a nice crossover from our world to his. I like it.
Snake With An Aurora Borealis
Tftc
