Jon Steinke
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Chapter 42: Premium spiritual enhancement services
🕑 Added 2025-10-29 11:25:01 +0000 UTCJakob's Magnificent Market commanded the corner where two streets intersected, its brightly painted storefront impossible to miss. From his displays came the smells of oiled leather and polishing wax, a distinct island in the sea of festival aromas. The merchant himself stood outside his establishment like a carnival barker, gesturing expansively at arrays of weapons, armor, and adventuring gear placed on portable tables. His black hair gleamed with more—whatever passed for pomade in this world—than usual, and his waistcoat had been pressed to parade-ground perfection for the festival's most profitable day.
"It's essential for any serious competitor!" Jakob was proclaiming to a small group of onlookers, holding up a leather baldric festooned with pouches and loops. "The Victory-Guaranteed Reaping Kit! Pre-arranged for maximum efficiency! Healing potions, weapon maintenance supplies, emergency rations, everything a peerless warrior needs to claim a legendary victory!"
Caleb approached from an angle, content to observe the performance. The merchant was in his element, every gesture engineered for maximum dramatic effect, every word chosen to build desire and urgency.
"But friend, you're thinking like a common brawler!" Jakob continued, addressing a skeptical-looking young man. "Adventuring isn't just about raw strength, it's about brilliant preparation! About having the right tool for the unexpected moment! About the difference between victory and defeat!"
The customer remained unconvinced, eventually shaking his head and moving on. Jakob's smile never faltered, but Caleb caught the brief flicker in his eyes as the merchant reassessed his approach for the next potential buyer.
"Thal!" Jakob's voice shifted to genuine warmth as he spotted Caleb. "My exceptional friend! Perfect timing! I was just thinking about you when I assembled this beauty!"
He gestured toward the display with renewed enthusiasm, launching into a prepared pitch. "The Hero of the Quarry deserves nothing less than a complete festival solution! Enhanced healing potions, superior weapon maintenance oils, emergency smoke bombs for tactical retreat, all packaged in this superb custom baldric that distributes mass across both shoulders for optimal balance during combat!"
Caleb raised a hand, his expression polite but firm, cutting through the torrent of salesmanship. "I appreciate the thought, Jakob, but I'm not here for gear."
"Not for—" Jakob's momentum faltered, his showman's instincts jarred by the unexpected response. "Well, certainly, my friend! Always thinking ahead! Perhaps some specialty items then? I have excellent contacts for custom work, or if you're looking for something more exotic—"
"I'm here to buy essence stones."
Jakob's eyes narrowed. The change was instantaneous, a mask dropping into place. Caleb recognized the look. He had seen it many times before, across polished conference room tables, right when the pleasantries ended and the real negotiation began. The jovial pitchman vanished, replaced by the shrewd survivor underneath. The friendly shopkeeper persona was still there, a well-practiced tool, but it was now underlaid with the keen, fixed attention of a predator sizing up worthy prey.
Then the moment passed. Jakob's smile returned, its quality shifting from a carnival barker’s wide appeal to a private banker’s appraisal.
"Magnificent!" he declared, clasping his hands together. "Absolutely stupendous! The Hero of the Quarry has decided to make a serious investment in his future! I knew, I absolutely knew, that a man of your caliber would eventually require my premium spiritual enhancement services!"
He gestured toward the shop's entrance with a flourish that was somehow both theatrical and respectful. "Please step into my office. Essence stone transactions require proper privacy and personal attention."
The interior of Jakob's shop was a sudden refuge from the street's clamor, the festival's noise immediately muffled to a distant hum. It retained its cramped, eclectic character, but the merchant led Caleb directly past the jumbled displays toward a counter at the space's rear. From beneath the polished wooden surface Jakob produced a small wooden box hidden from casual view. The container was crafted from some dark, close-grained wood and bore several small runic inscriptions along its edges.
"Now then," Jakob said, fingers moving deftly across the box's surface to activate obvious security measures, "let's discuss your requirements! I maintain an excellent stock of F-Tier essence stones."
The box opened with a soft, oiled click, revealing an interior lined with plush black velvet. Nestled in custom-cut recesses were perhaps two dozen round stones, each no larger than Caleb's thumbnail, yet they projected a spiritual energy so potent it seemed to warm his skin from a couple of feet away. The red stones pulsed with the warm glow of contained physical enhancement, the blue ones shimmered with the cool light of mental refinement, and the purple specimens seemed to contain swirling galaxies of combined possibility.
"Beautiful, aren't they?" Jakob's voice dropped to the reverent tones usually reserved for religious discussions. "Pure F-Tier essence, completely uncontaminated by the spiritual corrosion that makes spirit stones so problematic. These exquisite stones form directly from defeated dungeon monsters, a natural miracle within the dungeon's crucible."
Caleb studied the displayed stones, his [Spiritual Perception] confirming Jakob's claims. Unlike the cloudy, gritty sensation of the spirit stones he'd been forced to use, these radiated clean, pristine energy. The spiritual touch was like dipping his fingers into liquid sunlight, warm and utterly pure. No impurities, no Contamination, no spiritual sludge to clog his energy channels.
His gaze lingered on the blue stones. They shimmered with cool light, a promise of the power he’d seen the elf wield at the inn on his first day. Magic. He remembered the night after Selara agreed to take him on as her apprentice. Sitting on his cot in the dark, the memory of the elf carving runes in the air played on a loop in his mind. He’d felt the cool pool of Mana in his core, a resource he'd used for little more than enhancing his perception.
He had extended his hand, just as he’d seen the elf do, and used his Intent to draw a thread of Mana. The energy flowed easily, a cool current traveling up his arm and into his palm. For a moment, it had even worked. A faint, shimmering blue light coalesced a few inches from his fingertips. But it had no structure, no stability. The instant he tried to shape it into the rune’s form, the light wavered and collapsed, dissolving into a harmless shower of fading motes. It was like trying to build with smoke. He had the fuel, but couldn't figure out how to give it structure.
His eyes shifted to the red stones. They pulsed with crimson warmth, similar to the energy he felt flooding his muscles when he used [Dash]. That was different. It was internal, a matter of directing power he could feel within his own body. And most importantly, it produced results.
One of these days he was going to crack the lock on what made magic tick. But not today.
He kept his expression carefully neutral. "What's the price on the reds?"
Jakob's smile broadened. "For a customer of your reputation and future prospects? I can offer you the special rate of fifteen gold per stone. That's practically wholesale, my friend. I'd normally charge eighteen for stones like this."
Eighteen gold. The number was so absurdly inflated it reminded him of an unwelcome memory. The last time he'd seen a price that absurd, it was on a corporate expense report for a ‘synergistic team-building retreat,’ which turned out to be just Dave from accounting taking his buddies golfing.
Caleb suppressed a smile, the memory undermining Jakob’s performance. He’d spent two years dismantling arguments just like this one, arguments built on bluster and appeals to emotion rather than fact.
Time to negotiate.
He leaned back slightly, a picture of casual consideration. "That's quite generous, but I'm afraid you've overestimated both my wealth and my desperation. I was thinking more along the lines of eight gold per stone."
Jakob clutched his chest, his face a mask of theatrical agony. "Eight gold! Hero, you wound me! These aren't common spirit stones anyone can go pull from some monster's gullet! These are pure essence, the kind the Dominion hoards like precious jewels! Obtaining even a handful means slipping past their iron grip and bypassing a fortune in taxes! I'd be selling them at a loss, a truly horrible loss!"
"I understand your position." Caleb’s tone was patient, the one he’d used with pushy used car salesmen. "But I need to consider the market reality. Eight gold would still represent a substantial markup over spirit stones just for convenience, and you'd be moving inventory that might otherwise sit in that box for months."
"Months!" Jakob sputtered. "My friend, these incredible stones practically sell themselves! Just yesterday I had a customer willing to pay twenty gold each, but I'd already reserved them for preferred clients like yourself!"
Caleb raised an eyebrow. "Twenty gold each? For that price, does it also do my laundry and offer encouraging words before a big fight? If they're that valuable, perhaps you should wait for that customer to return."
The comment drew a bark of honest laughter from Jakob. "You're a hard man, Hero of the Quarry! Very well, let's discuss this seriously. Given your recent achievements, I could, perhaps, consider twelve gold per stone. But only because I value our ongoing relationship!"
He leaned forward, his voice quiet but final. "Ten gold. That's a good rate for these stones, and we both know it. It's a fair price, and it lets me buy three stones instead of two."
Jakob held out for another few minutes but eventually capitulated with elaborate sighs and predictions of financial ruin. As they shook hands on the deal, his expression shifted to one of shrewd satisfaction, the look of a merchant who had managed to sell premium goods for twice what he'd paid.
"Perfect!" he declared, selecting three stones from the box with ceremonial care. "Three red for bodily enhancement, an excellent choice for a warrior!"
But as Caleb reached for his coin purse, Jakob raised a finger.
"Wait! One moment!" He ducked beneath the counter and emerged with a small vial filled with swirling, opalescent liquid. The container was no larger than Caleb's thumb, but it emitted a spiritual energy palpable to his enhanced senses.
"For a man of your exquisite ambition," Jakob continued, his voice taking on the breathless quality of someone delivering tremendous news, "power isn't just about attributes, it's about potential! It's about legacy! For just fifty gold more, I can offer you something truly extraordinary!"
He held up the vial, rotating it slowly so the liquid inside caught the light. "Vial of [Fog Hound's Tenacity]! A standard F-Tier bloodline! Enhanced stamina regeneration, improved physical resilience—three powerful stones and a new bloodline, all in one glorious transaction!"
He’d read about this, a rare alchemical process that could graft the spiritual essence of a beast onto a person's soul, granting them a sliver of its innate abilities. It was a shortcut, a way for those without a grand lineage to purchase a minor one. Purchase being the operative word.
He gave a slow shake of his head, deliberately breaking his attention on the swirling liquid. "Tempting, but I need to concentrate on the immediate problem," he said, his tone even. "The stones are the priority."
"A wise man knows his priorities," the merchant said, tucking the vial away with obvious reluctance. "Very well, my friend, thirty gold for three essence stones it is!"
The transaction was completed quickly. Caleb's coin purse grew substantially lighter as he counted out the payment. In return, he received three small stones that weighed almost nothing but felt dense with possibility. Jakob also included one healing potion at cost, bringing the total to thirty-three gold and leaving Caleb with just four gold coins to his name.
Caleb pocketed the stones and potion. He looked down at the four remaining gold coins in his other palm, a pittance compared to what he’d just spent. An idea formed, a final gamble to leverage his last remaining capital.
"Jakob," he said, catching the merchant's attention before he could turn away. "You strike me as a man who knows his way around the city's less... official markets."
Jakob’s professional smile returned, acute and inquisitive. "I maintain a splendid network of contacts across all sectors of commerce, my friend. What did you have in mind?"
"I need a proxy," Caleb said, his tone all business. "Someone to place a few wagers on the tournament for me. I'd offer a twenty percent commission on any winnings for your discretion and effort."
The merchant’s eyes lit up with the fire of pure, unadulterated opportunity. He clapped his hands together with a resounding crack. "My friend! You are a man after my own heart! You aren't just looking for a bookie, you are seeking a purveyor of premium speculative investment services! A wonderful request! I would be honored to act as your financial agent in this endeavor! What is your initial stake?"
Caleb held up three of his remaining coins. "These."
Jakob’s smile faltered for a fraction of a second, the grand vision of a lucrative side business shrinking dramatically. He recovered with practiced speed, his expression once again radiating enthusiasm.
"Three gold!" he declared, as if Caleb had offered two hundred. "A grand wager! A bold statement of intent! And what shall be the stakes?"
Caleb thought for a moment, then slowly replied. "That… that I make it to the semi-finals."
The statement hung in the air, a test of both Caleb's nerve and Jakob's poker face. The merchant’s gaze sharpened, assessing him not as a customer, but as a commodity.
Jakob let out a low whistle. "The odds on a complete unknown will be... long."
"That's why it's a good bet," Caleb replied, his voice even.
A slow grin spread across Jakob's face, this one genuine. "Magnificent. Absolutely magnificent." He scooped the three gold coins from Caleb's palm. "Consider it done."
As Caleb prepared to leave, Jakob's theatrical persona dropped away. His voice became quiet and, surprisingly, sincere.
"That's a big bet, kid," he said, meeting Caleb's eyes. "Don't lose."
The simple statement carried more import than all of Jakob's previous sales pitches, a shared acknowledgment of the risks and their consequences.
"I don't plan to."
Caleb turned and walked back into the festival crowd. The near-empty pouch bounced lightly against his hip. In his pocket, the three essence stones seemed to pulse with contained energy, most of his wealth transformed into the raw materials of advancement.
The full significance of his decision pressed down on him as he moved through the celebration. Most every coin he'd accumulated through weeks of grueling labor and life-threatening danger were gone, converted into a handful of condensed power. If his gamble paid off, he would enter the tournament with strength enough to matter. If it failed, he would need to put his forager study into practice sooner rather than later.
No, he corrected himself, the faces of Corinne and Leo coming to mind. If it fails, I'll be attending a funeral.
He stopped at a food vendor's stall, the air rich with the sizzle and smoke of grilling meat, and purchased a skewer with some of his remaining coin. He looked toward the garrison district, where the tournament preparations were already visible over the surrounding buildings.
Magical constructs had been growing throughout the week. Spectator stands woven from living wood stretched toward the sky, their leaves rustling in the afternoon breeze. Arena boundaries were marked by flowering vines that would serve as both decoration and barrier. The entire complex spoke of careful preparation for an event that was both entertainment and a lethal business.
Caleb finished his meal and began walking in that direction, intent on the challenge to come. It was time to see if his coins were enough to buy a fighting chance in a tournament where people died for sport.
The festival throng continued to swirl around him, but his concentration had narrowed to the task ahead. In a few hours, he would know whether his wager had been wisdom or foolishness. Either way, there was no going back.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Tomorrow will be bonus chapter 2/2 for the third milestone. Thank you all so much for your support!
Small revision comment. I'm proofreading the public chapters a final time before they go up, and was going over Chapter 27 for tomorrow. Joseph Sutherland (Chapter 30) mentioned that the use of Caleb's catchphrases was breaking the narrative in some parts. I didn't see it at the time... but I did today. As much as I loved the "holy crumbing-mackerel" shenanigans, and it made sense to me when I wrote it originally... it didn't today. So below is the quote of how that's been changed. The catchphrases are near and dear to me... but I agree they need to be used appropriately, and match the tone of the scene.
The goblin lay where he'd left it. Its skull was... wrong. Misshapen. Broken. One pale eye stared at nothing while the other was lost in a mess of bone and brain matter. Blood spread in a dark pool, seeping into the thirsty ground.
He'd done that. Not with skill or technique or even courage. He'd done it with a rock and terror and the primal need to live. He should have been exultant, yet he felt so small.
Oh, how he missed his wife in that moment.
Comments
Jon Steinke
Thanks for the support Jonathan! I really appreciate it. Nice name btw... ;) I actually agree with your point. I just didn't want to overcomplicate the magic system for myself and for readers. It would definitely add more layers to the entire thing if it wasn't just about formation rate (drop rate) and there were varying qualities within tier. It'd feel more real, and provide better opportunities for the narrative. Could be worth looking at if I ever get a chance to dev edit.
Falcon79
Had to offer my support with the excellent writing so far! Definitely worth $10. One comment, I think it cheapens the whole concept of spirit and essence stones if the numbers are fixed. Assuming these grow organically, the levels of both contamination and power should vary at least a small amount. For example, one giving 9% instead of 10% contamination would really give a lot more options for growth and depth later, and perhaps the idea of actually judging the stones to pick the best ones instead of all of them being completely equal.
Jon Steinke
I appreciate the feedback. You make some good points. I know what's coming and what's in my head, but it's good to hear what is and isn't making sense at this point. I'm not sure how to revise around this right now but it seems like it needs some help.
Ihor
Your comments responding to Sloth explain some of it, but... Firstly, the risk seems to be overblown dramatically. Leo aside, Corrine clearly wants to be an adventurer and even the lowest danger contracts would be far more dangerous than participating in a tournament with a high level healer on hand. And besides, if your match isn't going great, can't you just surrender? It's not like you have to fight to the bitter end or something. That one kid likely died last year because he got overconfident or just couldn't admit defeat. Another question is how does his power relate to the others? It's singles combat all the way, so why would him winning or losing affect the safety of Corrine or Leo? Like, either of them could be hurt or not based on their own performance only, right?
Jon Steinke
2nd bonus chapter of the third milestone will drop tomorrow, with a chapter Friday as well. I'm going to do my best to not have to slow the posting schedule... time will tell how it goes! The elf comment is a throwback to his first day on Veraxus. Chapter 7 maybe? He sees an elf carving a rune into the air inside the common room of the Hearthsong Inn. Bit of a throwback, some more context might be warranted for remembrance. Thanks.
Msharlo1
Is there a next milestone? I know you are all out of advance chapters, but "I take a day off to build up a back log" could be a good reward. Also I don't remember the elf, did that actually happen in an earlier chapter? If not you may want to rephrase.
