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Chapter 263 - Varsea

🕑 Added 2024-07-17 03:42:37 +0000 UTC

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Ben Heggem

i dont think its quite as bad as you say, a simple half chapter POV of him breaking free then finding Kai would patch the whole issue so therefore its not as large of a fumble to me

Marian Ch

Well, enough chapters were written with the new companion to have a good enough opinion on him and why I dislike his presence. It all boils down to the fact that I found his addition to the group to feel forced and unwarranted. Instead of having the readers find out about his backstory, thus easily endearing the merman, instead we're introduced to him out of nowhere, immediately followed by learning he basically violated the minds of a multitude of people so he can protect himself. This is further compounded by Kai's acceptance which feels out of character given the person you established him to be and the events of the past two years further amplifying his wariness. This all compounds into Oraine's presence coming across as forced and unwanted, which is unfortunate since his background sets him as a good narrative addition otherwise. Instead of a sympathetic, runaway prince with mommy issues and a desperate need to escape the clutches of his awful society and family, we have a character that was introduced in a rather poor light and no amount of backdating narrative makes for it.

Maddi Lion

A chapter from Valela’s pov when Kai came back from the dead would be great though! 😆✨

Maddi Lion

Nah I think the romance between Kai and Valela is already developing at a good level and there’s no need for any new female characters to come in. It would just be a bunch of pages of drama and waste my time when I’d much rather read about all the new places, abilities and shiny loot! :P

wanderer117

At least in my head Flynn is the Face/Rogue, Mat is a Jack of All Trades, Hobbs is DPS (or maybe Burst Dmg) and Rain is the fish out of water Crowd Control. They don't have a tank, so Lou joining up with them in the future would be great. I don't remember if Valela has any mana types that would be good for healing, but if she did then that would be a great compliment to her battle spells.

John Zee

No, Sirens trade with the surface all the time, and merfolk. So, it would make since they'd have their own money, plus a siren is stamped on the coin.

Simon Hoerder

Would be a different kind of story though.

saltyApple

assuming you meant "words" in the A/N at the beginning lol.

Ottstop

One would think hes the main character lmao. meet an op reincarnated guy, have a tragic family situation, meet an op fish friend lmao

Crème Renversée

Considering the revenue from Patreon this likely his full time job

Ben Enz

I would think that is the case

ppbrro

I hope he at least learn from Rain some mental defense, or some interesting upgrades to split minds

ppbrro

Theory: almost all the hard currency sirens and any other sea monsters have comes from sea wreckage so high value is really common - i mean probably not many ships carrying a bazillion copper coins out there-

Simon Hoerder

LOL. Flynn does have talent to pick up socially hopeless but overpowered guys, doesn’t he? Thanks for the chapter!

Random Guy

It was from his own stash so not rains money.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Marbas

Yes it is impressive. I wonder if this is his full time job?

Stephen Pearson

Great chapter, thanks! :-)

David

Easier to spend someone else's money, and it was the smallest denomination rain had after all

Wolve

TFTC

Kyfe

Would also be strange to pickup a Siren, specifically, further inland when he could be picked up in the ocean.

Scion

Maybe he should exchange all of his siren money with our favorite merchant

Andrew

Thank you!

Eric M

I would say Rain was added because it is clear they need more firepower to survive what the author has planned. Likewise, given Kai’s penchant for finding odd sources of knowledge/mentors, I would guess he will eventually get around to mining Rain for plenty of skill improvements among other things. Also, Kai needs more than one friend. Wouldn’t hurt to add a few more, maybe a female or two, another non human?

Adunn

I think I might like Rain better if his introduction was done later. It’s kind of annoying that he takes up so much attention when they just arrived at the mainland for the first time. Especially since his character isn’t exactly helpful to the main characters at all. I don’t understand his addition.

Jackjargon

Rain is so excited about the new legs and so obliviously a rich kid

Ben Enz

I swear every time I try to write something I have to take a mental break after 3-4 paragraphs

Ben Enz

Anyone else impressed by authors ability to pump out constant massive chapters 4x a week? cuz I am,

Pete Magnuson

Farsea last chapter, Varsea in the title, and I think Vasea in the text. Either a good gaslighting attempt, or might need to standardize to one spelling. Personally I think Farsea fits best with the straightforward names we saw on the archipelago, but if you want to indicate etymology has developed and language on the mainland is weird then Varsea would be fun. Thanks as always!

Aceluke

TFTC!! Rain really is just some fantastical MC from another world not knowing the value of money… I am surprised at Kai spending so much on clothes but them being enchanted makes sense.


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