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Chapter 88 – The Greatest Haggler
🕑 Added 2023-08-21 17:38:33 +0000 UTCOutside the Sage Tree, a morning breeze greeted them.
“Come, mister. This way.” Flynn started walking without missing a beat.
“Do you even know where to go?” Kai questioned.
“Sure do. Merchants Terla and Revhani, looked them up already.” The boy tapped the side of his head. “I thought you knew by now I’ve got a great memory.”
You’re so full of shit I don't know what to think half the time.
“Of course, how could I ever forget.” Kai gestured to him to lead the way.
“Which one do we go first, mister?”
“Stop calling me that, or you won’t get a broken chip.”
“Where do you want to go first, my dearest friend Kai?”
“Mhmm… let’s do merchant Terla.” She got here yesterday, and it would probably take less time. The budget for her order was 12 silvers, less than half the second order. He could take the chance to test if there was some truth to Flynn’s ridiculous boasts.
“Yes, boss.” He said, taking a sharp turn left.
There weren’t many tourists around, locals took advantage of the early hour to get their errands done. A mother in her thirties was bragging about her son passing the selection to two women, who indulged her with strained expressions.
Loud voices filled the air as stands appeared on both sides of the road. Young and old people shouted the value of their wares. Gravel crunched under their feet as they proceeded down the market.
A small crowd of half a dozen people gathered around a fish seller. Curious, Kai stopped in front of the booth to see.
Taking center stage was a two-meter-long fish with a yellow fin. A thin trickle of blood poured out of the hole near his empty eye, where an harpoon must have dealt the killing blow. Faint traces of mana slowly evaporated in the air. The body unable to maintain the same energy density in death.
High-red grade at least. Killed maybe two hours ago.
The bird of prey he killed had been just as strong. But fighting a fish in his home ground added an ulterior layer of difficulty.
“If you want to buy a cut, it’s better we stop by later. Unless you don’t care about overpaying.” Flynn interjected from behind.
Kai shook his head. “Just browsing. With all those shops, I didn’t think there would also be such a large market.”
What he saw was already on par with Greenside and it kept going. Fishes and mollusks from the Shallow Sea gave way to a larger share of vegetables, fruits and agricultural products. In a proud minority, plenty of meats from Veeryd were displayed on long stalls. Small colorful parrots chirped in cages. A large rodent, like the one he fought—but not awakened—bit at the bars of his enclosure. Its destiny probably far grimmer than the cute birds.
“Shops in poshtown are for tourists and people loaded with coins. We ordinary folk can’t afford them. There’s another market in the outskirts if you’re interested. Their goods can’t compete, but they have cheaper prices and ask less questions.”
That didn’t sound shady at all.
Kai nodded along. “Maybe later.”
They left the bustle of the market for a quieter street. Flynn hopped a few steps ahead and made a short bow, beckoning him forward with a wide flourish of his arm. “Welcome to the merchant quarter, Kai.”
Painted in muted tones, the high building looked plain after the colorful market. Few windows, and even fewer embellishments. The louder sounds of life still came from the sellers they left behind.
“Well, it’s just warehouses and a few private residences.” Flynn explained. “They stay uninhabited for most of the year since merchants are often away doing merchant things. Not much actual business is done here.”
If Kai’s orientation wasn’t failing him, the shopping district in poshtown was just a few blocks over. It would have probably been faster if they went through there instead of the market. Avoiding the place was probably second nature for Flynn.
“Well, greatest haggler in Yanlun, it’s time to see your legendary skills at work.”
All the other merchants they had dealt with owned establishments around town or set up shop near the docks. These last two were different. Elijah’s list contained no information apart from names and total budget.
Three blocks over, they reached a pale green residence. The walls and gate were decorated with intricate geometric motives in darker colors that stood out even more against its discreet neighbors.
“You know, it would be a great incentive if you could spare me a small tip,” Flynn said.
“I’ll think about it after you actually do something useful.”
“My five little sisters are very hungry—”
“You should have told me your mother had twin sisters in the last hour.”
“It was a very sudden childbirth.” Flynn nodded seriously. “No one expected it.”
“Sure… Why don’t we get going, or your sisters won’t be the only ones going hungry tonight.”
“Yes, boss.”
A man with a rigid demeanor stood guard by the inner door beyond the gate, his steely gaze fixed on them.
“Hello, friend. This the residence of merchant Terla, right?” Flynn said with a friendly smile.
The man came closer and grunted a nod. His inky hair reflected a green shade against the morning light.
“Kai here has business with your master.” Flynn patted Kai’s shoulder, no hesitation in his voice.
The guard scanned them from top to bottom. The silence stretched. He couldn’t say if it was thanks to Flynn’s confidence or if he had been warned beforehand, but they didn’t get sent away.
“Have you proof of identity?” The man said in a thick accent Kai didn’t recognize.
Taking out his ID, the guard squinted at the paper.
“Wait here.” He disappeared inside and came back seconds later and opened the gate. “Captain Terla is waiting for you.”
Flynn shared a look with him, and Kai shrugged. There had been enough surprises for his first visit to Sylspring, he didn’t think Elijah would also make him deal with difficult or dangerous people. And if he did, they had seen enforcers patrolling a street over.
Awareness alerted him of someone observing. But whoever they were, they had no hostile intentions. The guard led them through the main entrance. The geometric motifs continued inside together with an herbal smell vaguely reminiscent of incense. Down a corridor, they entered a room.
A middle-aged woman with green hair a few shades lighter sat behind a mahogany desk. She raised her gaze from the letter she was writing. Her eye moved over Flynn to stop upon him. A red leather eyepatch covered her left orbit. Naturally, there was one, and only one reason anyone would wear an eyepatch.
Pirate!
“Kai Tylenn, I presume? I was expecting you. Please take a seat.” Merchant Terla greeted them with a smile and a barely perceptible accent. Her warm voice and poised attitude resembled an affable lady next door, not a raider of the sea.
Damn, I wanted a pirate! it would have been so cool.
“That’s me, pleased to make your acquaintance.” Kai shook her hand, trying to hide his disappointment.
There were two chairs, so Kai gestured to Flynn to sit beside him. Knowing the boy, he would have done it anyway. With a bit of luck, he might give the illusion Flynn was his attendant muddy the waters.
“Can I offer you something to drink? Or eat?” She offered a tray of sweets.
“I’d love o—” Kai grabbed Flynn’s arm to stop him.
“We’re fine, thank you.” He said while his companion pouted in silence.
The merchant knew more about him than vice versa. He couldn’t lower his guard this easily. She might still be a pirate in hiding after all. Scanning her with Mana Sense bore no result, or better, it made no sense. Her mana network looked clouded and bent in strange shapes.
Another cloaking technique. I should have studied the old book Dora gave me more.
There had been no point wasting time on that at the estate, visiting a town changed his priorities. Despite the enforcer telling him only people with something to hide cloaked their grades during the registration process, the reality was far different. Ironically the biggest group was among the Republic’s officials, a lot of them sent back confounding results. A significant share of tourists and many merchants did too.
Kai deactivated his skill. He might be able to pierce the veil given time and attention. However, the more focus he put the easier it was for someone to perceive his touch. Uncovering merchant Terla's grades was to satisfy his curiosity more than anything else. It wasn’t worth the risk of offending her.
There was no condescension in the woman’s tone because of his age. Kai learned green hair was a defining feature of the natives of the Shattered Isles. He only had a vague idea of where they were locate. Before he could extract more information, an attendant carried five small wooden boxes and left them on the table between them.
A crafty glint shone in the quiet merchant’s eyes. “It wasn’t easy, but I managed to find all the goods your master ordered. The pollen of an aqua lotus is extremely hard to source in this season, to not even mention the dried essence of a storm eel or the roots of—”
Kai had no idea of the nature of any of those materials, let alone their market price. No doubt it was all part of Elijah’s challenge.
Luckily, it’s not my problem. Here goes the power of delegation!
“Flynn.” With a glance, Kai let the boy take over the negotiations. Merchant Terla’s eyes shifted between them, quickly switching her pitch to the other boy. All Kai had to do was sit back and watch.
Elijah might want him to gain experience dealing with merchants. With no details given, it was up to his interpretation, and he chose to complete his task in the most efficient way possible. No one could be good at everything; Kai couldn’t imagine Elijah would disagree with delegating a task to someone more capable—unless that task was fighting.
If Flynn was a tenth as good as he proclaimed, Kai would learn as much from seeing him at work against a merchant, while also getting a better deal. Given he would pay the boy based on how much money he helped him save, Kai was confident Flynn would not hold anything back.
The mask of the friendly lady next door rapidly fell away as the negotiations proceeded. Their voices rose more heated as numbers were thrown around. Kai considered himself a decent haggler, but he never enjoyed the tedious back and forth. Especially when he was outmatched—and few people were worse than a professional merchant.
What he really liked the most was saving money. If he could do that without lifting a finger, all the better. Observing from the sidelines was fun too. Flynn seemed determined to save till the last chip. Kai got comfortable in his seat and enjoyed the show.
Is this what it’s like having people do all the work for you while you stand back and relax?
Half an hour of a sweaty shouting match later, they walked out of the residence with their goods. The final price had been 9 silver mesars, 21 coppers and 70 chips out of their budget of 12 silvers. Even knowing the butler, he must have given him some wiggle room with the money, Kai felt pretty good about it. Elijah wasn’t that generous.
Flynn was loudly munching on the sweets he somehow snatched from Terla when no one was looking.
Noticing his gaze, the boy put his hand over the stash in his pocket. “I’m not sharing.” His words came out mumbled due to all the candies he stuffed in his mouth.
Kai rolled his eyes. “Good job.”
“Oh… Thanks.” Flynn swallowed the sweets. “I had to uphold my honor as the greatest haggler the world has ever seen!”
Kai smiled at his megalomaniac friend, “Then I guess, I won’t need to pay you. What are some dirty, cold coins compared to the glory?”
“I mean, if it was just for me… but my six little sisters caught a cold last night. I could really use a little change.”
Kai extended an empty hand, hinting at his stolen sweets.
“You could have taken your own,” Flynn grumbled, putting a single pink sugar cube in his hand. Kai gave him a long look, reciprocating with a single copper chip.
“This isn’t what we agreed.”
“We agreed you’d be paid at the end. Still, one merchant to go. This was for the candy.”
“Even that sugar cube was worth more than that.”
“Maybe in a shop, but I have to take into consideration the risk of buying stolen goods.” Kai put the pink cube in his mouth, leaving behind a fuming Flynn.
Mhmmm. Raspberry. I should have taken a handful too.
After some dramatic protest, and a few tears, the best haggler in the world accepted Kai would not budge and hurried towards their destination. Merchant Revhani had arrived last night, so they hoped to find him near the docks.
The two kids made their way through the swarm of people that filled the streets. Asking around they found the Prospera—the merchant’s vessel—and tracked down the owner near a warehouse.
They were arguing with a grouchy sailor to warn his captain when an unexpected voice sounded behind them.
“Long time no see, Kai.”
A young merfolk was strolling towards him with a white pointy smile. The passersby spared him a few glances before continuing their way.
“Reishi.”
The merchant’s smile widened. “What are you doing here, my friend? You know, competent apothecaries are very scarce. Your skills must have grown since last time. What do you think about another commission, I promise you won’t lose out.”
Flynn did mention something about merfolk this morning. With all the nonsense the boy spouted, he had not given it much thought.
Should have known it was him, there must not be many mermen in the archipelago.
“Unfortunately, I have to leave Sylspring soon after I complete my master’s tasks. Maybe some other time.” Kai meant it. Last time things got a bit wild, but he also made good money. It would be nice to have some coin of his own again.
“Are you sure you can’t spare a week or just a few days?”
Kai shook his head. “Sorry.”
“That’s too bad. I guess it can’t be helped. What are you doing in front of my warehouse?”
“Your—”
“Master Reishi,” a large man dressed in excessive layers of red silk hurried from the warehouse, his triple chin bouncing with each step.
“Is that kid bothering you? What are you doing just standing there? Help master Reishi!” The man yelled at the grouchy sailor who observed the whole exchange in silence.
“Kai’s my guest, Revhani.” The merman said with an unexpected authoritative tone, then sighed lowering his voice to a whisper. “You can’t imagine how hard is to find competent people around here.”
“My apologies, master Reishi. I—”
“It doesn’t matter. Let’s go inside. Do you have time for some tea and a chat, Kai?”
“I have some goods to pay and pick up with merchant Revhani.”
Guess I might squeeze in a discount with a bit of luck.
“Oh…” Reishi exclaimed in realization. “Should have guessed it was for you. Who else would have ordered a Water sphere in the archipelago.”
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Author's notes: Sorry if I was late. Did you miss me? ;)
Last week I went through the editor's changes for book 1 (157k words - chapters1-59 for those who don't remember) and then added my own. We each cut about 2.5k words among other changes. Now I'm waiting to get the final form for proofreading. Proud of how the first manuscript turned out, but gosh was it a lot of work XD.
Comments
Andrea Pozzi
No problem. It’ll depends, some arcs will be faster than others. It’s a bit hard to answer before actually writing it. I do plan to increase the pace in certain points, but I make no promises :p
Anthony Goh
Hi, I do love the story so far. Just curious to find out if the pace of the story is staying the same pace or going faster? Personally, I would prefer the story to be moving faster. This is just a reader expressing my opinion so its not meant to be offensive.
March
Thanks
