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Chapter 72 - Consequences

🕑 Added 2023-07-17 16:43:42 +0000 UTC

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Aezy Ken

Can totally just be the System does it for everybody.

MR.K .

Sigh, still putting the best/obvious choice last ay? Smh

Andrea Pozzi

Fixed 👍🏻

Game Devil

Thanks for the chapter, one small thing though: " forty-three between cuts and bruises, plus and a big bump on the head". I think you either need to add "injuries" between 43 and "between" like my upstairs neighbor said, or just leave the word "between" out altogether. And remove either the "plus" or the "and" either will do, both is overkill. I like overkill when it involves things like explosives but when using language it's at most an annoyance so not worth spending 3 extra letters and a space.


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