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Chapter 44 - Brave or Reckless?

🕑 Added 2023-05-30 15:18:15 +0000 UTC

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Would be good to maybe indicate skill colours somehow on the actual post as it makes it a lot better in terms of readability.

Randomranter

I doubt running and swimming would merge into athletics, because Kai changed running to use mana, so until he does exact same thing with swimming, it would be weird to be offered as a package.

Aezy Ken

He's also not as strong as an Orange adult. He's too young and weighs too little. Dude's literally 7 years old. I think an average Orange adult wouldn't had a problem with it. Remember back to his sister manhandling his ass when she's just what, 11?

Aezy Ken

Moui is right there to save him if need be. That was not that stupid. It wasn't smart, but it definitely was no idiot ball. He could've asked Moui for a weapon or something, maybe, or actually carried a more useful weapon to begin with since he was gonna enter a dangerous area, whether he has a powerful bodyguard or not.

Hobbity Bobbity

Cool chapter. I was initially surprised that a red beast was such a match for an Orange person. But I suppose he doesn't have any spells, I guess that will come with his profession.

Obran

Naw. I can wait.

Andrea Pozzi

I sometime wonder if I should answer these kind of questions. It would be spoiler territory, but if u truly want to know we can arrange it XD

Obran

Also sort of wondering when Running and Swimming will merge into Athletics.

Obran

Hunting seems like a good way to increase Stealth, spear, and herbalism-related skills. I wonder if Virya is scrying him to keep track.

Ctaethaway

I thought the fight pacing was great!

Andrea Pozzi

His reaction will be in the next chapter. Right now he still had no time to truly think over what happened. It was a bit random, but Kai just imagined himself getting put there and bonking the snake on the head. Fight over.

Nathan Sto

This is fine, but it does feel a bit random. This far, I don't think we've seen kai kill anything, no display any particular inclination towards violence. I tend to think of the character more as a silver tongued trickster than a warrior, myself. Still, the fight scene was well enough written, my only holdup is that I don't know where it came from.

Andrea Pozzi

Thanks for the comment. Yeah, it was stupid, but what’s the fun in always taking the cautious route. In the end he was never in any real danger of death.

Drew Gilmour

Kai really pickup the idiot ball that scene. Maybe strong eta motivation for going into the fight might make it stronger.

Curtis

Probably the most believable first fight I've ever seen in a LitRPG. Usually its some untrained kid beating a creature far stronger than him by sheer luck. Whereas this case it was a (relatively) well trained kid nearly losing to a weaker enemy because he'd just never done this before. Way more realistic.

Andrea Pozzi

thanks, the pdf should have the colors. It's Orange anyway :)

PlasmaticPi

What color is that new skill gonna be? But good fight either way.

The fight scene was good and glad you didn't drag it out too much


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