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Chapter 36 - Taking a Gamble

🕑 Added 2023-05-19 13:43:42 +0000 UTC

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The author positions his work as a realistic fantasy, so I might have too high expectations. For example, I thought that the traders would try to kidnap Kai into slavery while he travelled to the ship. It was a very common practice in the ancient world. Such a case is directly mentioned in one of the original stories about Sinbad the Sailor. Thus, I think the author should add an explanation of why Kai trusted the merchants. Perhaps the Governor has established relative order and security on the islands and does not allow kidnapping and slavery because he believes only the republic has the right to exploit the islanders. The mention of leather armor can also be controversial. This type of armor is for some reason very popular in various computer games, but it was not popular in reality at all due to the difficulty of processing the leather. Therefore, I suggest that the author can clarify in one of the future chapters how the abundance of different magical animals with strong skins and proliferation of special skills prompted the development of this particular type of armor in this fantasy world.

Arexio R.

my favorite

Aezy Ken

Muoi is truly a teddy bear


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