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Chapter 238 - Reconnecting

🕑 Added 2024-05-25 01:29:51 +0000 UTC

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Memoryofgold

Thank you for the chapter! Lots of great moments! It looks like Kea's finally gotten one up over her brother, being able to travel to the mainland before he has lol thats some character development. I hope to see them come to terms and understand each other someday

mehmed zepcan

Tftc just caught up after a couple of weeks. That's one way to make sure Kias out of prison huge time skip. Give him PTSD, bulk him up off screen, ruin all his relationships, give him a murder kitten for shitsngigs. Definitely hilarious! DOF EYHO

Silver Beard

I can of see Kai throwing pebbles at Lou and all hours of the day and night... just to piss him off. Payback with 2 years of interst.

Silver Beard

If I hadn't paid for annual I would likely have dropped author about now. I totally agree that he's been holding the yellow stuff as hostage to keep folks paying. Definitely pushing the limit. Just hope he's got some recognizable plan that will materialize soon. Staying in the pennisula is not an option- his ID is found... no room to hide really and as n ow an Adult the Republic will not be kind this time around. Sucks skipping out on Lou and the kids, but their loyalties are irrevocably compromised.

Silver Beard

Two minds about that- likely take an entire chapter to just go through them; as this is essentially a 'new' book. There's no wishper of new class on discord, so say... worth a chapter or 2 to get it resolved.

George R

Thanks for the amazing chapter

Fortunis

Well done. I like the mix of little hints here and there. Really looking forward to seeing what his new skills are. He should have 21 slots now right?

Silver Beard

"It’s your duty as the older kitty." Feels like something he should have projected through his bond... not just internal monologue

Silver Beard

Has he retrieved his fate device. I recall he left it behind with Flynn when he got abducted?

Silver Beard

Kai find some way to complain and snark; the cat is just a stand in but one that will never go away. I have yet to see him do battle; perhaps that the boiler point. Prove his worth

marcus

I mean it was a given that he was gonna be yellow, the more interesting thing I think is new skills, levels and upgrades

walid bennour

you didn't just say that did you !!!!! i didn't edit my comment, you did , i have your first comment as an email, a comment you deleted , to accuse me of something yourself did lol and i didn't even bring it about , because i thought we were having a civil discussion not attacking each other but from this i assume you read something and understood something else and now instead of admitting that to your self you accuse me of editing my comment , and if you go look through what i wrote about breaking through to yellow you would find the word immediacy in both responses, a point obviously went over your head , it is okay to have an opposite opinion to something, you are acting like a child though, be civil with your words, what over caused this vitriol you are spewing, it speaks about you more than it does about me and for the second time why are you on about the start of the second book, i am talking about the novel in its entirety, i said so in both parts in either case , you are not someone to have a discussion with, your words does not paint you in any positive light, go bother someone else, i have no more time to waist on you

Doug Wills

I think you're reading into it. She's just saying she's overwhelmed seeing him show up out of nowhere after many of them have only recently probably gotten to the point of fully accepting his death. She was definitely not implying it's bad that he's back. She is telling him, "Hey, your actions really caused a lot of us a lot of pain. And now, 2 years later, we find out all that pain and grief we felt was unnecessary."

Doug Wills

No, but most people both do not know how, and do not even attempt to give useful criticism. They just whine cause the part of the story isn't the part of the story they like. Criticism, when coherent and thought out beyond, "I don't like this part," is great! Every author I have talked to likes getting it. Criticism with no thought that just amounts to whining is not. For example, "I don't like slice of life." Is not useful criticism. It's fine for people to not like SoL sections, but as criticism it is useless. If there is something in a SoL section that someone finds poorly done, and they can articulate it well, then that can be extremely helpful.

Doug Wills

Lol you edited your comment. Hahahaha, are you shitting me bro? You EXPLICITLY said that him hitting yellow could have been shown within 5 or 6 chapters and now it was too late. GTFOH, you post a complaint, I point out why it's dumb, and you go, "No, it's not about the thing I explicitly said, it's about something DIFFERENT, man." Your complaints are not particularly coherent or useful. Feedback and criticism for authors is good, but yours isn't even clear, and you even went so far as to go back and edit your comment to make it look like you didn't say what you said. The start of the book is OF COURSE about the drama between him and the people he chose to leave for two years. And how is it inorganic that Kai would choose to take advantage of hiding from the Republic for 2 years and saving his family when given the out? It's not even martyrdom, he just made a decision. Almost nothing at the end of book 3 was Slice of Life. So I'm still baffled how 6 whole chapters of something other than action and progression has you so upset. My main point here is this: If you want an author to be able to actually use your feedback, you need to make it useful in a coherent way. You not enjoying Slice of Life parts isn't useful. The only useful thing in any of what you've said is, "The reveal that he hit yellow ruins some of the impact of finding out he hit yellow." That is, among everything you've said, the only actual piece of information that an author could possibly get real use out of. So you should try to think about your points and make them more useful. Otherwise, the only thing you're even doing is useless whining. And I still cannot believe you edited your comment to make it seem like you didn't say what you said. That's so unbelievably ridiculous. You're being extremely impatient. This isn't about whether or not I do or don't agree with something the author is choosing to do. But if you didn't want anyone to comment on your opinion, you should have just DMed your friend.

Jordan Silvestri

I feel like Ele would never say something like that, that having him come back into their lives is a lot for her to handle? It is actually an incredibly messed up thing to say, it is implying all kinds of things she couldn't possibly mean or would never say even if she did mean them. Her leaving without trying to understand everything in the first place is also pretty out of character IMO. Makes it really hard to understand the context considering we skipped over basically all the important dialogue, but she seems like that one person in existence who wouldnt run away like that without really understanding everything and then what? Imply he shouldn't have come back? Hurt them too much already? Wish we could have seen the convo that could have possibly led to her leaving cuz she apparently left Sabe too quickly lol. She has always been the one who would feel horrible for his situation not react selfishly.

IgnisPrimus

Yeah! All criticism is bad and you should ignore all of it! The author can't make mistakes and be better. He is perfect! You are a genius, Muhammad!

ManguKing

I hate cats and how humans neglect the power of toxoplasma, but I find the slice of life as a good counter balance in the story

M_Lo

Same here

walid bennour

i am not talking about the six chapters mate , i am talking about the calumniation of the story so far, i find the author choices questionable, if you don't, good on you, but i do breakthrough is just that, it should be sudden and impactful , by telling us it already happen , it undermined the effect it could garner the author seems to like writing the slice of life part , i don't enjoy much that, i rather enjoy the progression aspect, the magic theory, and so hence my comment about the drama, a big part of the story lately became , about the drama of kai and flynn , kai and his big sister, kai and his young sister, kai his friends, kai and varla and finally the martyrdom of the mc and sending himself to the pocket world , felt forceful, inorganic, if he was tricked and found himself with no choice, that would have been more interesting

Doug Wills

It's only been 6 chapters... This complaint makes no sense. It looks like we're going to get some big reveals and such next chapter. Is a one chapter difference that unacceptable for you? Of course the start of a book that is him returning from the dead is going to be mostly focused on the drama of that return at first. It would be pretty bizarre for it to be anything else...

Muhammad A

Thanks for the chapter! You’re doing great and please don’t get slogged down by the criticism of the vocal minority!

Silver Beard

Definitely some Monroe vibes; but it's not quite so bad; but it's eating word count with is a negative. Seriously- if you take the cat and all the commentary out of the story you have a lot less and that means an even slower progression than before. Feels like a deal breaker. I paid annual, but renewal is highly questionable. The expectation was that when he made it to yellow before 14 and evolved or upgraded his class he would head to the Mainland and adventure or seek out his former Master. The pace would pick up somewhat. Now it's almost certain to stagnate with all the cat commentary.

Silver Beard

Now that he's got his family sorted out- let's get a status update. Please!

walid bennour

by this point 60 % of the novel is drama, and the rest is between progression and fantasy your choices of development are very dubious you kill his father and then you go and bring him a step daddy you put him through reincarnation and then right after the immediate benefits you make him act like a child, you introduce the idea of a pocket world , a place that could serve for exploration, to induce wonder and progression , and instead you used it as a brute hammer to break the mc , not even to harden him, and the most annoying i been waiting for him to hit yellow for over a hundred chapter and yet you gloss over that and you just mention that he broke through, i am sure you have something planned ahead, some flash back or something similar, but the element of immediacy has gone !! you could have done that in five or six chapters, the anticipation , the excitement it could have generated !!

cRoMaToR

Thanks, amazing chapter, i’m still waiting to see what he did with his profession.

Rylie Harris

ty for an amazing chapter

Gromaul

He would either have to be a complete idiot, and thus unintentionally inform someone, or do it intentionally out of some weird sense of concern. Either way that would destroy his family, so unlikely. The islander group thing sounds real tho. Looking forward to Valela and Lou finding out he's alive, they know more about what was going on so their reactions will be lit.

Viria

Was probably sarcastic

SkyGold

Great chapter!

Adunn

People really want Sabe to be a bad guy. That’s definitely not gonna happen.

Some Guy

TFTC

Abe 7

Damn, was so looking forward to Kea kicking Kai in the nuts in this chapter. Oh, well. Ele is the best big sis one could ask for. Should we feel sorry for Hobbes?

wanderer117

We mostly receive her letters every once a month or so. suggested edit We mostly receive her letters once every month or so.

Andrew

Thank you!

David Otis

Thank you for the chapter! You are such a good author!

FrozenSharkie

So Sabe and Ele got married Its obvious now that Sabe colluded with Zervathi to keep Kai trapped in the Sanctuary for two years, preventing him from interfering in his marriage plans. I see now it was Sabe the entire time. Thats what he's hiding behind his perfect existence.

A B

Edit suggestion: Well, I knew it would be easy.  -> Well, I knew it wouldn't be easy. 

Derze

Do you want the gruesome story with a likeable god or the “I still can’t sleep properly because of the nightmares” or “only sometimes I wake up screaming” but you know, quietly, cuz I wouldn’t want to scream loudly. But trust me when I say, I’M FINE. - Kai probably

PlasmaticPi

Calling it now. Sabe is gonna be the one to tell the Republic Kai is alive. Or at least everything he did in the hidden realm. I'm also guessing that either way he will be visited by a government representative within a day or two. And the group of islanders is probably Kai's childhood friends.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Emily Gurnavage

Same, lol. Such a fitting joke for Flynn and the situation. Once I think about how he is living in a house he owns in Higharbor though with a job and contacts n such there then them being married makes much less sense. But in the moment, it got me.

James Faulkner

Tftc!!

Aceluke

Yes, Kai. Tell is of your tale! I want to know too!

Emily Gurnavage

Pretty enjoyable, thanks

gigabik

Thanks!

Doctor Black

Thanks! You almost got me with Flynn being her husband lmao


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