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Chapter 234 - Just Kidding

🕑 Added 2024-05-17 22:56:25 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

I like 1 and 2, but I'm assuming 3 was to learn about runes

Craig

ok payforthat, then what are Kai's blessings? Notice how you dont know? that is because the author can still change what the blessings are because the author has not shown us the blessings yet

Doug Wills

He told me because he was saying it was really super nice of you to do all this work to help him out, and he wanted to make it easier!

Eric M

Isn’t the first wish always for more wishes? 😜

Gorane

I think teaching space magic is a certain one. Instead of 2.he probably hd the god upgrade his storage ring making its stroage much much bigger

Silver Beard

We all have a profile on Discord man/lady/woman?

PloofDoodle

psychics

FrozenSharkey

Wait how do you know Drewell sent me a DM?

Silver Beard

Barely 2 mos in; support no one. Who are you really Frozensharkie? Your profile reads like an burner phone... as in there's no substance.

Silver Beard

basically his a cat is god emperor and the man is his willing servant for life. Everything the man does is to serve his god emperor better...to better serve his 'cat'. The cat isn't smarter than any other house cat... but that doesn't stop him from trying. Ch 428 and he's only beginning to see value in a woman.

Silver Beard

I wager he needed the spirit to watch over him when he upgraded to yellow. He coudn't possibly have been in a position to protect/defend during the transition or just after.

Silver Beard

That's a lot of work; hope the author appreciates your effort.

Doug Wills

Drew says you should check your DMs! :)

FrozenSharkie

“would not be going back for all the gold” Replace “be going back” with “return even” “give him the time to” Replace “the” with “ample” “An annoying buzzing fairy” Replace “annoying” with “annoyingly” “not for [x] another couple centuries” Insert “at least” at x “thousands of reunions, he played out” Delete comma “dancing crab and, most important” Delete comma “installed over a tub” Replace “a” with “the” “Kai drew the curtain over the small window” Replace first “the” with “a” (makes sentence flow better without two ‘the’ right next to each other) “clothes he bought in Eastwin.” Delete “he” “runework was simple but solid” Replace “but” with “and” (flows better in sentence, works better with second half) “with an actual heating enchantment [x].” Insert “in place” or “installed” at x “Kai placed his sea serpent sword leaning” Maybe Replace “placed” with “left” “but he had to settle” Delete “he” “his legs hung over” Replace “hung” with “dangled” “woke him from his revelry.” Replace “revelry” with another word, since the mood seems to be of him calmly relaxing, not loudly partying in the bathroom. Maybe with “relaxation” or “trance” “His reflection looked back” Replace “looked” with “stared” “didn’t get why people kept” Replace “get” with “understand” “were hidden beneath his shirt.” Replace “beneath” with “underneath” (beneath implies scars are any distance below the shirt, while underneath implies scars are closely under the shirt, more specific term) “facial hair was in that awkward limbo” Replace “was” with “remained” “decided to shave them off with” Replace “them” with “it” “Most natives of the archipelago didn’t” Replace “of” with “in” “unraveled under his gaze and skills” Delete “and skills” “at his kitchen cupboard” Replace “his” with “the” “before he glanced behind” Replace “he glanced” with “glancing” “stay away from the deep water” Replace “deep water” with “depths” “The stingy bug.” Replace “The” with “That” “but it wasn’t that bad afterward” Replace “but” with “though” Can replace "afterward" with "afterwards" (Though its only American vs British spelling) “warned me [x] where to stay away” Insert “of” at x “the rest [x] was a matter of running” Insert “simply” at x “he better keep that story” Replace “better” with “decided to” “a dozen golds in your” Replace “a dozen golds” with “at least a dozen gold” “strained, [x] still kept looking” Insert “as he” “They’re worth half the content of the safe.” Not sure how to fix, but recommend rephrasing this sentence. “chunk of the [x] two years” Insert “past” at x “I did almost miss them” Replace “did almost” with “almost did” “You don’t need to lie [x]” Insert “to me” “they met in years” Replace “they” with “they’d” “grown more than [x] in height” Insert “just” at x “is bound to disappoint” Change to “will lead to disappointment” “They chatted idly about how Higharbor had changed while washing the dishes.” Change to “While washing the dishes, they idly chatted about the changes in Highharbor.” “Lou were fine too” Replace “too” with “as well” “new habit when he was thinking.” Change to “new habit he picked up.” “explain why he had ended up trapped and taken two years” Change to “explain how he ended up trapped there and why it’d taken two years” “yellow beasts pour into the archipelago” Replace “pour into” with “swarm” “look, looking about to pull him” Replace “looking about” with “ready” “allowed to be not okay” Replace “be not” with “not be” “it wasn’t [x] that bad” Insert “all” at x “opened and closed his mouth” Replace “and” with “then” (continuity of single connected action, rather than addition) “you can grow a second head” Replace “can” with “could” “They could also be teal or green.” Replace “They” with “It” (Generally for animals, “it” is used for unknown gender, switch to gender he/she known) “they change every time I see it” Change to “it changes every time I [look OR see that cat]” “That pest always causing” Replace “pest” with “pest’s” or “pest is” “mischief. [x] That’s where you’ve gone.” Insert “So” at x Maybe replace “you’ve gone” with “you were” “one yellow and one blue,” Replace “and one” with “and the other” “Tell me you’re seeing it too.” Replace “seeing it too” with “also seeing it” or “seeing it as well” “such a perfect chance” Replace “chance” with “opportunity” “devious beast had [x] made him believe he was imagining things too once.” Insert “once also” Delete “too once” “In the second Flynn turned” Delete “In” “heavy stress can cause hallucinations.” Replace “heavy” with “severe” “Taken some unknown substance?” Change to “Consumed any unknown substances?”

FrozenSharkey

"He raised his royal eyes on them, one yellow and one blue," Predicting that Hobbes is Green-grade (halfway between yellow and blue)

Atlas Dwarf

Guessing his three wishes went something like: 1. Teach him Space Magic (or answer all questions he has of magic in general). 2. Tell him all Feats/treasures possible in the Hidden Sanctuary (would explain why he didn't just hunker down and study magic most of the time). 3. Right before he leaves, get another basically 1/3 of his power blessing from the last 2years.

James Faulkner

Nah, I’m pretty sure it wasn’t blessed swimmer not working lol. This reads to me like there are horrifying late yellow/early green monsters in the ocean

Atlas Dwarf

I mean Edgar still has Kai's Orange-1 star cloaking pendant, so he needs to visit anyways to deal with that.

Atlas Dwarf

My guesses assuming he focused on Skills that can/might help with magic: 1. Shadow Magic 2. Earth Magic 3. Multicasting 4. Upgraded version Decoding 5. Quick Memory 6. Inner Calm 7. Vigilance or a quick skill grind spot Profession Skills (assuming he pushed to Orange and got extra Skill slots): 1. Herbology equivalent for magic memorization 2. some form of elemental conversion

Gorane

I mean even with blessed swimmer hebcould be afraid of the deep watwr, as it hs more danger

Doug Wills

I don't really want to read the whole story. What's the issue with the cat?

Doug Wills

He leveled it quite a few times.

Silver Beard

Rereading for the 5th time... ofc... and I noticed when he was talking about avoiding deep water. I suppose his Blessed Swimmer skill stopped working in the Hidden Sanctuary? Or did he drop that one too to pick up a survival skill?

Silver Beard

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/35398/monroe

Wolve

TFTC

Gorane

?

Silver Beard

I don't mind a cat; but if this is another Monroe type- I'm dropping you!

Doug Wills

Cat can teleport. It probably beat him through the portal. Hahaha

Silver Beard

The merchant could probably leverage the information on the hidden Sanctuary to offset most of his loss. Think of it... the mers would have a good idea when the hidden realm will be accessible and can plan. They'd know who they needed to appease, etc.

Doug Wills

I don't think he'll be angry when he learns a person indebted to him is now a yellow mage at age 14.5 with what are likely priceless artifacts. My guess is he'll be thrilled. Especially when being kind to said person indebted to him (a debt he likely thought he'd never get back after he died), and a person he likely considered a friend, is back from the dead. So from almost every angle this is amazing for Reishi.

Random Information

Hobbes has obviously got the "Find Pet" skill, which allows it to teleport to its servant when he gets lost.

Silver Beard

An Island full of yellow beasts- not every one can be a predator; at least not to start. Good chance some would develop intelligence over dexterity to stay hidden. Just happy it chose Flynn; if it had latched onto his family...that would be ugly.

Gwalmeich

Did the cat really need some help with its obvious spatial affinity?

Austin

The princess is probably on the mainland in a mage school, at least that was her plan. I could see him reaching out to Reishi. I know the merchant will be angry but idk if he can blame Kai who was basically kidnapped by the Republic.

Silver Beard

bigger, more advanced storage device

Gorane

Very good point, he had to get the cat out somehow and a bigger storage device makes sense

George R

Thanks for the chapter

Silver Beard

No mention of his former Employer yet. He's in Highharbor... I wonder if he'll risk a meeting with the Princess, Edgar, Lou, or the Merman (who likely holds him on breach of contract or something!)... Who first.

Silver Beard

Missing the Elephant in the room. When he exited the portal back from the Hidden Realm there was no mention of the cat. So does his ring now stash living things too? Perhaps one of his wishes was a storage ring upgrade or possibly something he found on the island? What else is in there now- is it bigger? If he's been hunting Yellow beasts for 2 years it must be stuffed with good stuff! Or could it be he's learned the runes for space and combining his Space Skill and his engraving skill, he's managed to make his own spatial storage device...with a little help from the Spirit? Now that would be cool and a definite money maker now he's back.

Silver Beard

Likely had to pick up a Math skill or supplemental Space Magic skill to handle all the variables with opening a portal. I wonder if that's one of the things he asked for from the Spirit...an upgraded level skill.

Silver Beard

It does make me wonder how he hasn't come against any of the Republic Enforcers or Soldiers yet. If people are noticing him, he's standing out which is not good. As was commented before- hoping for a FULL status update on Monday. Wonder if he managed to test the extent of his space affinity or if the Spirit gave him a number. The wait!

Connor Hinrichs

He can quickly level a red profession as yellow race grade,and a better one would provide a better foundation for future profession upgrades

Silver Beard

@Connor - Why would he want a Red profession after ascending to yellow?

Petro Lima

Hobbes the Destroyer, the dwarf tiger

Morog T Tiny

Now he has something more to trade for Edgars training. What would Edgar give for some of his knowledge. My answer is a great deal, but first he has to see his mom and his sisters.

Morog T Tiny

I wonder what kai has for a stat sheet now?

Morog T Tiny

or it could require extreme circumstances

Gorane

You can find every skill in the book from here: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1sY8kKh1f0mhAFqPvE5zEPGcBBlkYP2hdVTVqK7TBT7s/edit?usp=sharing Inner calm basicslly lets you make better decisions, regardless of danger or pressure. It also has a weak pain resistance component

Connor Hinrichs

Ah, you're probably right, it would have come up already if they existed. A man can dream though😅

Gorane

If companion skills were a thing you'd expect to have seen or heard of them before so I am leaning towards no

payforthat

The wishes have already been used, quote from part of the deal. "I meant what I said.” The fairy enounced with condescending slowness. “Before you leave the Hidden Sanctuary, you may beseech me for anything within the established constraints."

Craig

Kai is already yellow before finishing puberty, 100 years is not a long time. Besides, oathbound not to attack and personally invested in flourishing are two different things

luke eustace

Butchery / hunting would be useful, and butchery could upgrade to animal processing for alchemy and hunting could upgrade to something interesting as well.

Connor Hinrichs

But using a blade of water to shave is beyond what he could have done before the sanctuary

Connor Hinrichs

I forgot he got a skill called inner calm, remind me what it did again please? For your certain skills, you need to add shadow magic to the list, it would have been invaluable for stealth in the Hidden Sanctuary

Connor Hinrichs

I wonder if Kai has a Companion skill for Hobbes, that perhaps has mutual exchange of traits. So, an increased affinity for Space, enhanced balance and reflexes for Kai, and then Hobbes could have an increase in intelligence and maybe gain an affinity for shadow or something. It could also just be that Hobbes likes Kai and has decided to stick around

Random Information

Can't wait for Hobbes to get its paws on that luck artifact.

Random Information

Surely it's a tiger. Mandibles of death, etc.

Gromaul

That one girl was rude because he was stalking Flynn, everyone else is staring and given his description its likely because he is becoming very handsome as puberty really kicks in.

Gromaul

Cmon. It's because he looks good. He looked good as a cute little kid and now puberty has hit and he is a very young adult. His tan skin has gone pale because of the fake sun same with his hair. He looks amazing that's why they are staring XD

Gorane

If we are talking about his current, post-sanctuary survival skills, then Certain skils: *Multicasting *earth magic *inner calm *some sneaking skill Temporary: *survival 2 left so maybe they are: *advanced decoding (he did study the runes in the sanctuary) * steady runner (he did say he ran away a lot from the monsters)

Gorane

Eeh he could dry himself with water even when he was only orange 1, i dont think it is impressive

Ananiash

: )

Gorane

Your interpetation seems possible, however it seems more likely to me that the author wanted to say "previous specialisation" and used a very similar, but different, word instead

Gwalmeich

I think the reason people are rude with Kai is because he has some sort of stealth skill that he forgot to deactivate which messes with people's perception of him. I would be rude too if I couldn't focus on the person talking to me.

Gorane

I think Kai would have been a good enough engraver with his yellow skill to make himself a yellow grade hidding enchantment before he left the Santuary. I think people are looking at him brcause he is super buff and is radiating danger

Gorane

Zervathi cant hurt kai since he is still bound by his promise to not hurt humans intentionally for the next 98 years. And I am going to guess the island spirits would intervine if another god tried to attack their protegy/investment

Gwalmeich

I think it's because people can't magically sense him. If you think about it, he would never have survived in the secret realm without finding a way to conceal his magical and physical presence.

Memoryofgold

I see Kai also got a yellow-rank gaslighting skill lmao

Gwalmeich

The cat is obviously the mightiest god of Elydes. What made you think that the master of all could be defined by some silly concept such as "grades".

Gwalmeich

We definitely saw some of his skills in action during this chapter. Most notably his precise water manipulation and mana sense. It shouldn't take long before we discover the rest.

Gwalmeich

What cat? Are you sure you are not suffering from schizophrenia? You have no cat named Hobbes.

Doug Wills

Same!

Emily Gurnavage

I agree with the people talkin bout it not being possible anymore. He surely got a crap ton of levels during this time, and he should have more mental stats than its possible to lose at once and survive like that doctor was talking about before. I bet either hes stuck with it, or something I cant image offers an alternate solution of some kind.

Eric M

The only way he got rid of Mana Child is if he Zervathi took care of it with one of the wishes. And pretty sure he couldn't avoid evolving it unless he didn't kill anything. Although, personally, I think it evolves into something truly impressive, especially given all he has accomplished with it. However, given his comments on how many runes he was able to view and learn I think he would have earned to much profession xp to avoid evolution, unless he can just continue to refuse to evolve it and thereby artificially keep it at red. As dangerous as that place was, I doubt he would have foregone immediate gains on the possibility he survived to see some greater reward.

Eric M

I wonder if he has any green skills yet.

Adunn

Yay a cat friend! I like how Kai has matured. I’ll admit I’m a but sad we didn’t get to see when he crossed over to Yellow but I’m hopeful for a flashback for that moment.

Felix S

Can’t wait for Monday. Great chapter!

Nurgle

So Hallowed Intuition is most likely above level 75 since Kai mentioned its “last specialisation”, implying there’s more than one. I wonder if his water magic is at yellow yet?

Colton Admire

All i can think at the end is Kai-Lou-Flynn and Hobbes

Austin

I think he was offered a pain resistance skill at one point so it's possible

SAB

If they exist a purely defensive skill, like Magic Resistance, Tough Skin, or Regeneration.

Petro Lima

Lol, my cat's name is Hobbes too!

Drakken17

I don't think he can discard it. When they were doing Flynn class discard the preist mentioned classes that focused on mental attributes were worse to discard. And with the boon to mama I think he would basically cripple himself

Fleisch

I am on the fence on whether I want an actual update or more of a conversation/fight where we can figure out his stats and skills. I really want to see his status but as a writer I wonder if it would be better to reveal it through action?

Austin

Maybe a crafting skill? If he had to create everything from scratch from clothing to swords it would be useful. Something that could potentially synergize with alchemy and engraving? It'd be cool if he could eventually craft spatial objects.

David

I want him to visit Edgar again and unravel his enchantments

Austin

Yeah I was thinking decoding or one of the other orange skills he earned opening the box.

Eric M

Yes, loving the cat, and have the same question others do - what's it's grade? I assume it's an adult, but please confirm! This next book is starting out fantastic! Great approach!!

Batres

I love how you're handling the awkwardness between them, it feels so correct

David

Decoding, he must have raised it to orange and used it to decipher runes. I'm wondering if he upgraded his profession or if he left it at orange and still plans to discards it

Adam

One or two potion skills potentially a guess is something to pair with his sword skill such as a movement skill because even just one extra would help him stay a spell blade that leans more towards magic but better at least than the average warrior focused class/ individual

Abe 7

Poor Flynn! I feel for him. Damn cats! They are our evil overlords.

A B

Edit suggestions: thousands of reunions, he -> thousands of reunions he

Connor Hinrichs

Admittedly, a valid argument can be made to keep Mana Child, as it's skills really are excellent. However, I cannot help but imagine what kind of awesome Mana based Red profession he could get now with all his skills so much higher levels and all his major affinities having dedicated general skills, and not just water and nature anymore

Austin

Guesses on Kai's new skills? We know space magic. For his 7 after reaching yellow I'm guessing: 1. Shadow Magic 2. Earth Magic 3. Multicasting 4. An additional perception skill 5. A stealth skill 6. Rune adjacent skill 7. ???

Alex Galaitsis

I beg to differ. Mana child seems awesome and I bet it evolves into something unique.

SAB

I wonder if people are staring at him because they can tell he's already Yellow as a young teen. His obscuring necklace (if he still has it) doesn't work past Orange, and hiding his grade probably wasn't a priority in the Sanctuary so he's probably forgotten to resume doing so.

Connor Hinrichs

Since Hobbes teleported there at the end of the chapter, I think it is safe to say that he is at least mid yellow, with room for growth

Doug Wills

Probably walks around like The Predator after two years in there. Hahaha

Emily Gurnavage

Omg, a CAT survived that place? This cat has to be: - peak-yellow - low-green - a low-yellow baby of something horrifying once it grows up Cant wait to find out which

Lola

Great name :)

Andrew

Thank you!

EVillarreal

TFTC! I'm happy about the animal companion

Connor Hinrichs

So, confirmation of Yellow race grade, as expected. Now I'm just hoping he didn't upgrade his profession, and can still discard Mana Child to get a really awesome base profession to build his future path upon. Kai's social skills are so messed up, this is hilarious 😂 hopefully he can recover, probably with the help of a Social Skill. I'm not sure I understand why people were staring at Kai. He says he has some light scarring that was mostly covered up by his clothes, so what gives? Also, did Hobbes teleport? A space affinity cat with Kai having Mana Child and using Mana Echo sounds like a brilliant way to quickly improve his Space affinity skill level and figure out the freeform casting patterns for Space relatively quickly.

David

😂 Great prank with the cat! Bit annoyed we have to wait longer to see his updated status tho, I really want to see his gains! I'll admit tho, it's a perfect chapter build up in the book

Hammy

Him and the cat must get along swimmingly hahaha

Brandon Lydick

Kitty

Bosparan

Thanks for the chapter! And a truly diabolical joke ^^

Craig

I dont know if the author has already planned out the blessing for Kai in the story, but I wonder if there was an opportunity for "wishing for more wishes" so to speak. The god has to be after more power right? What if Kai got some way to Siphon power to the god (that would not normally be available to the god) and then be able to redeem 50% of the power gained to get more blessings/improve what he already has. The reason why i think something like this is important is because right now the god is highly incentivized to get Kai killed. after all, he owes Kai up to 30% of his power for wishes. If Kai can gain the god power, the god has a material selfish reason to keep him progressing.

Aceluke

Awwwh kitty! I approve, everyone needs a pet

James Faulkner

Excellent chapter haha, ty!

Austin

Thanks for the chapter!


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