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Chapter 230 - The Hidden Sanctuary 

🕑 Added 2024-05-03 22:59:55 +0000 UTC

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Emily Gurnavage

Nooo lol. How dare you title this one hidden sanctuary but we dont actually see it yet. Oh well. It was a wild ride nonetheless and I have enjoyed this Arc a good bit. Edit: Just realized there is another tier above me with chapters... argh, so tempting. But already spending like $50/month between authors lol. Might do it though. This is a very tempting time.

ManguKing

Be great if this dimension had a different time frame, so while on the archipelago two weeks had gone by, within the dimension 5 years had gone by.

Sean T

Love the story but just honest feedback, there's something about this scene that makes it not so satisfying. It just felt super obvious with the way Lou tagged along and the kind of slightly cringy recent interactions between them before this ruin dive that makes it somewhat predictable Lou is gonna come to the rescue and just makes the MC feel quite dumber than he should be. Just sharing my thoughts.

Silver Beard

I think the Demigod will the gatekeeper and the Republic better play nice with his jail breaker.

Silver Beard

Kai will get contribution credit; at least half the kill was his.

Meowgrr

Hope we get the next chapter today! (if so, Drewells is really burning some midnight oil!)

Eric M

I don't get the impression Zervathi is that impressed by Kai, but maybe part of the reward is some training by Zervathi, meaning he would need to stay there for a bit, and the republic would eventually stop looking for him? Maybe he picks up a green skill as part of the deal, and hits another favor achievement before he hits 14. I mean you are owed a reward from a deity, the author can slide in anything outrageous and if it's awesome we will all line up to sing his praises! 😜🤣👍

Elle

This was a great time to join patreon

Fleisch

I don’t think he would get anything from killing the basilisk. It is a mid yellow grade which he has already got an achievement for. I bet Lou did get the credit because he probably hasn’t killed a yellow tier beast. The system doesn’t measure by grades(A,B,C), hummans made that up.

Hoopsterben

I’ve had some thoughts on the potions that help raise kids to orange at birth. In a xianxia I read a while ago, there was something similar, ambient mana in the world you were born changed the rank at which you were born. But the sects always recruited those from lower worlds more intensely than those born of a higher level on a higher world. Why? Say each rank is a mountain, one person was born half way up the mountain and fought and struggled to the top, one person was born in the caves below the mountain, and had to struggle and fight to top. Which is more impressive? Obviously the one who started lower. So this is my long winded way of saying the potions are mistake. And anyone seriously trying to be the best would do without them. For an average person? They are great.

Jedlák

With artifact inside the gate and the god getting free they probably wouldnt have a way inside either way.

Rah

Yunm

Gabriel Medeiros

I was thinking Lou got the credit

Gabriel Medeiros

Somehow i doubt freeing Zervathi is as simple as it was made seem

Crapgeezer

What a great chapter! I laughed out loud multiple times 😁

Crapgeezer

He would, though it doesn't need to be mentioned in my opinion

Silver Beard

The great spirit promised Kai not to harm the humans if they left it alone; but if attempting to harm its 'blessed' pisses it off- I suspect all interest in Kai will become benign. Especially if it's determined that he's received 3 blessings. Seyonne's career is toast for involving him at all; nobody can afford to discount this kind of attention. Subjugating the blessed is a very bad...especially a child. Now three Great Spirits are watching their 'child' would be more than enough for most, if not all, to run for the hills and pretend he doesn't exist.

kalmarin

I hope Kai shuts the door on the realm so that the republic can't have it.

IgnisPrimus

Idk "sizable time skip" in my mind is over a year. I could be wrong of course.

Silver Beard

And it would make an epic alchemy ingredient or possibly a powerful antidote. Kai's nullifier is going to run out eventually. He'll have to make his own.

Silver Beard

It's core. Sure there other beasts that will consume the corpse; but anything that get the King's core will likely become another King. Mayhap a slightly weaker one- still

Silver Beard

I could see him skip if it meant Kai eludes Republic incarceration. Just because he disappears I doubt the Military is going to forget and forgive in any number of years.

Silver Beard

Maybe we'll get a peak next chapter. What are the odds it requires the mortal strength of a yellow grade human to break the prison? While I'm sure Kai would rather have a blessing... a quick ticket to yellow wouldn't be rejected.

hello there

No exp, feat or achivment for killing basilisk?

Gorane

I really doubt this timeskip will be more than 1.5 years, since there is no way the author will skip him getting to yellow

Noah

I am happy about the time skip, I feel like him being a child is contraproductive for the story

James Faulkner

Well the republic isn’t gonna think that the Basilisk dismembered itself lmfao

George R

Thanks for the chapter

Aaron Weingrad

I suspect the pocket realm is going to close once the god is freed. Or in any event I don’t think the republic will have control which will absolutely crush the general’s career.

James Faulkner

Tftc!

Fleisch

I think he would grab claws or teeth after he deals with Zervathi.

Malcolm Haynes

Kai stuck in mystic realm for 10-years. Time skip!

Immutably Empty

Those teeth would probably have made a great set of daggers for Flynn.

SAB

I feel like Kai would have taken a few moments to get his sword and at least one souvenir (a claw?) from the basilisk.

nicolas

And providing increaminating evidence for any investigator of the republic ?

Kris Piskorski

Can't wait for the timeskip and the power ups

Andrew

Thank you!

Some Guy

TFTC Time skip incoming :)

Gorane

Minor suggestion, but Kai could have tried to fill a glass vial with Basilisks poison. I think it would be really satisfying, cuz each time he uses it in the future we would be reminded of this scene

Kris Piskorski

I mean lou could have grabbed a dozen or so scales from the basilisk before going back

nicolas

Very good arc, can't wait for the next one ;)

Brandon Steele

I feel like he would have.... but yeah it should be mentioned one way or the other

nicolas

He stay hidden or ventures outside the republic. I think I would prefer the second option as it is more proactive. (Now that he has escaped if he is caught his punishement might be far worse than military service (even worse if freeing the god end up collapsing the republic's super precious hidden realm)) Edit : @Gorane option also works : something happens to Seryne and no one knows that he made some deaply illegal stuff appart from Makyn who should not snitch on him for no reason

Gorane

I think we shall see his high favor in action and something crazy will make it okay. Seryne did techincally break rules aswell so it might be possable she will be arrested. Since she and Makyn were the only ones who knew about Kai's rulebreak, if Seryne is busy being arrested and Makyn doesnt really care to snitch, then Kai would be in the clear

George

I'm super excited for a timeskip!!!!

Connor Hinrichs

Is the time skip going to be the mandatory military service? Because I'm failing to see how Kai gets out of that predicament

Bosparan

Thanks for the chapter! One typo though: > very stupid plan that ended up seceding. Preettty sure that was supposed to be "succeeding", not "seceding" ^^

Jim Hall

Did he grab his sword?

Kronos

Perhaps elaborate on this sentence a little bit: “Then the branch snapped as the basilisk lost its grip.” Maybe make it “right as the basilisk lost its grip”

Kronos

👀

Eli Loeb

Tftc!

Steph

TFTC!! First reply 🤠


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