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Chapter 215 - The Expedition

🕑 Added 2024-04-05 20:53:47 +0000 UTC

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mehmed zepcan

Sonia is clearly part of the resistance

mehmed zepcan

It's crazy how much the mood changes from chapter to chapter One chapter he's being interrogated by a spy of a tyrant gov The next he's trying to bribe his guard with candylike wtf

Abe 7

Now, wouldn't that be nice... lovely twist

Gorane

@Game Devil in the QnA this was said: "The main factor that determines lifespans is the race grade, even if some professions and higher Constitution also influence it in minor part. At Red grade it is not much different from ours, at Orange it is around 150 years, if they are in good health. Keep in mind, your average human commoner enjoys far fewer comforts than people on Earth, so they often die sooner. As for the higher grades, it’s complicated. Advancing to the next color increases your lifespan based on your physical age. If someone at death’s door manages to advance to the next grade (and somehow survives the process) they’ll at most gain a few months. The younger you are the more you gain. Human children grow at about the same rate regardless of their grade, as they get closer to maturity that slowly changes. At around 20 years old it’s when the differences in the aging speed become obvious." I originally thought this meant that race grade didnt matter before the age of 20, but indeed your interpetation seems a bit more valid. Kai should indeed be very motivated to get to yellow ASAP then

Gorane

Yellow was mentioned this vhapter and orange in the authors Q&A a while ago

Game Devil

Nice, I didn't know the age ranges for orange and yellow were mentioned before. Thanks!

wanderer117

The math on this is interesting. Slower aging doesn't kick in until puberty, which I'm going to call 13. At Red, with luck and good health care you can live to around 100, but I'm just calling it 100. That means you have 87 years of life after puberty that can be increased with a higher grade. Orange isn't much of an increase, 100->120 means a factor of 1.23 more time [(120-13)/87]x100. Yellow is a bigger jump lets say 100->300 meaning a factor of 3.3 more time [(300-13)/87]x100. So 6 years at orange would be ~4.9 years of a possible 87 while 6 years at yellow would be ~1.8 years of a possible 87. So at 20 Kia would have 3.1 extra years modified by his grade, or around 10 additional years of possible life if he never rises hid grade to green. We don't have numbers for green grades but so far the pattern is 1->1.2->3.3

George R

Thanks for the chapter enjoy your break

TheAverageNerd

Mon, Tue, Thur, Fri

Aryan Dugar

What's the update schedule? I am new here

gray matter

With how Sonya dotes on Kai and rambles with knowledge and also seems to be stronger than she should be. It would be interesting if she is Dora in disguise.

Game Devil

Remember that those 6 years of difference might mean decades less lifetime compared to making yellow at 14 and that is only if you stay at yellow, if you keep being slower by 6 years each grade it might mean centuries difference at blue. And looking at the available elixirs it wouldn't surprise if in some advanced kingdoms the children of elites might even be born at green grade. That's a lot of time they have to reach even higher grades. The differences change from additive to multiplicative once grades don't add a set amount to lifetime but start slowing aging at the end of puberty (which might be later than 14 if the system doesn't interfere with that). And that is not even taking into considerations that there might be elixirs and techniques available to slow aging even further, and if you have access to those at a young age the numbers get even bigger.

Game Devil

"Zervathi promised a safe passage to the Hidden Sanctuary if I got to the Altar of Covenant." Odd, I remember no such promise, is this an assumption based on the supposed safety and feasibility of the task he agreed to? Still not paranoid enough Kai :)

Game Devil

"No one had come from him that night. Already jittery for the expedition" for and from in these 2 sentences should change places :) Thanks for the chapter and do take care of yourself, no one will do it for you.

SkyGold

Lovely chapter!

Gorane

"Thankfully, he would get access to several if he advanced his race, a couple centuries at Yellow if he reached it early in life. " sounds like a weird thing to say, since even if decided to take it super easy for the next 5 years and only earn 20% the average xp per the last 24 months , he would still make it to yellow before turning 20. Even if he is not confident in yelliw before 14, he should be confident in yellow before 20.

Gorane

Respectfully, think you should take more time off, since the last two weeks the chapters have been extra riddled with grammar / phrasing errors. Id rather have you rested and writing well than clunky chapters. This is a good story and Id hate for you to burn out

Wiggles1

“What a funny couple.” -> “What a funny pair.” Unless they're dating

wanderer117

Hmm… should I ask her about what’s the deal with Annyl? should be Hmm… should I ask her about the deal with Annyl? While attributes were the attributes, a higher grade only lengthened the time you had remaining. should be While attributes were attributes, a higher grade only lengthened the time you had remaining. or While your attributes were your attributes, a higher grade only lengthened the time you had remaining. Chatting with Sonya helped stove off the boredom. should be Chatting with Sonya helped stave off the boredom. How many yellow professionals do you need to bully any red monkey? could be How many yellow professionals do you need to bully a red monkey? I'll inform the vanguard I’ll be joining the scout for today. should be I'll inform the vanguard I’ll be joining the scouting party for today.

xxmaniaxx2019

I'm surprised you didn't take a week off. Shirtaloon usually takes the whole month off when he edits his books for kindle.

David

It is nice to see Kai getting Maken to bend protocol for him for sweets. He is human!

nicolas

Yes, no need to tire yourself and burn out. It's better to pace yourself when you need it :)

James Faulkner

Tftc!

David

Tftc!

Andrew

Thank you!

mechanizedbush

Tftc! "come from him" -> "come for him" "was saturated with mana" -> "was saturated with mana and" or "saturated with mana"? "Sonya’s barter" -> "Sonya’s banter"

TheAverageNerd

Breaks are good! Enjoy your monday break and relaxation ❤️


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