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Chapter 203 - The Lesser Evil

🕑 Added 2024-03-15 20:15:05 +0000 UTC

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TheSeasAsleep

Thanks for the chapter and for taking the time to build varied characters with varied interactions, a world where it isn't a one way street for the protagonist only. Kai is gifted and hardworking and has gotten used to high levels of success without significant interference. Seeing his interactions expand to more experienced/worldly people with little to no motivation to aid him, forces Kai to see the same behaviors and bravado that got him to this point need to adapt as he learns how to operate amongst the wolves here in preparation for when he must mingle with mainland wolves later.

Aagness

To offset some do the comments, I want to compliment this chapter. It's nice to see an escalation in stakes as well as an increase in political involvement. One thing I like about this story is the consistent portrayal of competent adults as actually competent. It has been established that higher their ppl can estimate someone's grade by observing their movements, so it would have been unrealistic to assume that Kai would be able to maintain that specific facade. (Though, due to having double layered concealment enchantments, he still has that secret). Additionally, I like seeing world building that takes into account what a government would actually have to do to maintain control in a fantasy setting. Sure, it might be a bit frustrating, but it really adds to the anticipation for when Kai finally has an option to make full use of, and display his skills to the world.

IgnisPrimus

Shown* And just because the story is not moving at a fast pace does not mean it has to be frustrating to read. Why can't you comprehend that?

Ananiash

People really want this power fantasy... from the start it was show how slow paced this story is...

Sam A

Kai’s personal grade and proffession development have nothing to do with the investigation - it’s not part part of the pact. Kai should have said this, obviously he’s not going to just spill all of his knowledge and secrets because he agreed to “no more lying about the investigation” . This was a misplay, but I’m sure his nerves were high.


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