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Chapter 199 - Politics

🕑 Added 2024-03-08 20:52:03 +0000 UTC

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pipMcDohl

"I guess it is compared to the other sites it is" twice it is

wanderer117

Some wore common clothes, others had colorful robes with no matching. should be Some wore common clothes, others had colorful robes with no matching style. Huh, you probably want to settle in, so you can show you what you brought! should be Huh, you probably want to settle in, so you can show us what you brought! Kai flung himself to the empty side and set down his backpack. could be Kai flung himself onto the empty bed and set down his backpack. Sure she doesn’t waste time. should be She sure doesn’t waste time. My dad followed its own brand of chaotic order. should be My dad followed his own brand of chaotic order. “Oh, that’d be amazing,” she beamed then her shoulder slumped. should be “Oh, that’d be amazing,” she beamed then her shoulders slumped. He never had anyone to share or talk about past civilizations since his dad died. could be He never had anyone to share or talk to about past civilizations since his dad died. He hadn’t seen anyone spying on them, though spies probably didn’t walk around with a bell around their neck. should be He hadn’t seen anyone spying on them, though a spy probably wouldn’t walk around with a bell around their neck. or He hadn’t seen anyone spying on them, though spies probably didn’t walk around with bells around their necks. “It’s quite a sight, isn’t it?” Sonya shielded the sun with her hands. should be “It’s quite a sight, isn’t it?” Sonya shielded her eyes from the sun with her hands. The mana density was too low for any red beast, not that it would pose a danger either way. could be The mana density was too low for any red beasts, not that it would pose a danger either way. //Also, this is a bonkers thought to have given that yellow grade beasts are attracted to these sights, and Kia knows they are coming in via spatial warping. After ghosting him for days Lou sauntered up to him like nothing. He saluted the guard and without meeting his gaze. should be After ghosting him for days Lou sauntered up to him like everything was normal. He saluted the guard, without meeting Kia's gaze.

M_Lo

It's crazy to think that we Earthlings have buildings even older than the Astaire ruins with Göbekli Tepe

Kendelle Trotter

The chapter got edited so the quote that was annoying people is gone now.

Vyle

So many people seem to hate Lou. Just want to voice my opinion that I like him. Don't really have a problem with any of his behavior so far. He seems to be on Kai's side and doesn't seem to be pro Republic like some people seem to think. My guess is he has seen some ugly parts of the Republic during his work. The only worrying part is the contract that he's under.

Draega

Oh maybe the ruins aren’t actually cities they lived in and are instead some sort of trial ground that self populates monsters to fight.

Draega

So do we think there’s like underwater ruins and some unlucky monsters are being transferred from one ruin to another? Or are the ruins reaching out and grabbing monsters? It’s hard to imagine a reason to intentionally summon monsters into some random looking rooms. I guess they could be malfunctioning.


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