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Chapter 157 - Friendly Sparring

🕑 Added 2023-12-21 20:25:31 +0000 UTC

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wanderer117

Lou knows something is up, but maybe not what we know is happening. Are there face stealers in this world?

wanderer117

Sitting outside the ring beside Ana and Kai watched the duel in fascinated silence. should be Sitting outside the ring beside Ana, Kai watched the duel in fascinated silence. or Sitting outside the ring beside Ana, Ana and Kai watched the duel in fascinated silence. With neither side willing to retreat, the fight devolved into a close quarter. should be With neither side willing to retreat, the fight devolved into a close quarter brawl. or With neither side willing to retreat, the fight devolved into close quarters. Two and fifty hundred at most and the archipelago is made up of islands. could be Two hundred and fifty at most and the archipelago is made up of islands. current wording means that the republic is at most 5002 x the size, which sounds wrong in context but might be right? Lou said without any resentment. You won fair and square, your throw would have been a much more serious injury than mine.” should be Lou said without any resentment. "You won fair and square, your throw would have been a much more serious injury than mine.” I’d be polite to ask. should be It’d be polite to ask.

Brandon Steele

It is looking like Lou is figuring out Kai... Looking forward to the next chapter.

Connor Hinrichs

Lou has been acting very suspicious for the last few chapters, I'm just wondering if this is a misdirection and he is actually assessing Kai as an anti-Republic ally

Mech Hand

Kai is screwed.

Mistfate

I wouldn't say that i don't trust Lou, but I do find him a little suspicious. Especially witht he fact that he is in the special program, he is the main suspect for something to go wrong.

Disclancer

Yes! As a gubernatorial agent he's probably the one used to kicking in legs! The villains motives revealed!

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He wants to get revenge for being kicked in the leg.

ZaA

Could be he's in the elite class for the governor that we heard about a while back too though. Better benefits.

David

"came to offer him his longsword". I think you just mean sword. And adult longsword would be impractical for him at this age and everything prior to this indicates an average sword

George R

Thanks for the chapter- I love these guys so much

Disclancer

Hmm, been alot off talk about specially trained republic agents, truth seekers and the like lately. A republic "special program" sounds mighty suspect to me.

Ananiash

I think otherwise, out of all of them I thing he is prob the only one that does not trust republic (we Got hints too, like this "special program" that he is on that others dont know details about)

HeartHawk

Well thank Yatei he's fooling them so handily. Nobody suspects anything at all. Everyone has the wool over their eyes. Phew.

David

Thanks for the chapter! I like how Kai is handling the sparring, limiting himself to technique only to get practice out of it while still trying to win. He'll give a good showing of himself without giving too much away

Eric M

I think Lou knows Kai is holding back, and intends to make him reveal more. They are all clearly drinking the KoolAid to some extent, so this could go sideways on Kai eventually.

mechanizedbush

Thanks for the chapter! "beside Ana and Kai" -> "beside Ana, Kai" "hide his physical" missing abilities? or attributes? "I’d be hard to hold back" -> "it'd be hard to hold back"

Gio

Kai's high mind stat is winning the spar :p

Disclancer

I don't trust Lou at all

Andrew

Thank you!

Malcolm Haynes

First! TFTC! Now the moment we’ve been waiting for - Kai vs Big Lou.


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