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Chapter 154 - Reunion

🕑 Added 2023-12-15 20:24:43 +0000 UTC

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xxmaniaxx2019

Wooohoooo! They are back! I am eager to see what manner of shenanigans they will perform now that the islanders rangers have reassembled.

mehmed zepcan

Thank you for the chapters sorta wished kia would tell the truth at least about his dad and situation up to the mentorship

Louis Cypher

I really hope he has the foresight to hold back his skills with them. There’s always the chance his friends will let it slip to unsavoury individuals.

Broseph

I think that's just part of Kai's character. While he has lots of grit, cunning, and a stern demeanor, I think acting as a cool detached pragmatist in that situation would be incongruent with his usual behavior. He's somewhat childish and impulsive at times, despite his relatively excellent maturity for his age.

George R

Awesome chapter

Andrea Pozzi

cut 3 of them :)

Ziggy

Careful, you're starting to overuse "truly." It quickly loses any ability to emphasize when used too much, and it popped up five times this chapter. Easy to catch in a bunch of ways, even just using ctrl + f.

Gromaul

Eh, he was being too delicate with what happened (pirate attack) in my opinion. Could have simply acknowledged that the governor has reasons for downplaying the attack, and told his friends to not bring it up with supervisors unless they wanted to get in trouble. Would have shown where he stood without them worrying about if he was a rebel.

Malcolm Haynes

You sir are excellent at capturing the feel of relationships. Kudos on a another outstanding chapter. Now want to see Kai put them in their place when they start “comparing” skills. Also feels like a little foreshadowing for a time when Kai is on the opposite side of a conflict…

wanderer117

So is Kia planning to take it slow letting his friends know the true him, or is he going (to try) to go all secretive and let them discover his true talent by accident?

wanderer117

Not a chance. Kia is many things but subdued and humble are not among them.

wanderer117

He had a low rumbling voice, and patches of beard grew on his chin, not many but natives didn’t have much facial hair to begin with. could be He had a low rumbling voice, and patches of beard grew on his chin. Not many hairs but natives didn’t have much facial hair to begin with. Standing proud, Kai squared off the three of them. should be Standing proud, Kai squared off with the three of them. He’d preferred they didn’t have anything to do with the Republic, but they had benefited from the training, no doubt. should be He’d have preferred that they didn’t have anything to do with the Republic, but they had benefited from the training, no doubt. or He’d prefer that they didn’t have anything to do with the Republic, but they had benefited from the training, no doubt. Kai remembered the first selection in Sylspring when she met that strange girl. should be Kai remembered the first selection in Sylspring when he met that strange girl. His stories about Verryd elicited a particular fascination. should be His stories about Veeryd elicited a particular fascination.

Andrew

Thank you!

Rylie Harris

thanks for the chapter

Pierre-jean Samaran

Thanks for the chapter !

Charles Owens

His skills are absolutely going to leak to the governor(ess) through Lou talking about it in his special class. Not to mention that if they repeat what he said about the pirate raid's death true damage then they he is going to attract the wrong kind of attention.

Silver Beard

Might be hard to avoid showing off...too much.

Sodium

Is he gonna have to hide his true skill levels from them too?

David

It will be so fun watching Kai show them up when they train together and compare their skills. Thanks for the chapter!

Ved

First!!


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