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Chapter 146 - Departure

🕑 Added 2023-12-01 19:54:12 +0000 UTC

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Shouldn't he leave with Kea since she has a rebel past ?

mehmed zepcan

Totally agree but I don't feel like him reading his father's notes is also just nostalgia you know?

wanderer117

I've been assuming we'll run into his side of the family once Kia reaches the mainland. IDK about the ruins though. Kia doesn't seem to have any advantages in archeological investigations / he isn't spending his time in that way. Maybe once his race is yellow and he picks up some additional skills?

Doug Wills

I don’t keep track or dig. I just have a brain and pattern recognition my guy. I think it’s important not to have an inflated sense of self importance. And me adding “edit” after would do nothing if you loaded the comment up pre-edit. Don’t be a silly goose.

Thaabit Rivertree

So, in the future, it might be helpful if you add an edit notation cause the first version of your comment that i responded to was like the first third of what it is now. So my comment is in response to that. Or just add a new comment pls. I know sometimes edits need to happen for whatever reason (I've accidentally posted before I was finished typing before, for example) but I don't know if your new paragraphs are responding to my comment or something you just added without reading my comment (i think this is what happened?). Either way, I said 'nuff in the last one. If you really want to dig through and find all my comments, have at it dude. You'll see there are positive ones, and plenty that aren't negative.

Thaabit Rivertree

The fact that you keep track of my comments is a bit much dude. I don't have an exact percentage in mind, but I do post positive comments. I don't post "thank you for the chapter" style comments normally, because I find them mostly redundant. I'm supporting the author with my money, that says more than a tyftc comment imo, though i have posted some before. Most of my comments lately have been neutral, unfortunately you seem to intepret anything that's not glaring positive as negative. You also seem to take personal offense at my comments, which makes me scratch my head.

nicolas

Agreed :) As long as she doesn't become a yandere :p

Doug Wills

It's not about it mattering. Or about being critical. Criticism is fine. But no, you don't post when you like things. I can grab your last 30 comments and show you if you want. It's always you complaining, at BEST you say something like, "Well, at least ___," it's just bizarre to me. Every single comment is a paragraph+ long of you complaining. It's not a matter of offense. And you are talking to me. I don't talk to Drew about comments, (Unless there's a question asked that I might ping him for on Discord). Finding your comments worth correcting =/= being offended by your comments, by the way. Just because I talk to the guy sometimes doesn't mean I'm literally speaking for him. I "spoke for him" in the past because I saw a comment and asked him on Discord, and then he responded with an answer. The reason I asked if you ever say anything that isn't a complaint is because you legitimately just don't. Every single one of them is a complaint, and it stands out to anyone who likes to read the comments to see what people are talking about.

mehmed zepcan

Better that then a mini monster

Timothy Pressey

Sirens have been mentioned an awful lot, that's where my money's at

nicolas

Fair enough. I didn't thought it through and always assumed it would be "Indiana jones style" runes with power ups inside, but, as you said, his research might have absolutly no relevence in making Kai more powerfull and just be some random things xD

mehmed zepcan

Also, I thought the main reason why he didn't go with his teachers was cuz he was sure he would probably die because he couldn't protect himself

mehmed zepcan

Lmao for sure but I was thinking less on him as a person and more as how important the ruins were like. Indiana Jones had to fight off Nazis from getting artifacts when I say his story and I'm like was any of his job even worth the time to come out to the islands other than the importance of preserving history

nicolas

Kea has become a tsundere xD

nicolas

+ if he left with his teacher he wouldn't be able to see his family for many year (if ever), but now he will be able to return one's the danger has passed or they can come to him easly

nicolas

considering he died from a random bandit, I would assume he is more a scholar then an Indiana Jones

George R

Thanks for the chapter love sea voyages

Thaabit Rivertree

Well, it apparently matters to Doug and others and it matters to me. Also whining? Far from it. I just know some people really dont handle criticism well (even if what I commented wasnt necessarily negative, but could be intepreted that way), and dont want to mess up the authors creative process. My goal is to share my reaction but also to give the author some feedback so they hopefully can improve the story. If it ends up hurting the story, it misses the point. Anyone can chime in and tell me they disagree or agree. Guess you don't care about the subject of my comments then. Congrats. Edit: I just want to point out, (when responding to Doug, who consistently replies to any of my comments that could be construed as critical as if he's personally offended), it's a bit confusing cause I don't know if he's representing himself or the author. He has legitimately represented the author in the past so I never know who I'm really talking to. Also, if you're so upset by my comments, why not just ignore them and move on?

ThrowMeALime

It's definitely rushed, but I think I'm ok with that. For plot purposes, it works I think, since Kai is literally fleeing for his life\safety.

Ananiash

Before he didnt needed it and now they can be in danger... what is so hard to understando?

Ananiash

It mostly about you whining about shet that does not metter, like Mothers are people too and people are different... she may be making strong face now and after can start crying behind closed doors...

wanderer117

Apparently, his mother had been buying him clothes while he wasn’t aware. could be Apparently, his mother had been buying him clothes he wasn’t aware of. could be Apparently, his mother had been buying him clothes while he was asleep. A talented child will attract less there, but you need to tread carefully. should be A talented child will attract less attention there, but you need to tread carefully. Embarrassment kept his hand. should be Embarrassment kept his hand still.

Morog T Tiny

umm.. he let his teachers go because he didn't want to leave his family behind... now with a lot less impetus he leaves his family behind.

mehmed zepcan

I def vote for the friendly talking whale lol

mehmed zepcan

Not saying that the revenge plot and all that was a footnote. That was really cool and I enjoyed it a bunch My thing that I was just wondering about is was his father more of a historian or something closer to Indiana Jones? Lol

Thaabit Rivertree

I'll put this here, if drewells would like me to stop posting any kind of critical comments, I'll stop, just reply or dm me. I get some people don't do well with criticism, and it's totally understandable if it becomes a bother. One thing I would like to see at some point would be another Alana pov chapter. I did enjoy the Flynn pov one.

Eric M

Great chapter! Any chance we can have an encounter at sea? Although that wouldn't be ideal as Kai might have to show a bit much again...

mehmed zepcan

Not to be nosy (⁠ʘ⁠ᴗ⁠ʘ⁠✿⁠) are there future plans for the whole fathers stuff side of the story or is that going to just be a random footnote?

mehmed zepcan

Okay, now that I've read the chapter at first I really thought kaya was going to let him leave with a snort and because of that I hoped she fell in a horse's stall . Now tho I believe it was a good till next time moment. My only gripe is that he's running away to hide in a bigger haystack. Instead of or with extra something cool like he was reading his father's research/ archaeological notes about a site steeped in mana /rare herbs near the big city

Andrew

Thank you!

Nikolai Beckel

She knows that she's talking to an approximately 30 year old child, she knows he's precocious to the extreme, she knows that it's going to happen and she knows she could stop it but that it would only hurt their relationship, as much as she doesn't like it, she just has to accept it.

Thaabit Rivertree

People, mothers most of all, are not always logical when it comes to their children. Also, I do post when I like things, but I also like to point out things I think might need a bit of massaging so the author can make it a better story. Do you always run "defense" instead of letting normal readers chime in? From what i understand, youre a beta reader or editor? You act as if nothing the author writes could ever be improved. If thats your opinion (referring to your comment about the story), I'm glad to hear it, and I don't mind being wrong if that's the case, but I think its important to get feedback from normal readers.

mehmed zepcan

Thank you for the chapter. I haven't even read it yet, but you get a like simply because of the MC joke never change cx

Doug Wills

That's exactly what's going to happen. Reishi is basically sponsoring his move, and they discussed picking the deal back up (though changed) a few chapters ago.

Doug Wills

She's used to him not living at home. He's basically lived at home for a few months total in the last 4+ years. She also knows he lived a previous life. And genuine question, do you ever post anything that you like? Or do you strictly hold yourself to the standard of posting negative things?

Pierre-jean Samaran

Thanks for the chapter !

Doug Wills

He hasn't. They talked about changing up how it was going to work a couple chapters ago. The deal will simply function differently. Reishi is all but sponsoring him to make the move. There is a 0% chance Reishi is not going to be working with Kai on alchemy still.

David

I agree, I expected him to send all the equipment to high harbor and set up shop there.it would make them both money, give Kai an alibi, and a good base of operations. Maybe it will still happen in the coming chapters, scouting out city conditions and locations before sending expensive equipment also makes sense

0gain

Yeah, but it fits perfectly because Kai is rushing to get away. I also like it because I am hyped for Higharbor :)

Thaabit Rivertree

I expected more tears from Kai's mom... but she must have suffered quite a few shocks to be so accepting so soon. Almost bordering on unrealistic in my eyes, but I guess in other cultures and for a hyper competent kid, it miiight work. Well, hopefully he doesn't attract the wrong kind of attention in higharbor.

Thaabit Rivertree

I'm honestly surprised Reishi gave up so easily on his alchemy deal with Kai. It sounded like he'd invested a lot of money on equipment that he wouldn't make back for awhile, and potions seemed to be a lucrative business.

PlasmaticPi

I'm betting on a friendly magical whale encounter instead.

Paul R

I already like the captain

I feel this whole thing was a bit rushed, but it could be just me

Ottstop

Kraken fight when?

Crème Renversée

Of course Drewells like to play with its food (us). It was naive of me to think we would have some info concerning annyl xD

Captdeth

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