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Chapter 145 - Linked Fates

🕑 Added 2023-11-30 20:52:56 +0000 UTC

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Wow her name is annyl? Sounds like a fun girl :D

MeYouIt

Flynn is such a good character

Andrea Pozzi

fixed

Wiggles1

On a narrative level, I can see Kai's giant tower of Favor making her unsuspicious. It's *plausible* they've avoided trouble. But Truthtellers sound like they're extremely good at what they do, and the Republic is clearly out for blood. They are not bored cops inclined to give you the benefit of the doubt- they are inclined to pick at every vague suspicion. They are likely trained to detect when someone is technically telling the truth while evading the question, and notice any phrasing that stands out, even if it's a stretch. If this was real life, I'd assume they plan to investigate further. This may lead to eg pointed questions to people they interacted with, tracking who had access to documents the rebels might have used, or visits to Kai and Flynn.

ZaA

i did go to ann-ill but after i said that name i was like.. its kinda close

Doug Wills

I would tend to agree. If anything, I think his responses make Kai more interesting, not Flynn.

Timothy Pressey

Tftc, have to say I'm really enjoying the chapters from Flynn's pov

Blake Noyes

I think those are some stretches there. He said things anyone would say. Lots of people would leave town if said town was just ransacked and they were having nightmares about it. Everyone in town saw enough action to have nightmares, especially those who live in posh town like he does. He was truthful about moving because his friend asked him to and since everyone knows about the rebels, it makes sense to think they went farther than expected.

Wiggles1

That right there is a truthteller. He knows which numbers are in which buildings, and can walk her to the correct one. How would someone moving their luggage in know that? Why wasn't he on the ship with her? I doubt there's another ship that just got in. She knew he was moving out. And dat strength stat. He told the truthteller that he quit because his resourceful best friend asked him to go to Higharbor, even though they don't have anything lined up- but he's sure they'll figure something out. That means his friend isn't going there for something, he's getting away. She knows they're skipping town. He told her that he saw enough action to have nightmares about it, and that he'd thought about the rebels. In particular, he "couldn’t believe they would push themselves so far". He was thinking of the rebels like individuals instead of a vague collective. Bingo. He knows rebels.

George R

Thanks for the chapter

Ananiash

Flynn pretty much confirmed that...

nicolas

That seems like a high grade skill. She is probably only yellow and I don't think that mind reading should only be yellow

Andrew

Thank you!

Doug Wills

In my head I pronounced it "Ann-ill". That didn't even occur to me, hahahaha.

ZaA

Dang. Don't think he let anything slip, but now she might have reason to look into his friend. Also. Is it just me having trouble not smiling at her name though? I know when I make stories I sometimes turn a word into a name, so.. hard to take anal seriously

Thaabit Rivertree

Who wants to bet that was the truthteller? Or maybe a truthteller in training... I mean she did keep pushing the topic. I just hope he didn't just make Kai sound suspicious. I guess they're gonna be together for a while then. I don't know if I thought Flynn would be a passing character but I have to admit I didn't see them becoming true friends who relied on each other. Still, I guess that makes it more interesting. Always good to have someone you can trust.

Ananiash

If she have some skill that lets her read betwen the lines or lil bit of mind reading the they are a lil bit fucked

wanderer117

IDK, probably not an ideal interaction but it depends on the level of her powers (assuming she is the truthteller.) Full on telepathy reading surface thoughts and he's sunk. Can only detect mood / direct lies and he's fine.

wanderer117

He had almost made him to the door when a young woman with auburn hair in a pixie cut entered, struggling to carry two bags. should be He had almost made it to the door when a young woman with auburn hair in a pixie cut entered, struggling to carry two bags. She was older than him but looked still shy of twenty. could be She was older than him but still looked shy of twenty. Annyl gathered lifted bags without any effort, moving out of the only exit. should be Annyl lifted her bags without any effort, moving out of the only exit.

Deathhead

He's going to make the philospher's stone

mehmed zepcan

Thank you for the chapter solid twist on the truth teller

Brandon Steele

Those questions... definitely suspicious His response look good to me, but we don't know how their skills work.

Arakrin

Thanks for the chapter :) She is the truthteller xD and he just ducked up

Eric M

Ugh, I still feel like the truthteller got too much out of him, I'm sure her skills are terrifying.

Stephen Pearson

Ha! Thanks for the chapter:-)

xxmaniaxx2019

Thanks for the chapter! Big changes coming up for Kai. Is this the beginning of the great alchemical war between Kai and the other alchemists?

Pierre-jean Samaran

Thanks for the chapter !

Nikolai Beckel

something about conversations with nefarious characters that have truth-telling abilities really gets my blood pumping

Ambrose

The tension! The SUSPENSE! Omg thanks for the chapter.


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