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Derideal 10-20
🕑 Added 2022-10-07 14:34:18 +0000 UTCthe original page I thought it was so bad... that I basically re-draw this entirely :c
and almost every page in this episode was so dark!
I also took the time to divide their environments by color, so the panels would be also easier to tell which side, Ivory is standing in a orange-lit hallway
Alpha's room is mostly dark and bluish with night light
Comments
AndrΓ©s Barra
Lies! They obviously wanted both to be together (?) π
Dakkota
Both versions look good, and it's cool to see a bit of insight to that! Though, I gotta say, they didn't technically GIVE her a partner lol
Memsys
I know right!
Kit Foxboy
Kind of a fine line between edgy, apathetic, and brooding, huh?
Kit Foxboy
I love her infatuation and his uncertainty in the face of it. It would be a rush of possibility to meet another of your kind when you've been alone for so long.
AndrΓ©s Barra
yeah, he feels more uninterested
Memsys
alpha comes across as more edgy in the original x3
AndrΓ©s Barra
yeah, that's the general idea heh, the old pages are so bad sometimes :c
EunosMiata
I like the change to partner. And also the new updated page does look better. Keep it upπ
